- Hibiki SatoGenin
- Stat Page : Nightmare Circus
Mission Record : Mission Records
Clan Focus : Clanless
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 10925
Puppet Transformation Technique
Sat Nov 11, 2023 2:39 pm
Name:Puppet Transformation Technique
Element:N/A
Rank: D
Specialty: Puppetry
Particular Jutsu Type: N/A
Backstory: The technique was developed by puppet users in order to allow their puppets to blend more naturally and remain hidden in plain sight or to take the appearance of the
Appearance: The puppet transforms in a puff of white obscuring smoke that dissipates a moment later to reveal the new from the user has turned the targeted puppet into.
Handseals:Dog
Duration: Up to 5 posts
Cooldown: Posts used +2
Range: Equals maximum length of the users Chakra Threads
Power: 5
Speed: 5
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: Functions identically as to the regular Transformation Technique but it is instead applied to one target Puppet controlled by the user. The technique requires that the chakra strings remain attached to the puppet for the duration of the technique If the strings are removed or severed from the target puppet, the technique instantly ends.
This technique can be used in combination with Puppet Art: Ventriloquism to create a passable replica of a person controlled by the user.
Mastery allows the user to greatly increase the detail of the transformation and allows the puppet to move smoothly and even hide the distinguishable noise of the joints and mechanisms until they are within 5 meters of the puppet.
Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 500
Action Cost:10, 5 upkeep
Mastery: Yes (to improve detail of transformation)
Bonus Requirements: Puppetry Speciality
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Custom
Element:N/A
Rank: D
Specialty: Puppetry
Particular Jutsu Type: N/A
Backstory: The technique was developed by puppet users in order to allow their puppets to blend more naturally and remain hidden in plain sight or to take the appearance of the
Appearance: The puppet transforms in a puff of white obscuring smoke that dissipates a moment later to reveal the new from the user has turned the targeted puppet into.
Handseals:Dog
Duration: Up to 5 posts
Cooldown: Posts used +2
Range: Equals maximum length of the users Chakra Threads
Power: 5
Speed: 5
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: Functions identically as to the regular Transformation Technique but it is instead applied to one target Puppet controlled by the user. The technique requires that the chakra strings remain attached to the puppet for the duration of the technique If the strings are removed or severed from the target puppet, the technique instantly ends.
This technique can be used in combination with Puppet Art: Ventriloquism to create a passable replica of a person controlled by the user.
Mastery allows the user to greatly increase the detail of the transformation and allows the puppet to move smoothly and even hide the distinguishable noise of the joints and mechanisms until they are within 5 meters of the puppet.
Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 500
Action Cost:10, 5 upkeep
Mastery: Yes (to improve detail of transformation)
Bonus Requirements: Puppetry Speciality
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Custom
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Puppet Transformation Technique
Tue Nov 14, 2023 10:02 am
Hey;
Looks good, just one thing about the mastery. Since you do mention it specifically being a unique one that improves the detail of it, go more in depth as to how and what that mechanically provides or if it would be more of just a neat little thing to add some more flavor.
Looks good, just one thing about the mastery. Since you do mention it specifically being a unique one that improves the detail of it, go more in depth as to how and what that mechanically provides or if it would be more of just a neat little thing to add some more flavor.
- Hibiki SatoGenin
- Stat Page : Nightmare Circus
Mission Record : Mission Records
Clan Focus : Clanless
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 10925
Re: Puppet Transformation Technique
Tue Nov 14, 2023 12:56 pm
Updated
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Puppet Transformation Technique
Wed Nov 15, 2023 6:07 pm
Ok, so for the mastery, that seems decent, however the range needs to be increased. We don't really have full set mechanics for distance at which sound can be heard; however 1 meter seems to be a bit too close given that this doesn't have Sensory as a spec, and it's D Rank.
- Hibiki SatoGenin
- Stat Page : Nightmare Circus
Mission Record : Mission Records
Clan Focus : Clanless
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 10925
Re: Puppet Transformation Technique
Wed Nov 15, 2023 7:16 pm
Updated range of mastery to 5 meters
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Puppet Transformation Technique
Thu Nov 16, 2023 1:19 pm
Approved
Making the note that the noise suppression via Mastery may need a change upon seeing how it fares in combat situations
Making the note that the noise suppression via Mastery may need a change upon seeing how it fares in combat situations
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