- EsdeathCitizen
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Battle To Become The True Heir Of The Throne(P)
Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:18 pm
CHAPTER ONE:Return Of The Queen Of The Damned
The day was calm the morning sun shone down on the estate of the hoshimuras. This was a day everyone was relaxec and that peace was finally here even if it would only be for a day or two. The main point is it was peaceful above all else and that the Royal family can go about there business. The wind breeze was gently as it hit the skin of the royal family members the smiles they shared was warm as if there souls was on fire. As the people of the family walked on the ground of the household. In another place where the princess relaxes was her Makina Hoshimura she was heavily guarded as she was in a meditating type state her eyes was sealed shut. Across her lap was both of her blades as she sat there concentrating on her inner world where most of her training ironic take place. Her hair was down her back as she would begin to focus as everything she learned had to come from a source. Her mother spoke that her source will be known if she begun her training instantly. What could be the source behind the Hoshimuras power well she was about to find out.
Colors begun to swirl within her mind as she could feel her body was being sucked into a vortex in her mind. She seemed to be spit out into a room of complete and utter darkness. "Where am I?"she would say under her breathe. "You must be confused little girl"said a voice Maki never heard before. The voice belonged to a older woman for sure but who could that be?. Maki would look up from her downed state her eyes widen as far as they could go as the woman step forward. It was her Grandmother Claire who stood before her looking down at her."G...g grandmother but i thought you were dead"Maki would say trembling in her voice. Claire had her arms crossed looking down at the girl who she seem to be related too."Well i am...but until your strong i will personally train you in this world"she would say grabbing the legendary Diamond edge at her side as the world begun to change once more.This time they were in a dome right in the center as Claire held her blade to her side the sun making the blade shine with utmost beauty."Now get up Makina Revy Hoshimura"
Maki would begin to stand to her feet her body feeling heavier then anything at the moment she had no idea what came of her.She would look at Claire looking at her blade as she held her own as it remained in her sheathe. She would look at her blade as she inched her foot out into her stance. It always been a dream to go head to head with her grandmother.Claire would look at her with her left eye as the other was covered by a eye patch she would run forward quicker then even Kurokon could move. Before she could even react the blunt side of the sword had made contact with her stomach as she was sent back by brute force since claire wasn't aiming to kill her. Maki back will slam so hard on to the wall of the dome she literally bounced off of it. Next was she hit the ground screaming in pure agony from just the brute force. "is that really all you have.."Claire says sounding disappointed in her overall. Maki was holding her stomach as something she never witnessed before it was fear. Maki would slowly get up staggering side to side as she picked her sword as she breathed heavily as pain course through her body.
"You should let other you take over she seems more then a heir then you do"Claire said bluntly. Maki would grip her blade tighter as she charged at Claire as she would be at her rage point cause of that comment. As she attempt to swing her blade to hit claire but of course with her superior speed she duck and begun to strike Maki torso with constant jabs making her be forced off the ground. Th!n place her palm on her stomach releasing a chakra infused burst. Making Maki cough up blood and sent meters back since the attacks was at half power after all."did.....she just use taijutsu..."Maki was losing it she was definately no match for the woman.She would hit the ground agin blood coming from her mouth as she laid there struck by how much stronger her ancestor was faster. Is this the power she suppose to unlock to lead her family to salvation this moment she knew she had to continue fighting. But she was at a huge disadvantage what could she do about that she was weak but even she knew she couldnt give up.She would slowly begun to raise her mind was slowly disappearing.
She would look up a smile ear to ear as she would start to laugh insanely as Claire smirked at the sudden transformation."Your what i was looking for"she says as Maki charges her. The timing couldnt be even more perfect as both swung there blades at the same time clashing there blades together shattering the ground below."Give it to me...Give me pure bliss"Maki would laugh as she said this as she continued to swing her blade out of control hitting diamond edge constantly not letting up as Claire remained emotionless during it completely."So this is what my blood cursed you with"Claire would say in her mind as she kept on the defense for now allowing Maki to have her little insane fun for now. Maki would co tinue slamming her blade down as she was faster now then before Claire couldn't help but smile this time as she remind her of herself.But she had to end this she would let one of the attacks go pass her sword as she would move to the side as Reiki popped in her other hand as she would swing it to send a wave of chakra. Which ended up colliding with maki making her black out from the pain. Claire would sheathe both blades"You have a long way to go Makina"She would say before fading away returning maki to the real world. Where she is passed out and bruised completely.To think this is just the beginning......
Wc:1062
The day was calm the morning sun shone down on the estate of the hoshimuras. This was a day everyone was relaxec and that peace was finally here even if it would only be for a day or two. The main point is it was peaceful above all else and that the Royal family can go about there business. The wind breeze was gently as it hit the skin of the royal family members the smiles they shared was warm as if there souls was on fire. As the people of the family walked on the ground of the household. In another place where the princess relaxes was her Makina Hoshimura she was heavily guarded as she was in a meditating type state her eyes was sealed shut. Across her lap was both of her blades as she sat there concentrating on her inner world where most of her training ironic take place. Her hair was down her back as she would begin to focus as everything she learned had to come from a source. Her mother spoke that her source will be known if she begun her training instantly. What could be the source behind the Hoshimuras power well she was about to find out.
Colors begun to swirl within her mind as she could feel her body was being sucked into a vortex in her mind. She seemed to be spit out into a room of complete and utter darkness. "Where am I?"she would say under her breathe. "You must be confused little girl"said a voice Maki never heard before. The voice belonged to a older woman for sure but who could that be?. Maki would look up from her downed state her eyes widen as far as they could go as the woman step forward. It was her Grandmother Claire who stood before her looking down at her."G...g grandmother but i thought you were dead"Maki would say trembling in her voice. Claire had her arms crossed looking down at the girl who she seem to be related too."Well i am...but until your strong i will personally train you in this world"she would say grabbing the legendary Diamond edge at her side as the world begun to change once more.This time they were in a dome right in the center as Claire held her blade to her side the sun making the blade shine with utmost beauty."Now get up Makina Revy Hoshimura"
Maki would begin to stand to her feet her body feeling heavier then anything at the moment she had no idea what came of her.She would look at Claire looking at her blade as she held her own as it remained in her sheathe. She would look at her blade as she inched her foot out into her stance. It always been a dream to go head to head with her grandmother.Claire would look at her with her left eye as the other was covered by a eye patch she would run forward quicker then even Kurokon could move. Before she could even react the blunt side of the sword had made contact with her stomach as she was sent back by brute force since claire wasn't aiming to kill her. Maki back will slam so hard on to the wall of the dome she literally bounced off of it. Next was she hit the ground screaming in pure agony from just the brute force. "is that really all you have.."Claire says sounding disappointed in her overall. Maki was holding her stomach as something she never witnessed before it was fear. Maki would slowly get up staggering side to side as she picked her sword as she breathed heavily as pain course through her body.
"You should let other you take over she seems more then a heir then you do"Claire said bluntly. Maki would grip her blade tighter as she charged at Claire as she would be at her rage point cause of that comment. As she attempt to swing her blade to hit claire but of course with her superior speed she duck and begun to strike Maki torso with constant jabs making her be forced off the ground. Th!n place her palm on her stomach releasing a chakra infused burst. Making Maki cough up blood and sent meters back since the attacks was at half power after all."did.....she just use taijutsu..."Maki was losing it she was definately no match for the woman.She would hit the ground agin blood coming from her mouth as she laid there struck by how much stronger her ancestor was faster. Is this the power she suppose to unlock to lead her family to salvation this moment she knew she had to continue fighting. But she was at a huge disadvantage what could she do about that she was weak but even she knew she couldnt give up.She would slowly begun to raise her mind was slowly disappearing.
She would look up a smile ear to ear as she would start to laugh insanely as Claire smirked at the sudden transformation."Your what i was looking for"she says as Maki charges her. The timing couldnt be even more perfect as both swung there blades at the same time clashing there blades together shattering the ground below."Give it to me...Give me pure bliss"Maki would laugh as she said this as she continued to swing her blade out of control hitting diamond edge constantly not letting up as Claire remained emotionless during it completely."So this is what my blood cursed you with"Claire would say in her mind as she kept on the defense for now allowing Maki to have her little insane fun for now. Maki would co tinue slamming her blade down as she was faster now then before Claire couldn't help but smile this time as she remind her of herself.But she had to end this she would let one of the attacks go pass her sword as she would move to the side as Reiki popped in her other hand as she would swing it to send a wave of chakra. Which ended up colliding with maki making her black out from the pain. Claire would sheathe both blades"You have a long way to go Makina"She would say before fading away returning maki to the real world. Where she is passed out and bruised completely.To think this is just the beginning......
Wc:1062
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Re: Battle To Become The True Heir Of The Throne(P)
Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:20 pm
I look forward to the continued series, Approved for 5 Stats, 10 JP.
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