- shin ukieyCitizen
- Ryo : 500
the day with bandits wip
Fri Jun 19, 2015 9:27 pm
shin is looking for something to do hes looking for a fiet thet will take the bordom off his mind so he looks for a band of bandits he took a wook in the woods shin fins a small path he beagans to fallow it untill he see a lone bandit shin looks all aerawn him thars no budy aerawn so untill eh sees a small camp sit so shin wats untill thhhhare all uslleap at aevawt 1.45 am. shin sneaks into the camp sit he fins 5 men he fins a strand of rope he sneacs over to the bandit and strangolls him as he faedid aewaey shin snapt his nik and dragd him aewaey into the bohis and set the forist on fier as the for bandits came out of thare tents thay codin see any thing as shin snuk up beahind them he ran as fasst as he kood as he well polling out his kuniey severing hes spin shin kiks anurther a nuther own into the smok shin runs strat at the bandit as he got in frunt of it as shin snapt his nice shin grabd the did bandit and throu it at own of the to bandits he wus nokt out shin kikt the last own and nikt hime out and bared thin alive and got out of thar
- Akihana AkariCitizen
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Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 223500
Re: the day with bandits wip
Sat Jun 20, 2015 1:58 pm
Once again, please take care of your spellings and grammar when making IC posts. A few typos are no big deal but the issue seems to be consistant in this case. If you need help getting a spell checker or links to online spurces that can help you post more coherently, please feel free to ask. <3
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