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- Near The ArrogantCitizen
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Resonate River, the man known as Near had made his way away from the cart and the crazy man, he needed a break from traveling with such a man and not even getting time to think to himself. The cart seemed to of given him a kind of vibe that pride never took a liking to since the first day that they met. Pride had caused a ruckus in the mind of the young boy trying to rip through the barrier and take over the boys body just to rip the cart into two. Uttering words in his mind abut something that seemed to have occurred way back in the days that even he had not been living in. The cart had stopped a few fifty feet away for near to take in the scenery of his area and the creepy things that lurked in every shadow of it. Near would continue to walk away from the cart as he would look for a place to sit. The sky was dark and the rain drops that fell to the ground would cause for the sound of splashing to constantly occur during his time there. It was a sound that would not stop till the rain cleared up. The Trees, although never gaining the light of day, had flourished into beautiful colors that the darkness illuminated in its own way. The trees grew to tremendous heights but were not big enough to block the drops of rain that fell through them. Near, as he stepped through the forest would cause the puddles of rain to splash up against his leg and cause his pants leg to get wet. This began to annoy him as he would finally spot that of a rock he could sit on. Walking up to it he would turn and sit down. His butt now wet from the rain that had hit the rock before he had gotten there. Near would sit there and think to himself as he knew nothing of the reason that pride had been acting out more the usual. Breathing in Near would close his eyes and begin to talk to his inner self, Pride. "... Pride... whats your problem with that cart..... and why wont you calm down now. We're far from it and there isnt a thing interfering with you... come on..." Near would say as he would walk through the hall of his mind. The doors were all closed and all he could see was a gate in his mind. This gate gave off a kind of vibe, much like the vibe given off by the space time techniques he had just learned. It what humming and signing at the same time, as if something was behind it that never needed to get out, the imagination of the one called Resonate River. Oh how this was sealed up quick to take the fun away from the son that would be the greatest man in the world and murder everyone that inhabited it.
The gates that reached the ceiling of his mind and broke through them with their scary like sensation it was like they were the gates of hell that originally never existed in the world of the living. The ticking of a clock would begin to ring in his head as pride would tell near to step back. The gates that had two giant skeletons on both sides, one holding the others head and the other holds a large weapon. THe gates with their gold coating and red under coating would ring out its beautiful colors and keep the vision of the human away from what had been starring them down from the inside. The gates would begin to creak open as the young boy would step back about 15 feet, As the doors would swing open and hit the walls that kept it apart from the others, the young boy would utter the words, "The gates of hell...." Giving it a name before learning it and striking it on the dot. Pride would tell the young boy to enter the gates. As they glowed with the same purple hue as his space time jutsu it would begin to suck everything into it. There was no possible way it ould stop and let anything get away from it as the boy would be sucked deep into the dark of this jutsu. It had been a jutsu that his inner self possessed inside and only on the inside as he would begin to explain to his counterpart just what he had seen, Near would be pushed out of his own mind and would begin to breath hard as he had seen the world in a new light. As he would look around the area had still been clear of people it was now time for near to begin his training. Near would stand up and walk away from the stone as he stood i nthe middle of the forest. "Now listen to me closely and do not stray from the words i am saying. I will grant you with the wisdom and allow you to continue on with your power, First off i need you to learn the deepness of your own power, the bloodline you now possess and have possessed since you were small. I Can not do much to help you but watch and guide you but i can do anything if you have not gained the power needed to surpass the other people in this world i plan to burn. Now start by taking this power and multiply it in your body. If you need me ill be here waiting for you to succeed now go." Pride would say to Near as he would once again close his eyes the setting helped more than usual as the thunder and lightning of the rain would cause him to feel a lot more at home. He would concentrate and the power of his thunder chakra would fluctuate in his body and cause for the bloodline to course through him more than usual the first objective was met as the thunder chakra would wake up the basic thunder chakra in the cells of Near's body. The cells were vibrating and would hum like the huming of the gates that sat in his mind. Each hum would cause for another cell to hum with it. In the ancient times the thunder chakra had been stored in the humans body to keep them safe at all times even when they had not taken the thunder as their own. The clan that had taken this chakra and used it to be possessed as chakra that could crush almost everything was the clan that hailed from the river country and took its name as its name. The River clan had nothing more but hate for the world that would burn into its history and cause for the world to know just how much that should also hate the people of the world. As Near would hum with the humming of his body he could feel more then just a type of power in his body it was his destiny, as he would smile and look up at the rain he began to glow reaching up to the sky he wanted to walk it and see what it had to of been like to walk like a monster or to walk like a man that had no true home. As near looked over in the direction he had originally came from he would begin to hear the voice of Pride once again. "Hush do not worry about that man we have more important things to thing about Near... I need you to get stronger and i need you to gain the power necessary to gain a heads up in this world. Now that you have gained access to the power of the thunder release i will now let you understand a new thing. Listen to me closely. you have came in contact with the power of the space time release and i must say that you have yet to gain much from it until i allow you the path to the gates of hell. but first you must increase your output of chakra now." Pride would say to near as near would get on to the wet ground and begin to face the ground he was concentrating his chakra to all corners of his body as a way to gain the balance he had needed for his chakra level to rise. Being a strange guy Near had been born to test the strength of his older brother one day, born to be the death of his family but unknown of his true life. As he waited he would speak to pride, his tone confused as he waited there. "Your method of training is strange but i accept the fact that you want to help me pride. We are apart of the same body so why not help it grow right? but i must ask you what are your motives and why is it i have you in me why are we known as one?" Near would ask as he would begin to struggle a little bit trying to hold himself up. Pride began to hum to himself as if he had ben ignoring the question asked. "I have been living for years and years.. since the men of the world would fight for their rights to the point of which they only wanted to be subjected as pawns. I Have no real reason for being here accept to aid a person i choose. I chose to aid that prominent woman that once stood tall but now i may not because she had long gone afar and so your mother has died and i have chosen you as my vessel but first i must create you into that living sacrifice. You wont die unless you falter because im at the last of my line and i will fall with you. My life line is so very short near and i only wish to go out with a bang... youd understand it if you walked my path but right now tou have simply joined my path and you are now going with me into the darkness" Pride would say as he would pace in the mind of near around the gates of hell. He had nothing but words to utter out to near as it seemed Pride was fading every single second he lived. Near would begin to do push ups as he listened to the words of Pride. it was interesting and he didnt really know a response to this. The chakra that near had been pumping out increased with each push up causing his body to get used to the chakra and the weight it seemed to carry, along with that near would build up his strength and power. What more could intense training do to him but bulk him up and get him ready for the upcoming terror that pride spoke of. It was sad that all the ninja in the world had become useless to him and his plan but it was time for a change and that change would come from only one person, That being Near and his power of the thunder. As the rain fell on his back and made him wetter then he had already been, NEar would sigh as he needed to change as soon as he reached the village of the rain or he would soon be sick and die. As he would lower himself and feel the vibration his body gave off as he got closer to the water and then push up and see his body glow he would seem to smile a bit because of that feeling of being accomplished had came over him and made him even more proud to be of the river clan. Pride would only watch and wait for the right time to continue their chat. What was the intense training going to be used for, only pride had known the end result of it all. Would he die and would that power be pushed aside like all the others or would it be saved in the great books of the angels and the gods what more could the great arrogant being ask for? Nothing was the answer as the answer would forever be set in his mind, he wanted fame and he wanted it soon, He wanted every living being to know his name and never forget it no matter what. After hours of exercising near finally stopped and raised up sitting on the ground. As he began to breath hard he would notice that there was something watching him in the distance. Its dark shadow would notice that Near had found the beast as it would return to hiding, had it of ran or not would be unknown until near stood up. Pride owuld not say a word as he thought this to be a good opportunity to practice something that he had up his sleeves. As near stood up and ran to the tree that he had originally seen the dark being he would sigh and then look forward. the leaves would move more then usual, this time not being from the rain but from something that had just passed by it. Near would then jump up into the tree, his feet on a branch and his eyes looking forward for the enemy. what was there and what was after him or had it simply been watching him and seeing just what he was up to. Near would begin to run in the same direction as the being and keep a look out for it. Its actual body shape had not been truly established by near just yet but it would soon be. As near would continue to sprint through the forest and then jump high up into the sky. As he would be high over the many trees and he would feel the water hit him. It felt wonderful as he would then fall back down to the tree tops. The height he had reached and the feeling of flying was a wonderful one, it made him feel alive once again in a very long time. Near would look forward and he would see that the man was there and he was running. Running as fast he could to get away from near. Near would jump down and follow as fast as he could, the man began to throw kunai knives and many other things toward near, near would only smile as he would dodge them and then jump. As he hit the side of a tree and then jumped toward the man he would tackle him. The man was a strange one as he had nothing to do with near he was simply stealing the items that near had and this angered him as he would grab the neck of the man and throw him across the land as he would hit the ground twice near would bolt toward him and slam his elbow into his chest. "Remember this and tell anyone who dares to cross paths with me..." Near would begin to say as his voice would become dark and his body would vibrate intensely with the more he seemed to become angry, His hand wrapping around the neck of the boy as he would choke him to death with the last words he would hear coming from near himself. "I will rip every tissue out of you and burn it in your face, i will kill you and murder you and cause your anus to bleed and make you become an unwanted piece of shit that you already are. Don't you ever come back to this world or i will destroy you and you will regret every second of it, do you understand me..." Near said as he would break the mans neck, his fingers ripping into his throat and the man drowning in his own blood. He was now dead and there had been nothing more a person could do about it. it was a fun and funny action and he wanted more to kill. As near would raise up and walk away he would begin to walk back to the area he was originally. He would take his time as he walked back to the area nearest his friend. He could do nothing but keep his guard up as pride would congratulate him on his first of many kills as a kage. "Look at you.. youre growing and i like that.. you may just be the perfect being. And i use the word perfect losly my young kage. Now listen when we get back to that spot you will begin to train your space time. It is time that you and i talked about what is behind the gates that could help you in the greatest way, but youll need to take out anything that trys to stop it. it is a jutsu that no one possesses and i have been thinking of you to use it for good. But it wont be easy to summon it. It is a lot like the huge gates... well wait i dont even know if youve seen them before. Anyway i just think that you should have power out of this world before you go to speak to a man like the one that cries the day away. He is said to be powerful and given that name for a reason and he might want someone who can match up to him for an alliance and if you dont then you wont be able to get him to join you. So as the being inside of you i offer you my help and hopefully you accept it." Pride would say as his mind would go dark, the thought of pride stayed in his mind. Near had found his way back to the same rock as before as he would walk up to one of the trees a that had been there and began to hit it. It was wet and it had been very slick but it was not hard for near to hit, in fact it seemed to help near in a way as he could fell how most people felt when they fought someone who had slipped through their fingers, pulling out a kunai near began to attack the same spot. In seconds he would do different actions at the tree. His first would be the movement of the kunai to make a horizantal strike at the tree bark, his arm starting from the left of him and swinging to end at his right. A small indent would be made in the tree and near would jump back and crack his neck. Near would then stab the ground as the water would splash up and he would begin to feel the water and how it flowed. It had been much different from that of lightning and wind it had many different states like the two as well. Water ninjutsu much like many other ninja was the type that used only water for its awesome techniques, the use was hard and most of the jutsu had many hand signs that went with them, As near would listen to the voices that came from the water and the rain that fell he would feel a different type of feeling in his heart, he didnt feel wrong at all he felt as if he did what he need to do to save his own life as he would place his hand i nthe water and he would begin to channel his chakra to his hand, talking to himself and pride had he of been there he would say. "If i can master more then just one element then i can be better then the family has been known to be, but water of all things... what makes me think that i even have a chance to master an element so feral and beast like, but in the end its nothing like lightning and if i can use it right i can destroy people with both of the elements... why have i not thought of this before.. why hasnt pride thought of this before. I guess dealing with fire for all his life he doesnt even get the factors behind the power of water." NEar would say to himself as he laughed a little, Pride would sit inside of his head just listening to the conversation that he was having with himself. It seem to of made him laugh a little but that didnt matter at this point, for at this point the boy needed to concentrate on his actions as he was aiming for the water release. He would pour his chakra out through his hand and into the water as he would take in the way it flowed, the calm way it sat there and waited for someone to come and cause ripples to occur within it. Near would close his eyes as he waited for something to occur. the things he would do to gain a power beyond that of his own as he would cause the water to bubble up and move making shapes and wrapping around his arm. He wass feeling that wonderful power of the release of water as he would raise his arm out of the water and continue to grasp the water around his arm causing it to flow in the air and watch it Near would smile a tad bit and then suddenly he would lose control of the water as it would fall back to the ground and splash in the water. Near would look at the ground and wait a few seconds as he became disappointed with the fact. He would sigh and the look forward. He had now been facing the direction of the cart. As he picked up his stuff and looked around he would think to himself what was it he had been aiming for. The power to kill or the power to save the lives of many people. He didnt really know but he was sure that he wanted to one day. He would stand there and wait for a while, the lonely man would look at the area of lonliness as if there had been something about it that would turn him away he would begin to shed a tear, his first tear in many years, the man who was supposed to be known as one of the brutal kage was now crying in the land of rain. Was it the rain that brought tears to his eyes or had it been the rain that was hitting his face but the rain had stopped hours ago. Near would sit down.
Pitter patter. The world began to turn dark as it stopped in its own tracks and watched the event unfold on its surface. This day of all days was the worst day of a person's life. The clouds began to move into the the forest of the rain village. They were as dark as the burnt crisp on a toast after staying in the oven for to long. The clouds looked over the village and the forest. As they began to weep. As they shed the bloody water from their eyes. their tears fell down on to the village. The showers of the water came on the ground and feed the thirsty grass and plants which awaited in the forest of Amegakure. But others it was to feel something in their heart.
Under a large tree a boy with blueish hair and black jeans sat under it and watched. The tree had a giant leaf which protected the half naked boy from the cold rain. When he actually had his own rain to handle, The hard face of the tsuchikage was shedding a tear. He was crying like a rain cloud. This was the day that the boy had lost a special someone in his life. This boy, Nate River aka the kage of iwa, had lost his father on that same day, Near had finally noticed the day. The day of sorrow in his life. He was special due to the fact he helped giving him life and gave him the power of thunder.
Waiting for the rain to stop, as he watched each rain drop fall into the endless sea of Amegakure, Near played with his hair a little. Hours later the rain stopped pouring on the ground as the ground was wet and held many puddles. Near stood up as he wiped the tears from his face and began to walk from under the giant tree leaf. Using His fingers near began to break the stem that held the leaf there, tearing the leaf off the stem as it then fell and all the water is had been holding since the beginning of the rain fell to the ground.
As he kept on walking the water splashed on his pants making them wet, knee high. Walking further and further from the village and the sea itself. He sighed trying his best to get out of the wet areas of the village, which had actually been the hardest part of the traveling. Suddenly he saw a bright Light. Bright the usual like it was a haven of angels. "Get out of my Goddamn way!!!!!!" Near yelled as he swung his fist back, the force adding on to it as the thunder chakra surrounded, As he reached forward he hit a tree, not one that had been small and weak, but this tree had been a large and strong tree, Why did he hit it? Cause it had been blocking his view of the light that had just shown up from the God of the sun. This was resonate's Small rampage. Sure it was a creepy one, and the fact and reason why he always left the village on its own. It was his way of letting out his anger and his sorrow. Near began to punch the other trees with his full force and will, everything he had in it, just to make something crack, just to hear the sound of destruction, sending one last hit at the tree, he yelled, "Ahhhhhhh!" with nothing left he continued on his walk to his paradise. As he began his walk once again, he swayed a bit with his teary eyes, and his wet pants. He was going to find the last place he could lay his head on, His favorite training spot, The Paradise, which had been its pet name at the time being. This place has been the burial place for the parents of the 'Commander of Thunder' They had both fought in the silent war when near attacked. Here was the place Near trained his power, each and every time this day came. In his fathers words he was supposed to be 'The God of Thunder' the same name given to his dad when he had been alive.
Commander of Thunder, A name that had been given to the young 13 year old those many years ago. Stopping in his tracks, commander Thunder opened his mouth and began to wail. As he looked down at the ground and started a repetitive motion of hitting the ground, this had went on for approximately 20 minutes until he finally stopped and stood on his own two feet. "Five more miles to go." He said as he jumped out of the hole and began to walk, Walking past holes that started from 2 feet deep to as deep as his last one. These had been the marks, the beginning of his own training back then, when he was small.
"Son listen up, When you grow up. I want you to be stronger then your old man here. If im The God of Thunder, Then i want you to be.....The Almighty Power of Thunder." The fuzzy vision showed a old man with naturally white hair, much like Nates', Holding a child of the age of 5 with the same color hair, but less eyes of a killer. "But father," The child said with his sweet voice, "I'll never be better then you." The Man looked at the boy, then looked up at the raining sky. "The Sky is not the limit, Because you are the sky, and you will be limitless, son." Holding his son high in the sky, the small giggles came from the young nate. "Yes Father, I will be......" The Flashback ended returning to Nate walking through the dark forest as he uttered from his mouth the word. ".......Limitless." As he got louder and said it once again, "Limitless!!!!" This startling the bird and other creatures in the dangerous part of the forest. The roar of a bear appearing from behind him. As Nate showed a small grin and flipped into the air. Coming back down foot first, with a falling axe foot. The bear roared once more as its brains and blood, colored the ground red and pink. True the hours passed by quickly after that incident, The path was pretty clear, This was the Path of Death for those who wanted to follow it. Reaching his paradise. No one was in this large 200 meter area as he walked into it the water had seemed to of evaporated back into the atmosphere. He walked toward the middle of the field and looked at the flowers. As he then stomped on two of them and laughed a bit..
Cracking his neck to get the uncomfortable and restless knots out he sighed. Grabbing his stomach as it showed just a small scratch from the Newly found Bloody forest. Failing to have a shirt on caused this ordeal, but in the end it still would have happened with our without a shirt. But in the end Nate wasn't going to wear a shirt to bound his movement. He had no muscles but he was hot enough for anything. He growled just a bit as he saw the little blood the tree left on him, Turning around he saw one of the few tree showing him the entrance to the Paradise. Yelling he punched the trees and cracked it in half. Looking up at the sky as the sun's rays shined on him. "Hello Mother, Hello Father, I hope my endless Sky is fairing you well." He muttered from his mouth. The lighting which he used before had large amounts come from his hand and wrap around in a static way. It's eyes were looking up at the sun as well as it heated up from it. This didn't bother near at all since he had a good resistance to it. As his white hair swayed in the vast directions the wind gave it, Nate closed his eyes and enjoyed the moments of peace.
He laughed as the 'weapons' grabbed his hips and sat there for moments. Near didn't care for they didn't bother him nor slow down his walking, because these weapons had been more then just useless beings, they were attached to him. Looking around a bit to make sure nothing came at him while he stood there since he didnt want to be caught off guard. Pride talked to him bu before getting a word out near told him to hush as he closed his eyes and listened closely.
Near began to come out of the fuzzy memory. This was at the point that a strange black haired man had came into the area which Nate stood in. Near didn't hear the man at first as he was still in a small shock. "I-I do have ... I have a purpose you shitty slut!" Near said out loud in a yelling voice. The memory had seemed to of engulfed near in a way that would snap a normal person's saneness. But near was much to strong to be snapped by it. Coming from the shock he began to blink his eyes as he toke a gulp and his Adam's apple went up the went back down to the spot it had started at. As his eyes began to catch on to the man who came into the area of his paradise, a foolish mortal who had came down the Path of Death and was about to meet death himself. Giving him a small side glare.
He read the man and his facial movements and make up till it came down to the point he knew who it was. "brother." Near said. With a little shock added to it. He was surprised bait to see someone from his early life, still alive that is. Even though not knowing each other much they both knew each others names, First and last. Looking at his face near saw something that was weird. This thing wasn't to weird but it would be weird for most shinobi who had high ranks in this cruel world. Near saw the hidden expression of someone grieving inside. Something that near encountered once on his shinobi road.
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Still stunned at his brothers expression Near shoke his head. "bro, Your face. Holds so much grieve in it. And I can tell you have let it loose before, But.. How does it feel to let loose such an emotion that could end your own life?" Near asked giving his brother a second to answer the question. "When I left you guys. My Foster father told me something. And from that point I held in all emotions, and anything that would stop me from achieving it. He said this: Save your tears, For that day. When our pains are far behind. On your feet, come with me. We are soldiers stand or die. Save your fears. Take your place. Save them for the judgement day. Fast and free. Follow me. Time to make the sacrifice. We rise or fall....... That was Master gods number one rule. No emotion." near said to him.
Near began to get louder with his speech and began to feel more confident. "I understand it now. I will no longer be a push over to the others. I'm Nate river. And guess what you. I challenge you to a fight. I wanna see your power compared to the other losers and the two guys. Showing you are stronger then your father, I hope this to be fun. Show me what you really got. Your true power!!!!!" Near said as he got into a fighting pose with the hot substance getting into a pose as well. "I call on you.... Pride." He whispered as a laughing noise came from his mouth as it was now filled with pure hate and destruction in its agenda.
Near and pride smiled a bit when he heard his brother agree to them having a small fight. But inside near felt that this fight wasn't going to be good for either of their health. "Hm Yo Nate. I mean Near. Do you really think that you can take on this man. I mean come on look at his dumb crybaby face." Pride said out loud so that near and the man could hear him. "Hey you. I wanna see that power of yours but be warned I'm going to play rouge bitch!." Near's eyes widened a bit and looked at his lighting which was headed toward to him. "Pride that's unnecessary. Watch your tone with others, We have nobody, no friends already you always ruin stuff." Near said to pride. "Goddammit Pride. Your to reckless. Your such a dumb ass. Let's go!" Near said. When he said let's go he meant bring up the guard.
Near hadn't seen the abilities of the man before. At least not all the way. He knew he was strong and fast. But he didn't know how fast he was compared to near himself in a way. The lightning would quickly wrap around near. This movement by pride was to give near time to do a few things.Smiling Nate flew up high into the sky with and jump and headed down to his brother like a torpedo. Once again as near would snap his fingers at him. "Dammit stop it Pride!!"
Near had finally made his first finalization. This was just by what he was doing with his lightning. "How easily he is kinda like me in a way. He is showing me his first element. Which is lightning. Such a powerful element when you think about it. I can destroy so many things. I guess that means its no time to play with him anymore. I'll show you brother what I can really do in a real fight." Near said to pride in their head. Pride's face had a giant grin on it as if near was signing something that pride wanted him to. "What ever you say resonate river. I see your plan now. You didn't even need to thing about it Eh. I under stand my part in this. And yours should be easy. I'll control the right hand. You'll control the left hand. Should be very easy." Nears eyes began to change colors as they glowed in the light and the wind in the area began to get fiercer and blow into both of the male's faces. Blowing Nate's hair upward.
the enemy had turned into some type of lightning mode as it had seemed the man had two chidori's in both hands. Near and pride made a giant smile come on their face. It went from ear to ear. That's when they snapped the right hands fingers sending uncontrollable lighting power at the man's lightning form. This was as if a precaution. Near knew that lightning versus lighting wouldn't do to much but he did have an ideal. As he jumped to the left from the attack and the enemy. the ighting only enhanced his physical strength in a way. As they both would land on the tree the tree would start to crack from the full force of Nate's punch. That's when near would aim both hands to the field. The grin on his face made it obvious that this had been a person near wanted to kill, Jumping from the tree Nate charged at is brother with all his might.
This gave near enough time to do as he wanted. Closing his eyes for a second. Near in a sense rawred like an animal. The sound echoed through the whole Forrest. The lighting began to move around the whole area to gather around the near pride and his brother. With a crazy look in his eyes. Near stared at his brother as the two meet, eye to eye, only to end in his brother totally dodging the attack having Nate hit the ground behind him causing a crater to form, A yell of hate came from Nate's mouth as he glared at his big brother with blood lust. Jumping Out of the crater toward him once more the lightning came caving in on them both Along with the massive amounts of water included in it. With his left hand moving he aimed for his brother's Heart as he snapped his finger lightning came from the gloves. It wasn't to big but the idea was to make him move. The caving in of the water would have a flaw but that would be what his brother would most likely think. Near's hands moved at a fast rate as he did 10 sets o hand signs. Coming from the water as well was ten water dragons from all around near and his brother, all being his brother's. One that came from behind Near swallowed him whole. "Look at him. This is what I live for near. I live for the rush to show other s that you are pride. I am pride. My power is ungodly and I will show both this man and the world this power." pride said to him. As the thunder chakra kept coming into him a noise could be heard from it. "Testing. One two three you fucking idiots. Yep it's me pride. I am the evil manifesto of pride the ungodly sin!!!! Guess what loser. that's right. I watched his body squirm as I crushed it with my power and his blood went all over the battlefield. I could hear his screams of pain and his cries of sorrow as the man was burnt into a third degree burn state, during the war. I murdered your whole life. And I wanna know what are you gonna do about it. Fight me head on. Or Better yet kill the body that holds me and my power. Would you kill resonate river. Put him out of his sadness and sorrow. Will you take a person so innocent's life. Is he innocent. Tell me. Is he dead or is he alive. I mean it's your choice will you let scum like him die. Under the hands of someone else or will you kill him with your own bloody hands boy. Will you boy. Tell me. You damn prick. Will you kill what pride is will you take the life of scum to kill something that beliefs in hell will you travel with me there or will you let me kill each and all of your family members. Unlike raiyeko he is okay since he is dead. Then we have our younger brother. Who is lust. And your good old friend that aopdted boy who is useful. Oh and a big secret is they defected for me. Oh and I bet your wondering if your little cousin jaken will be okay. Oh he will. Now ask me. How do I know this stuff. Because your fighting resonate river. The smartest shinobi in this damned to hell shinobi world. He was taught by the thunder gods himself one of the men who was to kind to anyone the old master of the universe. Tell me brother. Will you rise over the me.... pride!!!!!! How ironic!!!!" Pride yelled at the man as the water crashed down as this would try to drown near.
After that had happened. The real battle had begun. As things weren't bad enough. Near was devoured by his own power as that would be what it would seem like. From the point of near being devoured he began a state of rest from the battle. Once the water had crashed he would awaken from his false slumber. The water would begin to change him. As if he was a devil's spawn. What was near really. "brother. It's your turn. Show me what your ass can do. And I promise I wont kill you. Your cousin showed no sign of being stronger. But I can see it in your face and in your actions you have strength beyond anyone I have ever seen. I wanna see it and I wanna feel the power as you punch me and I burn your flesh off. It'll show you. You. and everyone who dared to set me apart. Such strong people. I wanna see where this started. And I'm gonna say you!!!!!! Your next move better be the one that keep this fight going." Nate said as clapped together the dirt flying through the air. His hands splattering from the sound of it. It was a bloody hell.
Near yelled as if he was in some type of pain. The yell turned into a scream into a laugh they all lasted a minute long. It was as if near was now going crazy from what was going on. "Look at this. you will never forgive me for killing his family member like this. Doesn't it feel hard to bare such a thing doesn't. From the beginning Nate river when you saw your parents killed in front of your eyes. I was born in your mind I was your personal self I was the person you talked to you told me how you felt. Don't you remember. You talked about how it was hard to see them die in front of you. The way. They were still the people who toke care of you. How you said they still loved you even though they threw away there lives for such stupid reasons. Hahahah I was the person. Your crazy near no. You are the spawn. From the day that you killed them all and brought him back to the village to be buried you were branded as crazy." Pride said with the large mouth. "Shut up!!!!!!!!" near yelled at pride at the highest and loudest hole cousin go to make sure that pride could hear him. In a way they weren't worried about what his brother would do a the moment. They didnt care how the battle would end. Near smiled as he saw the fire about to come for him. It was bigger then a bus which surprised near in a sort. As he saw it coming for him near thought to himself as all the water was gone. It all disappeared. As near waited for the fire to get closer to him. That's when the big bang happened. The ground rumbled and all the power Nate needed exploded up 40 feet into the air and 60 feet wide. This covering the area the both of them were in. The power of the wind would cause the rocks to fly through the field and make a barrier for him.The Thunder roared like a train. As it was destroying everything in site the ground was destroyed and the trees were bent back in the other direction. Nate was caught in the attack and blown back as well. This would leave near on one knee with his white hair blowing from the wind. He would look at him as his tears would disappear. He had a hand ready to attack if he wanted to but it would seem that he had full control of his body now. He began to speak. Falling on to the ground as a thud was heard, this due to all the training that had been going on, resonate river had fallen unconscious, in a battle field of destruction. As everything cleared up, it was seen that nothing had really been there, Nate had been fighting nothing but the air. And in the end, was left to lay face down in a giant crater of his pure strength. The boy had expanded his limitless sky and planned on expanding it even more. Nothing was left but to la on his face and wait, as the hours passed by of him sleeping the pain away, did he really expect for someone to come and find him no, but he had expected the figment of his imagination to take him back home. As his eyes had been half open and his mind was keeping him down for the time being. Only to reach the connection of the Mind and Body and Soul to say one line. "The Limitless Sky." He said as he stood up finally, and began to crawl out of the deep hole, headed home after a long day of work.Near would stand up and begin to walk to the cart, he began to wobble and hold his arm. He was in pain but he could not care any less for this thing. He was crying but he didnt want his comrade to see that. He wanted no one to see that he had been in tears from a battle with his mind. As Pride sat in his mind and waited for what was going to come. The end was near and everyone knew that. Making it to the cart he would sit in the cart and continue on to the village hidden in the rain. It was time for the real season to begin and for pride to be created
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The gates that reached the ceiling of his mind and broke through them with their scary like sensation it was like they were the gates of hell that originally never existed in the world of the living. The ticking of a clock would begin to ring in his head as pride would tell near to step back. The gates that had two giant skeletons on both sides, one holding the others head and the other holds a large weapon. THe gates with their gold coating and red under coating would ring out its beautiful colors and keep the vision of the human away from what had been starring them down from the inside. The gates would begin to creak open as the young boy would step back about 15 feet, As the doors would swing open and hit the walls that kept it apart from the others, the young boy would utter the words, "The gates of hell...." Giving it a name before learning it and striking it on the dot. Pride would tell the young boy to enter the gates. As they glowed with the same purple hue as his space time jutsu it would begin to suck everything into it. There was no possible way it ould stop and let anything get away from it as the boy would be sucked deep into the dark of this jutsu. It had been a jutsu that his inner self possessed inside and only on the inside as he would begin to explain to his counterpart just what he had seen, Near would be pushed out of his own mind and would begin to breath hard as he had seen the world in a new light. As he would look around the area had still been clear of people it was now time for near to begin his training. Near would stand up and walk away from the stone as he stood i nthe middle of the forest. "Now listen to me closely and do not stray from the words i am saying. I will grant you with the wisdom and allow you to continue on with your power, First off i need you to learn the deepness of your own power, the bloodline you now possess and have possessed since you were small. I Can not do much to help you but watch and guide you but i can do anything if you have not gained the power needed to surpass the other people in this world i plan to burn. Now start by taking this power and multiply it in your body. If you need me ill be here waiting for you to succeed now go." Pride would say to Near as he would once again close his eyes the setting helped more than usual as the thunder and lightning of the rain would cause him to feel a lot more at home. He would concentrate and the power of his thunder chakra would fluctuate in his body and cause for the bloodline to course through him more than usual the first objective was met as the thunder chakra would wake up the basic thunder chakra in the cells of Near's body. The cells were vibrating and would hum like the huming of the gates that sat in his mind. Each hum would cause for another cell to hum with it. In the ancient times the thunder chakra had been stored in the humans body to keep them safe at all times even when they had not taken the thunder as their own. The clan that had taken this chakra and used it to be possessed as chakra that could crush almost everything was the clan that hailed from the river country and took its name as its name. The River clan had nothing more but hate for the world that would burn into its history and cause for the world to know just how much that should also hate the people of the world. As Near would hum with the humming of his body he could feel more then just a type of power in his body it was his destiny, as he would smile and look up at the rain he began to glow reaching up to the sky he wanted to walk it and see what it had to of been like to walk like a monster or to walk like a man that had no true home. As near looked over in the direction he had originally came from he would begin to hear the voice of Pride once again. "Hush do not worry about that man we have more important things to thing about Near... I need you to get stronger and i need you to gain the power necessary to gain a heads up in this world. Now that you have gained access to the power of the thunder release i will now let you understand a new thing. Listen to me closely. you have came in contact with the power of the space time release and i must say that you have yet to gain much from it until i allow you the path to the gates of hell. but first you must increase your output of chakra now." Pride would say to near as near would get on to the wet ground and begin to face the ground he was concentrating his chakra to all corners of his body as a way to gain the balance he had needed for his chakra level to rise. Being a strange guy Near had been born to test the strength of his older brother one day, born to be the death of his family but unknown of his true life. As he waited he would speak to pride, his tone confused as he waited there. "Your method of training is strange but i accept the fact that you want to help me pride. We are apart of the same body so why not help it grow right? but i must ask you what are your motives and why is it i have you in me why are we known as one?" Near would ask as he would begin to struggle a little bit trying to hold himself up. Pride began to hum to himself as if he had ben ignoring the question asked. "I have been living for years and years.. since the men of the world would fight for their rights to the point of which they only wanted to be subjected as pawns. I Have no real reason for being here accept to aid a person i choose. I chose to aid that prominent woman that once stood tall but now i may not because she had long gone afar and so your mother has died and i have chosen you as my vessel but first i must create you into that living sacrifice. You wont die unless you falter because im at the last of my line and i will fall with you. My life line is so very short near and i only wish to go out with a bang... youd understand it if you walked my path but right now tou have simply joined my path and you are now going with me into the darkness" Pride would say as he would pace in the mind of near around the gates of hell. He had nothing but words to utter out to near as it seemed Pride was fading every single second he lived. Near would begin to do push ups as he listened to the words of Pride. it was interesting and he didnt really know a response to this. The chakra that near had been pumping out increased with each push up causing his body to get used to the chakra and the weight it seemed to carry, along with that near would build up his strength and power. What more could intense training do to him but bulk him up and get him ready for the upcoming terror that pride spoke of. It was sad that all the ninja in the world had become useless to him and his plan but it was time for a change and that change would come from only one person, That being Near and his power of the thunder. As the rain fell on his back and made him wetter then he had already been, NEar would sigh as he needed to change as soon as he reached the village of the rain or he would soon be sick and die. As he would lower himself and feel the vibration his body gave off as he got closer to the water and then push up and see his body glow he would seem to smile a bit because of that feeling of being accomplished had came over him and made him even more proud to be of the river clan. Pride would only watch and wait for the right time to continue their chat. What was the intense training going to be used for, only pride had known the end result of it all. Would he die and would that power be pushed aside like all the others or would it be saved in the great books of the angels and the gods what more could the great arrogant being ask for? Nothing was the answer as the answer would forever be set in his mind, he wanted fame and he wanted it soon, He wanted every living being to know his name and never forget it no matter what. After hours of exercising near finally stopped and raised up sitting on the ground. As he began to breath hard he would notice that there was something watching him in the distance. Its dark shadow would notice that Near had found the beast as it would return to hiding, had it of ran or not would be unknown until near stood up. Pride owuld not say a word as he thought this to be a good opportunity to practice something that he had up his sleeves. As near stood up and ran to the tree that he had originally seen the dark being he would sigh and then look forward. the leaves would move more then usual, this time not being from the rain but from something that had just passed by it. Near would then jump up into the tree, his feet on a branch and his eyes looking forward for the enemy. what was there and what was after him or had it simply been watching him and seeing just what he was up to. Near would begin to run in the same direction as the being and keep a look out for it. Its actual body shape had not been truly established by near just yet but it would soon be. As near would continue to sprint through the forest and then jump high up into the sky. As he would be high over the many trees and he would feel the water hit him. It felt wonderful as he would then fall back down to the tree tops. The height he had reached and the feeling of flying was a wonderful one, it made him feel alive once again in a very long time. Near would look forward and he would see that the man was there and he was running. Running as fast he could to get away from near. Near would jump down and follow as fast as he could, the man began to throw kunai knives and many other things toward near, near would only smile as he would dodge them and then jump. As he hit the side of a tree and then jumped toward the man he would tackle him. The man was a strange one as he had nothing to do with near he was simply stealing the items that near had and this angered him as he would grab the neck of the man and throw him across the land as he would hit the ground twice near would bolt toward him and slam his elbow into his chest. "Remember this and tell anyone who dares to cross paths with me..." Near would begin to say as his voice would become dark and his body would vibrate intensely with the more he seemed to become angry, His hand wrapping around the neck of the boy as he would choke him to death with the last words he would hear coming from near himself. "I will rip every tissue out of you and burn it in your face, i will kill you and murder you and cause your anus to bleed and make you become an unwanted piece of shit that you already are. Don't you ever come back to this world or i will destroy you and you will regret every second of it, do you understand me..." Near said as he would break the mans neck, his fingers ripping into his throat and the man drowning in his own blood. He was now dead and there had been nothing more a person could do about it. it was a fun and funny action and he wanted more to kill. As near would raise up and walk away he would begin to walk back to the area he was originally. He would take his time as he walked back to the area nearest his friend. He could do nothing but keep his guard up as pride would congratulate him on his first of many kills as a kage. "Look at you.. youre growing and i like that.. you may just be the perfect being. And i use the word perfect losly my young kage. Now listen when we get back to that spot you will begin to train your space time. It is time that you and i talked about what is behind the gates that could help you in the greatest way, but youll need to take out anything that trys to stop it. it is a jutsu that no one possesses and i have been thinking of you to use it for good. But it wont be easy to summon it. It is a lot like the huge gates... well wait i dont even know if youve seen them before. Anyway i just think that you should have power out of this world before you go to speak to a man like the one that cries the day away. He is said to be powerful and given that name for a reason and he might want someone who can match up to him for an alliance and if you dont then you wont be able to get him to join you. So as the being inside of you i offer you my help and hopefully you accept it." Pride would say as his mind would go dark, the thought of pride stayed in his mind. Near had found his way back to the same rock as before as he would walk up to one of the trees a that had been there and began to hit it. It was wet and it had been very slick but it was not hard for near to hit, in fact it seemed to help near in a way as he could fell how most people felt when they fought someone who had slipped through their fingers, pulling out a kunai near began to attack the same spot. In seconds he would do different actions at the tree. His first would be the movement of the kunai to make a horizantal strike at the tree bark, his arm starting from the left of him and swinging to end at his right. A small indent would be made in the tree and near would jump back and crack his neck. Near would then stab the ground as the water would splash up and he would begin to feel the water and how it flowed. It had been much different from that of lightning and wind it had many different states like the two as well. Water ninjutsu much like many other ninja was the type that used only water for its awesome techniques, the use was hard and most of the jutsu had many hand signs that went with them, As near would listen to the voices that came from the water and the rain that fell he would feel a different type of feeling in his heart, he didnt feel wrong at all he felt as if he did what he need to do to save his own life as he would place his hand i nthe water and he would begin to channel his chakra to his hand, talking to himself and pride had he of been there he would say. "If i can master more then just one element then i can be better then the family has been known to be, but water of all things... what makes me think that i even have a chance to master an element so feral and beast like, but in the end its nothing like lightning and if i can use it right i can destroy people with both of the elements... why have i not thought of this before.. why hasnt pride thought of this before. I guess dealing with fire for all his life he doesnt even get the factors behind the power of water." NEar would say to himself as he laughed a little, Pride would sit inside of his head just listening to the conversation that he was having with himself. It seem to of made him laugh a little but that didnt matter at this point, for at this point the boy needed to concentrate on his actions as he was aiming for the water release. He would pour his chakra out through his hand and into the water as he would take in the way it flowed, the calm way it sat there and waited for someone to come and cause ripples to occur within it. Near would close his eyes as he waited for something to occur. the things he would do to gain a power beyond that of his own as he would cause the water to bubble up and move making shapes and wrapping around his arm. He wass feeling that wonderful power of the release of water as he would raise his arm out of the water and continue to grasp the water around his arm causing it to flow in the air and watch it Near would smile a tad bit and then suddenly he would lose control of the water as it would fall back to the ground and splash in the water. Near would look at the ground and wait a few seconds as he became disappointed with the fact. He would sigh and the look forward. He had now been facing the direction of the cart. As he picked up his stuff and looked around he would think to himself what was it he had been aiming for. The power to kill or the power to save the lives of many people. He didnt really know but he was sure that he wanted to one day. He would stand there and wait for a while, the lonely man would look at the area of lonliness as if there had been something about it that would turn him away he would begin to shed a tear, his first tear in many years, the man who was supposed to be known as one of the brutal kage was now crying in the land of rain. Was it the rain that brought tears to his eyes or had it been the rain that was hitting his face but the rain had stopped hours ago. Near would sit down.
Pitter patter. The world began to turn dark as it stopped in its own tracks and watched the event unfold on its surface. This day of all days was the worst day of a person's life. The clouds began to move into the the forest of the rain village. They were as dark as the burnt crisp on a toast after staying in the oven for to long. The clouds looked over the village and the forest. As they began to weep. As they shed the bloody water from their eyes. their tears fell down on to the village. The showers of the water came on the ground and feed the thirsty grass and plants which awaited in the forest of Amegakure. But others it was to feel something in their heart.
Under a large tree a boy with blueish hair and black jeans sat under it and watched. The tree had a giant leaf which protected the half naked boy from the cold rain. When he actually had his own rain to handle, The hard face of the tsuchikage was shedding a tear. He was crying like a rain cloud. This was the day that the boy had lost a special someone in his life. This boy, Nate River aka the kage of iwa, had lost his father on that same day, Near had finally noticed the day. The day of sorrow in his life. He was special due to the fact he helped giving him life and gave him the power of thunder.
Waiting for the rain to stop, as he watched each rain drop fall into the endless sea of Amegakure, Near played with his hair a little. Hours later the rain stopped pouring on the ground as the ground was wet and held many puddles. Near stood up as he wiped the tears from his face and began to walk from under the giant tree leaf. Using His fingers near began to break the stem that held the leaf there, tearing the leaf off the stem as it then fell and all the water is had been holding since the beginning of the rain fell to the ground.
As he kept on walking the water splashed on his pants making them wet, knee high. Walking further and further from the village and the sea itself. He sighed trying his best to get out of the wet areas of the village, which had actually been the hardest part of the traveling. Suddenly he saw a bright Light. Bright the usual like it was a haven of angels. "Get out of my Goddamn way!!!!!!" Near yelled as he swung his fist back, the force adding on to it as the thunder chakra surrounded, As he reached forward he hit a tree, not one that had been small and weak, but this tree had been a large and strong tree, Why did he hit it? Cause it had been blocking his view of the light that had just shown up from the God of the sun. This was resonate's Small rampage. Sure it was a creepy one, and the fact and reason why he always left the village on its own. It was his way of letting out his anger and his sorrow. Near began to punch the other trees with his full force and will, everything he had in it, just to make something crack, just to hear the sound of destruction, sending one last hit at the tree, he yelled, "Ahhhhhhh!" with nothing left he continued on his walk to his paradise. As he began his walk once again, he swayed a bit with his teary eyes, and his wet pants. He was going to find the last place he could lay his head on, His favorite training spot, The Paradise, which had been its pet name at the time being. This place has been the burial place for the parents of the 'Commander of Thunder' They had both fought in the silent war when near attacked. Here was the place Near trained his power, each and every time this day came. In his fathers words he was supposed to be 'The God of Thunder' the same name given to his dad when he had been alive.
Commander of Thunder, A name that had been given to the young 13 year old those many years ago. Stopping in his tracks, commander Thunder opened his mouth and began to wail. As he looked down at the ground and started a repetitive motion of hitting the ground, this had went on for approximately 20 minutes until he finally stopped and stood on his own two feet. "Five more miles to go." He said as he jumped out of the hole and began to walk, Walking past holes that started from 2 feet deep to as deep as his last one. These had been the marks, the beginning of his own training back then, when he was small.
"Son listen up, When you grow up. I want you to be stronger then your old man here. If im The God of Thunder, Then i want you to be.....The Almighty Power of Thunder." The fuzzy vision showed a old man with naturally white hair, much like Nates', Holding a child of the age of 5 with the same color hair, but less eyes of a killer. "But father," The child said with his sweet voice, "I'll never be better then you." The Man looked at the boy, then looked up at the raining sky. "The Sky is not the limit, Because you are the sky, and you will be limitless, son." Holding his son high in the sky, the small giggles came from the young nate. "Yes Father, I will be......" The Flashback ended returning to Nate walking through the dark forest as he uttered from his mouth the word. ".......Limitless." As he got louder and said it once again, "Limitless!!!!" This startling the bird and other creatures in the dangerous part of the forest. The roar of a bear appearing from behind him. As Nate showed a small grin and flipped into the air. Coming back down foot first, with a falling axe foot. The bear roared once more as its brains and blood, colored the ground red and pink. True the hours passed by quickly after that incident, The path was pretty clear, This was the Path of Death for those who wanted to follow it. Reaching his paradise. No one was in this large 200 meter area as he walked into it the water had seemed to of evaporated back into the atmosphere. He walked toward the middle of the field and looked at the flowers. As he then stomped on two of them and laughed a bit..
Cracking his neck to get the uncomfortable and restless knots out he sighed. Grabbing his stomach as it showed just a small scratch from the Newly found Bloody forest. Failing to have a shirt on caused this ordeal, but in the end it still would have happened with our without a shirt. But in the end Nate wasn't going to wear a shirt to bound his movement. He had no muscles but he was hot enough for anything. He growled just a bit as he saw the little blood the tree left on him, Turning around he saw one of the few tree showing him the entrance to the Paradise. Yelling he punched the trees and cracked it in half. Looking up at the sky as the sun's rays shined on him. "Hello Mother, Hello Father, I hope my endless Sky is fairing you well." He muttered from his mouth. The lighting which he used before had large amounts come from his hand and wrap around in a static way. It's eyes were looking up at the sun as well as it heated up from it. This didn't bother near at all since he had a good resistance to it. As his white hair swayed in the vast directions the wind gave it, Nate closed his eyes and enjoyed the moments of peace.
He laughed as the 'weapons' grabbed his hips and sat there for moments. Near didn't care for they didn't bother him nor slow down his walking, because these weapons had been more then just useless beings, they were attached to him. Looking around a bit to make sure nothing came at him while he stood there since he didnt want to be caught off guard. Pride talked to him bu before getting a word out near told him to hush as he closed his eyes and listened closely.
Near began to come out of the fuzzy memory. This was at the point that a strange black haired man had came into the area which Nate stood in. Near didn't hear the man at first as he was still in a small shock. "I-I do have ... I have a purpose you shitty slut!" Near said out loud in a yelling voice. The memory had seemed to of engulfed near in a way that would snap a normal person's saneness. But near was much to strong to be snapped by it. Coming from the shock he began to blink his eyes as he toke a gulp and his Adam's apple went up the went back down to the spot it had started at. As his eyes began to catch on to the man who came into the area of his paradise, a foolish mortal who had came down the Path of Death and was about to meet death himself. Giving him a small side glare.
He read the man and his facial movements and make up till it came down to the point he knew who it was. "brother." Near said. With a little shock added to it. He was surprised bait to see someone from his early life, still alive that is. Even though not knowing each other much they both knew each others names, First and last. Looking at his face near saw something that was weird. This thing wasn't to weird but it would be weird for most shinobi who had high ranks in this cruel world. Near saw the hidden expression of someone grieving inside. Something that near encountered once on his shinobi road.
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Still stunned at his brothers expression Near shoke his head. "bro, Your face. Holds so much grieve in it. And I can tell you have let it loose before, But.. How does it feel to let loose such an emotion that could end your own life?" Near asked giving his brother a second to answer the question. "When I left you guys. My Foster father told me something. And from that point I held in all emotions, and anything that would stop me from achieving it. He said this: Save your tears, For that day. When our pains are far behind. On your feet, come with me. We are soldiers stand or die. Save your fears. Take your place. Save them for the judgement day. Fast and free. Follow me. Time to make the sacrifice. We rise or fall....... That was Master gods number one rule. No emotion." near said to him.
Near began to get louder with his speech and began to feel more confident. "I understand it now. I will no longer be a push over to the others. I'm Nate river. And guess what you. I challenge you to a fight. I wanna see your power compared to the other losers and the two guys. Showing you are stronger then your father, I hope this to be fun. Show me what you really got. Your true power!!!!!" Near said as he got into a fighting pose with the hot substance getting into a pose as well. "I call on you.... Pride." He whispered as a laughing noise came from his mouth as it was now filled with pure hate and destruction in its agenda.
Near and pride smiled a bit when he heard his brother agree to them having a small fight. But inside near felt that this fight wasn't going to be good for either of their health. "Hm Yo Nate. I mean Near. Do you really think that you can take on this man. I mean come on look at his dumb crybaby face." Pride said out loud so that near and the man could hear him. "Hey you. I wanna see that power of yours but be warned I'm going to play rouge bitch!." Near's eyes widened a bit and looked at his lighting which was headed toward to him. "Pride that's unnecessary. Watch your tone with others, We have nobody, no friends already you always ruin stuff." Near said to pride. "Goddammit Pride. Your to reckless. Your such a dumb ass. Let's go!" Near said. When he said let's go he meant bring up the guard.
Near hadn't seen the abilities of the man before. At least not all the way. He knew he was strong and fast. But he didn't know how fast he was compared to near himself in a way. The lightning would quickly wrap around near. This movement by pride was to give near time to do a few things.Smiling Nate flew up high into the sky with and jump and headed down to his brother like a torpedo. Once again as near would snap his fingers at him. "Dammit stop it Pride!!"
Near had finally made his first finalization. This was just by what he was doing with his lightning. "How easily he is kinda like me in a way. He is showing me his first element. Which is lightning. Such a powerful element when you think about it. I can destroy so many things. I guess that means its no time to play with him anymore. I'll show you brother what I can really do in a real fight." Near said to pride in their head. Pride's face had a giant grin on it as if near was signing something that pride wanted him to. "What ever you say resonate river. I see your plan now. You didn't even need to thing about it Eh. I under stand my part in this. And yours should be easy. I'll control the right hand. You'll control the left hand. Should be very easy." Nears eyes began to change colors as they glowed in the light and the wind in the area began to get fiercer and blow into both of the male's faces. Blowing Nate's hair upward.
the enemy had turned into some type of lightning mode as it had seemed the man had two chidori's in both hands. Near and pride made a giant smile come on their face. It went from ear to ear. That's when they snapped the right hands fingers sending uncontrollable lighting power at the man's lightning form. This was as if a precaution. Near knew that lightning versus lighting wouldn't do to much but he did have an ideal. As he jumped to the left from the attack and the enemy. the ighting only enhanced his physical strength in a way. As they both would land on the tree the tree would start to crack from the full force of Nate's punch. That's when near would aim both hands to the field. The grin on his face made it obvious that this had been a person near wanted to kill, Jumping from the tree Nate charged at is brother with all his might.
This gave near enough time to do as he wanted. Closing his eyes for a second. Near in a sense rawred like an animal. The sound echoed through the whole Forrest. The lighting began to move around the whole area to gather around the near pride and his brother. With a crazy look in his eyes. Near stared at his brother as the two meet, eye to eye, only to end in his brother totally dodging the attack having Nate hit the ground behind him causing a crater to form, A yell of hate came from Nate's mouth as he glared at his big brother with blood lust. Jumping Out of the crater toward him once more the lightning came caving in on them both Along with the massive amounts of water included in it. With his left hand moving he aimed for his brother's Heart as he snapped his finger lightning came from the gloves. It wasn't to big but the idea was to make him move. The caving in of the water would have a flaw but that would be what his brother would most likely think. Near's hands moved at a fast rate as he did 10 sets o hand signs. Coming from the water as well was ten water dragons from all around near and his brother, all being his brother's. One that came from behind Near swallowed him whole. "Look at him. This is what I live for near. I live for the rush to show other s that you are pride. I am pride. My power is ungodly and I will show both this man and the world this power." pride said to him. As the thunder chakra kept coming into him a noise could be heard from it. "Testing. One two three you fucking idiots. Yep it's me pride. I am the evil manifesto of pride the ungodly sin!!!! Guess what loser. that's right. I watched his body squirm as I crushed it with my power and his blood went all over the battlefield. I could hear his screams of pain and his cries of sorrow as the man was burnt into a third degree burn state, during the war. I murdered your whole life. And I wanna know what are you gonna do about it. Fight me head on. Or Better yet kill the body that holds me and my power. Would you kill resonate river. Put him out of his sadness and sorrow. Will you take a person so innocent's life. Is he innocent. Tell me. Is he dead or is he alive. I mean it's your choice will you let scum like him die. Under the hands of someone else or will you kill him with your own bloody hands boy. Will you boy. Tell me. You damn prick. Will you kill what pride is will you take the life of scum to kill something that beliefs in hell will you travel with me there or will you let me kill each and all of your family members. Unlike raiyeko he is okay since he is dead. Then we have our younger brother. Who is lust. And your good old friend that aopdted boy who is useful. Oh and a big secret is they defected for me. Oh and I bet your wondering if your little cousin jaken will be okay. Oh he will. Now ask me. How do I know this stuff. Because your fighting resonate river. The smartest shinobi in this damned to hell shinobi world. He was taught by the thunder gods himself one of the men who was to kind to anyone the old master of the universe. Tell me brother. Will you rise over the me.... pride!!!!!! How ironic!!!!" Pride yelled at the man as the water crashed down as this would try to drown near.
After that had happened. The real battle had begun. As things weren't bad enough. Near was devoured by his own power as that would be what it would seem like. From the point of near being devoured he began a state of rest from the battle. Once the water had crashed he would awaken from his false slumber. The water would begin to change him. As if he was a devil's spawn. What was near really. "brother. It's your turn. Show me what your ass can do. And I promise I wont kill you. Your cousin showed no sign of being stronger. But I can see it in your face and in your actions you have strength beyond anyone I have ever seen. I wanna see it and I wanna feel the power as you punch me and I burn your flesh off. It'll show you. You. and everyone who dared to set me apart. Such strong people. I wanna see where this started. And I'm gonna say you!!!!!! Your next move better be the one that keep this fight going." Nate said as clapped together the dirt flying through the air. His hands splattering from the sound of it. It was a bloody hell.
Near yelled as if he was in some type of pain. The yell turned into a scream into a laugh they all lasted a minute long. It was as if near was now going crazy from what was going on. "Look at this. you will never forgive me for killing his family member like this. Doesn't it feel hard to bare such a thing doesn't. From the beginning Nate river when you saw your parents killed in front of your eyes. I was born in your mind I was your personal self I was the person you talked to you told me how you felt. Don't you remember. You talked about how it was hard to see them die in front of you. The way. They were still the people who toke care of you. How you said they still loved you even though they threw away there lives for such stupid reasons. Hahahah I was the person. Your crazy near no. You are the spawn. From the day that you killed them all and brought him back to the village to be buried you were branded as crazy." Pride said with the large mouth. "Shut up!!!!!!!!" near yelled at pride at the highest and loudest hole cousin go to make sure that pride could hear him. In a way they weren't worried about what his brother would do a the moment. They didnt care how the battle would end. Near smiled as he saw the fire about to come for him. It was bigger then a bus which surprised near in a sort. As he saw it coming for him near thought to himself as all the water was gone. It all disappeared. As near waited for the fire to get closer to him. That's when the big bang happened. The ground rumbled and all the power Nate needed exploded up 40 feet into the air and 60 feet wide. This covering the area the both of them were in. The power of the wind would cause the rocks to fly through the field and make a barrier for him.The Thunder roared like a train. As it was destroying everything in site the ground was destroyed and the trees were bent back in the other direction. Nate was caught in the attack and blown back as well. This would leave near on one knee with his white hair blowing from the wind. He would look at him as his tears would disappear. He had a hand ready to attack if he wanted to but it would seem that he had full control of his body now. He began to speak. Falling on to the ground as a thud was heard, this due to all the training that had been going on, resonate river had fallen unconscious, in a battle field of destruction. As everything cleared up, it was seen that nothing had really been there, Nate had been fighting nothing but the air. And in the end, was left to lay face down in a giant crater of his pure strength. The boy had expanded his limitless sky and planned on expanding it even more. Nothing was left but to la on his face and wait, as the hours passed by of him sleeping the pain away, did he really expect for someone to come and find him no, but he had expected the figment of his imagination to take him back home. As his eyes had been half open and his mind was keeping him down for the time being. Only to reach the connection of the Mind and Body and Soul to say one line. "The Limitless Sky." He said as he stood up finally, and began to crawl out of the deep hole, headed home after a long day of work.Near would stand up and begin to walk to the cart, he began to wobble and hold his arm. He was in pain but he could not care any less for this thing. He was crying but he didnt want his comrade to see that. He wanted no one to see that he had been in tears from a battle with his mind. As Pride sat in his mind and waited for what was going to come. The end was near and everyone knew that. Making it to the cart he would sit in the cart and continue on to the village hidden in the rain. It was time for the real season to begin and for pride to be created
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