Newbies these days {Private/dobby}

It was an average night in the hospital, there were people visiting others. Jashin came up to his dead grandmother, she was dead as stone. He took out his Sword, White Fang and struck it through her heart with no emotion or sadness. Standing there he held his sharingan back. The lights of the hospita were on and blood stained the room. With goggles covering his eyes Jashin spat in her face. "Good Riddance". He looked to see that he had flash bombs in his pockets to prevent any problems in hand. He would hear a whisper turning to see a boy next to the door of the bloody room.

Doby's voice echos at Jashin, "Death never changes, the innocent die for no reason, I will have vengence!" Doby looks down at the floor for a second wondering if it will be worth it. He brings back flashbacks from the blood remembering when his parents were murdered.Doby pulls out a kunai from his left lower leg holster and holds it up to his neck. Doby thought, This is for you dad! Doby runs into the hospital room charging at Jashin with the kunai knife.



Word Count-85

Jashin raised an eyebrow, getting his Doku Fumetsu ready as White fang laid in his case, a purple aura surrounded Jashin as his chakra infused with the blade. He took a flash bomb from his pocket as he ran it had appeared he was going to slash his foe. As he came close enough he tossed the flash bomb in the middle of the two as it would explode by the moment gravity would pull it down. Jashin had his goggles on, at that given time in moment, he would unsleath his White Fang katana as it was meant to clash against his kunai at the given time. Jashin would strike him with Doku Fumetsu at the neck which would leave fatal damages.

Flash Bomb:

Sweat was coming down Doby's face as he was getting nervous. Doby was used to being partially blind but now he was fully blind. Doby's kunai knife broke into pieces before him, Doby fell to the ground and started to think. He knew he only had two choices to make or he would die. Doby started to perform Bushido No Jutsu in which he summoned a clone. The clone was also blind like Doby. Doby grabbed his clone and swung him around trying his best to strike Jashin with any hope left in him.





Word count 94+85=179

JP added +1

Stats added +0

As the the kunai knife had broken into pieces, there would be a slight cut from Doku Fumetsu along his neck. Jashin wielded it backwards and stepped back looking down at him. He looked in pain, Jashin was alarmed at the clone as it was thrown at him. He easily cut it open directly in the middle. There would be a poof of smoke as Jashin looked over to he boy, walking to him. The poison from Doku Fumetsu would make the genin known as Doby numb. Jashin would smile imperviously. "Praise Jashin-Sama.." he would note out loud. He clapped his hands together looking at the boy, "Do you have anything to convey before you die?".

Poison:

Doby sat with his knee on the ground and blood dripping on the hard floor. Doby sat there thinking of everything he could have done and should have done. Doby spoke to Jashin calmly and with little hesitation, "Jashin you have got the best of me today, but maybe tomorrow we could work together to destroy the true evils of the world, why would a shinobi of your caliber kill a fellow Kirigakure ninja? Isn't it the shinobi way that we should band together as a village and defend ourself?"



Word count 179+90=269

JP added +2

Stats added +1 to chakra

Jashin looked directly at the man, "Jashin-Sama, let me spare this child.." he would say. Doku Fumetsu's poison had a special trick which would mash up the boy's chakra system. Jashin grabbed him by his feet, dragging him to a stair case, to the roof of the hospital. Setting him down Jashin took his blood that would be drooling from his mouth and drew the Jashin symbol on the roof with two fingers. Jashin took Doku Fumetsu and struck the tip of the blade into his stomach. Which would cause more poison to flow and cause the many dizzyness and for him to be weakened. Jashin would take it out after 10 seconds still smiling. He would then bend down to the man, reaching for his pocket slipping out the 500 ryo in it and thieving it. "Hehe, Jashin for the win..". He would bag the ryo, taking out hi White Fang blade he would strike it at the same hole where the Doku Fumetsu blade would've cut. As the poison would sink in paralyzing the boy.

Doby stared almost lifeless at Jashin, he then gave off a smile at him. Doby started to crawl over to Jashin until he reached the foot of jashin. He started to climb up to Jashin first grabbing his knee, then grabbing his stomach, until Doby was able to stand up on his own but still very dazing. Doby fell back down and then mumbled to Jashin, "You are a trader to the kirigakure, why would you do such a thing? A shinobi humbled at your caliber striking his own fellow ninja, was this just a trick to weaken the village?"



Word count 100+269=369

JP added +3

Stats added +1 chakra

Jashin narrowed his blade to his throat, "Don't speak now, Jashin-Sama is the code. The code is before the village". He would then rise Doku Fumetsu now, slashing him once more, this time it would be across his chest. "Can't you hear the whispers?" he said smiling. This would silence him up, at least knock him out. Jashin would then take him upon his back, getting away from the hospital into the forest. He would kidnap the boy.
{Exit}

Based on Health:
0-9=Death
10-19= -20 Health
20-29= -15 Health
30-39= -10 Health
40+= -5 Health

As Doby gets slashed by Jashin he is carried to a nearby sea, he slowly opens his eyes but he is still dazing from the blow he took earlier. Doby sees the crash of the waves as he slung over Jashin's shoulders. He notices nearby ships coming and leaving, Doby then slowly starts to lose consciousness again as is still being carried to an unknown place by Jashin.

{EXIT}

Word Count 369+68=436

JP added +4

Stats added +2 chakra