Uzumaki Meeting Place: 2 (Zee and Jayy)

With her legs wrapped around the branch, her eye's lined up exactly with her cousins

Then, in the time it took her cousin to notice her position, another two hand seals had been completed.

The skin on her face would morph into a steel plate, take on the properties of steel, leaving her eyes staring directly into her cousin.

greed would say as he saw Lust take control of the fingers and snap them in only seconds. As their cousin would appear on a branch, before Envy had been able to look up at her the bubbles from before would once take their lives leaving a giant bright flash in the forest.

((Hit called. I stated that our eyes were on the same level, and that I looked directly into you. These two together show that our eye's were already meeting. Therefore, the "before Envy had been able to look up at her" part would be void, since this was already happening. Therefore, the actions that are based off of the timing of THIS action are voided. So, the bubbles exploding, a direct result of the snapping, are voided, since they are based on an action you could not have taken. Anyways, the jutsu does not take eye contact (you can check the anime, Kakashi is looking more chest level than eye level (the pedophile -3-)). In addition, the hand seals were completed before I would have been noticed. So, even if the bubbles had blown up, and even is Jayy would have been able to look up at me, the seals would have been completed before this motion was even thought about being preformed. Seeing as the first sentence of J's quoted states a few seconds, I will state that the burst happened after the jutsu was cast. So, the bubble blew up AFTER I cast the jutsu. The sentence in which he states I arrive on the branch, the bubbles blow up before he can look at me. This could mean he noticed me as they blew up, and I will take it as such. Meaning that, by the time they blow up, he is already caught in the genjutsu. To the branch not being destroyed: First off, Huge branch, able to easily withstand the weight of a human. Second off, the branch reaches down from above on a tree that would have been missed by the boulders. The large boulder would have snapped it a little, but it would have mostly been pushed out of the way. This little snapping led the end opposite the tree to be lodged into the earth upon snapping back, but in such a way that both the tree and the part of the branch would supply support for Yin's body mass, meaning that it would not bend much, if at all, at the introduction of such a minimal amount of weight. On the boulder: Big, Heavy, Brittle.

If you disagree with any of this, realize I have more, and I also have stuff that relates to a separate part of the post that would be voided in a different way, if it had not been voided by the fact that you are caught in a genjutsu))


Yin saw as the genjutsu caught. Then, she saw nothing but white. She felt her body swinging through the air as a blast of light pushed her forward, her chest and face hitting the branch on which she hung. Thankfully, the explosion was not enough to cause any serious damage, even at the range Yin was hit at. So, even the flung body of her cousin would hit the tree, but not be hurt much. The bubbles had exploded behind Yin's head, and to the left and right. It would be enough of an angle for the light to reach her Cousin's eyes, but her head would protect her own eyes from the majority of it. She would still be slightly blinded, but she would have enough sight when she hit the branch to see it and grab it with her arms, as the grip of her legs failed. Her cousin would hit the tree, and be caught in the genjutsu, experiencing his worst fear, each and every one of them. Once her eyesight had returned enough. She jumped down from the tree, landing on her face, and reverted the skin on her face to normal. She started shaking out her limbs, getting the stiffness out that the sudden jolt of the explosion had caused. “Jayy, you fucking fool,” she would whisper under her breathe, before walking away. No, not walking. Something else. And, not truly away. First it was closer, and then it was farther. A quick stop, as a puff was left where she had stood, and now, at the entrance to the compound, a small pipe held in her hands. It took all Yang's might to convince her not to crack the pipe over her knee. Don't do it, Yin. Why the fuck not? He attacked us. Cause I got mad. About him being so weird. It's fucking retarded. He's fucking retarded. He has no order to him. The Seven Sins. Bah. They lack balance. Yin, that does not matter. He is our cousin. That pipe is important to him. Look, if you break it. He will be even madder. We already trapped him in a genjutsu that we have no clue how to break. Yin, for once in your life, think about someone else. Fine. But, if he uses this against us again, I told you so. With this, yin dropped the pipe and sauntered into the building. She would leave her cousin to his nightmares, and the people who had been watching, moving right past her uncle, at a speed he would not even notice.


792+430=1222

Jayy's body had been thrown back but not enough to wake him from the dark nightmares that his own cousin had given him, the things he saw were gruesome to each of the sins, they were horrible and nothing else could come through his mind as people not only disappeared but also everything became one, everyone had everything, peace was sent through the land, no war, and no war to start. He could't sleep, he could only watch others rest and watch them enjoy their beautiful dreams. How long was the dreams going to last, was there anyway for him to get out of the horrible things that came to past in his mind. As all he could do was scream for his life, all he could do was scream for help from his cousin or maybe even his father, someone had to come and help him, anyone had to come and help him.

(was short)

*cough* bump *cough*

6 JP

Oh... oops. I did the training in two parts. After 2000 words, I started a different count. Total words is actually 3200 ._.

Correction: 3200+ words done, 16 JP awarded.