I might be a female.. with power(training)

The sun had rose and the people got up. Walking out of their houses they would begin to go about their daily work. A young.... female would awaken from her sleep and fix her bed up. As she would dress and walk out of the house she would begin the first month of being an Academy student! She began her first day of training by running through the village in search of the training grounds. this would in some way sum up what the girls speed was and it was not that great. She had a speed that seemed to match that of something slower than a normal human. As a young academy student she had yet to have the power of the five gods that ruled the villages in the world. One of the many gods had been her beautiful Raikage. The woman that took her in and allowed her to live in the Hidden village of the clouds. The young girl would first begin her pursuit up one of the mountains near her home. She would run up the steep hill and her breath would start to lose itself. The girl would find her first hill to stop and recover at. Looking over the world and wondering just what she was going to get herself into.

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It began in the night as the stars began to shine. The young girl would sit alone at the top of one of the mountains that surrounded the village. Her green hair seemed darker in the light that shined but the background was beautiful. Each light shined and twinkled and glimmered. Her face would create a smile as she would arise from her sitting position. She would look around in the dark area only to see that she was completely alone. The one tree that held the dummy to it would creek as it grew older on this night. As she would turn to it and take soft steps toward it she would begin to halt at a small distance from it. Her head would then hang down . Her memory would fluster a little. The vision of how her mother and father would flash through her head. A horrifying death that scared her. Their blood dripped on her body and left stains on her clothing, just so she could live.

As this image changed every second of their death and the men who did it she would begin to rage. Her blood would boil up and her skin would shift. This pain in her heart caused her to hate humans and that hate would lead to her rage towards them. Her head would shake at a rapid rate and her mind would seem to be mush. She would scream with a type of scream that seemed to of craved blood. Her head now facing up as her body would under go a change that no man could even dream to do. This type of change was the reason she was wanted dead by the humans of that dreaded village. the animals that roamed that area and were fast asleep, would quickly wake up and leave the vicinity. The girl had changed and the things around her had become different. Her eyes could no long see the beautiful stars that filled the sky for they could only see the blood that filled her heart. She would shift the position of her head down and see the tree. The tree that held the dummy. This dummy had changed to the girl to the figure of a man. A man who had the same composure as the one who killed her foster parents. Her body had begun to change. Her limitation had been strange though as only her right arm would take up this change. To anyone that had been watching it would grow wider then the girls normal arm size, after so it would take up a gray girl and would only stretch to the girls elbow. At this point it would seem to grow in a scaly fashion. Her hand grew larger and the nails would extend. Much like she was a demon sent from hell. As the arm finished its growth the girl would slowly growl. The real her had no idea what had been occurring. As she would begin to run toward the dummy she would first strike a blow to its stomach. within her head it would seem as if the man was taking the blow and holding his stomach. She would smile at this and continue her pursuit at the dummy. Repeatedly striking at it and causing the stuffing to fall out. This seeming at if it had been blood from the man in the young girls eyes until the point that it had been totaled by her.

Within her mind she had been trapped by her own rage. The Rage of that day that felt as if she had finally lost everything that she loved. Her parents had already been dead and as she was taken in by these lovely people, her power would once again take her loved ones. The men who feared her took out everything to get to her. She would struggle with the favt of death and would not accept the trivial idea that people could and would die. But her counterpart, the rage of her life would accept that others could die and that her loved one were to be immortal. She would cry in her head. These tears would fall to the ground and start a ripple. Each tear drop falling and growing until it had flooded her mind. The dummy had been beaten to nothing and the rampage would stop. The girl would freeze in her movement as her mind flooded. She would stop drowning and the light would show through the water. As she reached for it she would start to regain her ability to move her own body. Her arm would surprise her. Her clan's power were that of something that was way more crazy then the people who wanted her dead thought it to be. As she would fall to her knees and begin to breath heavily. Her arm reverting back to normal and her mind going blank for a second. She would fall over and begin a cycle of sleep.

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And the child would lay upon the ground, her mind had been put to rest for the time being as she would recollect her thoughts. The sky would shine bright and the stars would begin to fall from the sky. The hour of the shooting stars would occur and the young girl would miss it as she had been locked inside of her own mind. She would rest to those who had watch but to her she was in deep pain. Locked in her mind had been something that was unbelieveable to the young girl but this thing had occurred. She had been locked in what had been a dark space. The water had dissappeared in her mind and the creature appeared to her. It had no indefinite build or look as it began as something that filled the space of the darkness. Unable to be seen but always present. It would make a certain movement and would cause an outline around itself. It would then take on a form that would seem very familiar to the young girl. This form was that of her mother. As it stared her down, it would give her a smile of deception. This would cause the young girl to go into a fit of screams. her mind would begin to lock her down into a chair. This chair strapping around her and causing her to calm down. The woman began to step closer to her and with that evil smile she would infect the girl with more memories of what she had lost. her mothers warm smile became a torturing thought. The body began to twitch and would utter words that had been unknown to the human language. The girl was having such fits in the real world as well. Her body began a constant change in color constantly from that of the jugo's clans signature grey to the color of her human skin. The fear that she exerted could be seen as it was replaced by the energy the world allowed in. her hands would begin to move on their own and would clutch her head. She would release a scream and that scream would cause the girl to bleed a little. Her voice would die out and it would fill the area with pure silence. Her body constantly shifting from left to right as it would finally stand up from its position. The body would attack the tree with all the force it had, causing hardly any damage to occur to it. The girl had become something of a zombie. The body had its eyes closed as the two would interact inside. The creature had wrapped its hands around the girls neck. Choking her she would try to yell for help. But there had been no help inside the girls own head. Just the two of them, her and her bloodline that took up a being within her head. The being of pure rage had appeared in her head. A being that had no thought process and had no memories, it did what it wanted without a moment to think upon it. Rage had been something that could not be erased in such trivial manners of gaining happiness and love in the world that could simply kill it with the strike of its blade. The bark upon the tree would not buldge but the girls hand would begin to bleed a little as she attacked it. The girl within her head would begin to cry as she would fell betrayed by that person she loved. What was she to do to save her own life.

The young girl would notice that the being had taken on a new appearance as if it had been trying to create a rise out of the girl. This being had the color of black hair and had an eye that took on both the colors of black and red. This man had a smile that wanted blood shed upon it. This man had features that the young girl could not simply scan and pinpoint of what he had bubbled up from. His green jacket and his headband that was hidden through that of shadows. the being took on the form of the child's fear and form of hate. The man she wanted to kill since she lived. She would begin to struggle out of the chair as it would shake rapidly and she would growl at the being. The being keeping that look only to utter words that would anger her even more. "Give that child to us... it must being dealt with or you will be dealt with as well.." The word that had caused her anger to boil up even more. Those words had been the ones that were said just before her mother and father had been killed by this man. Those eyes that the man carried were the eyes of that great clan. The clan the young girl knew nothing of as she had literally been living under a rock. placed in the classes of the academy so that she could finally be considered a genin. But as she attacked the tree it had been shown she was not to close to being at the exact strength as any other genin had been. She was below the definition of such a rank and wanted to reach it so that she could one day conquer that being that won over her ever day. As that being would unstrap her she would rise from her chair. It would back away and begin a line of dodging. As she would attack it, swinging her fist at and trying her best to wound the devil being. She would not leave so much as a print upon the being that had been so much more than that of a genin. His smile continuously refueling her to attack and attack till she had hit him. Her body showing the fight with the air as it constantly hit at the air and showed a face of anger. The body was slowly growing tired as it fought nothing. Inside her head a dripping would occur, much like that of the one from seconds past. She was crying inside her mind as she fought that phantom being till she would hit it. It was no use to allow such a thing to take over and lead her to death but what was it she was supposed to do to make everything better. Her body finally reached its point of breaking as she would fall to the ground. The two feeling this would stop and stare at one another. Her mind would finally go white as her rage would release and she would being a cycle of rest. She was seemed to of been ready for what would soon come to her. Her future.

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