The Bloody Mist Gets Bloodier

Navi wrote:Actually you are free to post in creation stuff if you'd like. All staff have a level of power in all areas, its just that we have more jurisdiction over certain things is all.

Shouten Ataenushi wrote:Blaine, there is a difference in what others have done with WIP's in the past, all of the times I have seen them it was in training topics where they typed up some, then planned on finishing it later.
You left WIP on the post, you did not specify it was for music, therefore the entire post was under construction and thus technically did not exist thus it was voided and skipped.

The OOC narration is also still an issue, feel free to narrate in brackets but not mixed in with the ic actions, thoughts, and speech.

You being on the same boat as the three is also void, you mean to tell me without any ic knowledge of the events destined to occur in Kiri nor a thought process or reasoning you randomly say you are aboard a ship with them.
In order to find their right ship you would of first needed to stalk them and follow them, you do not even know they exist.
Also the timeline manip is also voided, the timeline progressed up to certain points and others responded to it, you cannot say, "two days ago I blew up the ship so nothing happened." you must go in conjunction with the timeline.

Overall the post is void and never occurred, feel free to make another post.

Ivan wrote:
(WiP)

There he stood, now where I simply shall not say I will just state there you insolent little wretches, perhaps if you pay attention and search for the clues you shall find out. However as that will take reading I can only assume that nobody here will actually do that nonetheless care unless they are from Kiri and even then I have no worries about them finding out much less actually being able to do anything about it. If you are my ally you can just stop reading now, this will be a giant waste of your time I promise it. If not then by all means go ahead and peer into the depths of the realm of the mad god, no, not sheogorath for he does not exist on this plane. No the existence I speak of is both ancient and vast, a never ending tributary to the void within that swirls with the eddies of invisible and fathomless energies felt by few and understood by none. Now really one should note before I jump into the murky waters of this post that the sky itself was almost a vastness of pure strength and skill, a dark cloud hung over Kiri that day and they swirled and moved about with the strength of gods immediately jumping up in size after coming out of their home which was the dessicated corpse of a fallen. Before the horns, before the sun even came up there would be an explosion. Not a huge one, for who really cared about the size of such things. The point of doing anything is to get the job done, not to have flash and flare just eek out everywhere and scream look at me. Such filth and foolishness is not the place or reasoning to be in anywhere. Next up, and finally I will describe Royce. Though who he is or what he has to do with Ivan I will not say. With stark white hair that
is worn in spikes one would first assume that Royce was old, however it
is not age bleached. Rather it is youthful like freshly fallen snow, it
cascades down his head like a roaring avalanche. Now that could of course be simply Ivan's grandfather or an intense waking dream or a fearful fantasy of the lives within which one would walk about and go do their business. Who was to know? Who was to say? Often it is messy life and the man's hair, with
thick strands ticking this way and that like he has horrid bed head.
The hair is longer in the back then the front, but most do not notice as
all the hair seems long. Now it is not a mullet, and anyone to suggest that would suffer under the wrath of the man who was often called the fallen angel himself, though to call him that was to be laughably retarded and would be wrong. Wearing a thin white undershirt that blends
into his pale skin, Royce stands at five feet nine inches. He weighs a
total of one hundred and fifty pounds, not including the leather armor
on his arms. Which of course would not add much weight to him, but would not keep him at the stagnant number I had laid before you. The leather is a dull black with red lines along the
knuckles down to the fingers. They have a red design at the top as well,
and the knuckles have metal covering. Quite some pretty colors if I had to say myself. The right arm is almost
completely filled with metal plates, spacing of one inch are in between
the metal. Naturally these plates are not on the joints. It would be asinine to have something like that cover your joints, why one would be unable to move. Two score of the tiny angels with their wings were positioned to help those who sat at the controls. How silly and foolish would that be? Standing immobile like a golem or some weeping angel. On his fingers
are a bunch of rings, this combined with the metal on his knuckles
protects the hands well. Now one should note that this metal is in fact a
great insulator, better than rubber and harder than steel, yet flexible
as cloth and about as heavy as well. Of course none of that matters at all since Royce did not exist in this place, and nor would he be here if he did. Nay the explosion was on the floating driftwood, in the hull to be exact allowing the sapphires to pour in and submerge the wafting thing that danced on the waves. But again that really does not matter that much though a bit more than the last journey or path which you had just eye walked down. The first slaughter would be followed by a second one if those were not careful, a slaughter in Kirikague a rain of blood as it were. As another would kick a door open, if they in fact could they would slice their own leg off due to their scyth's positioning, next they decided to strum it with their right hand which is to say their palm, shaving all their right handed fingers off in an instant. Really quite hilarious is Ivan had been there to witness it, but he was only there for a bit and his hive was nowhere nearby. No shifting throughout the liquid sands was where Ivan was, he had done this after the first slaughter of the day and was enjoying the relaxing breast stroke. Now as for Ivan himself, the shorter man wore his red cloak, although by now it was entirely waterlogged and magically not weighing him down. He wore his black skin tight spandex and his face was covered by the mask of his which shifted according to mood. As it was there were many moods to be had on that day of all days. The day of the bloody son as he would like to call it in alternating flows of time and space. How does one judge space and time however? Are we to assume that our senses are correct? Now that would be a dangerous assumption, what if time were not to exist at all? Now how would that be? An explosion went off before the horns yes, and where it was was where the three naked anbu stood coming from a bug near the hive which was ten feet away from the three. Using his sensing Ivan saw these men and had activated the bugs which would be exploding as they were resting near each man's head.(As these are NPCs I have no qualms in doing this) The three men were huddled together and their heads were almost touching being only two feet away from each one, as such the six bugs which were spread a foot apart each and at eye level ripped the flesh and skull apart before they could even see the boat. This made it so they would never report back to the kage at all, how disappointing. It truly seemed like this would be the end of everything the mist cherished and held dear. Of course as I said those were not the only explosions that day, and one more brought down a dock which would have prevented the boat from landing. Such a nice man Ivan was as he swam in the range of his sensing bugs. The man had noted that his guards were at the base of the building, but I shall clarify that building was one almost on the water. and yes it did recieve some structural damage as well.

There he stood, now where I simply shall not say I will just state there you insolent little wretches, perhaps if you pay attention and search for the clues you shall find out. However as that will take reading I can only assume that nobody here will actually do that nonetheless care unless they are from Kiri and even then I have no worries about them finding out much less actually being able to do anything about it. If you are my ally you can just stop reading now, this will be a giant waste of your time I promise it.

Two score of the tiny angels with their wings were positioned to help
those who sat at the controls. How silly and foolish would that be?
Standing immobile like a golem or some weeping angel. On his fingers
are a bunch of rings, this combined with the metal on his knuckles
protects the hands well.

Nay the explosion was on the floating driftwood, in the hull to be exact
allowing the sapphires to pour in and submerge the wafting thing that
danced on the waves.

Zachariah wrote:Ok several notes.


Driftwood has a hull: bark. You could have exploded a piece of actual driftwood.

Your "hive" is not near you. A hive is "a swarming or teeming multitude." You are near the boat. Therefore there is no "swarming or teeming multitude" near you. Therefore the bugs were not near you to blow up the boat.

Also, WIP!!! The post isn't even valid. Just post it again with the needed edits. If you needed to work on the music code, do it in a test topic, not the actual topic, or make a note in the post that you are working on the music code requesting people not to post until it is complete. This post is voided, and even if it weren't, I just voided several actions.


Also, he would not have cut off his own leg or fingers, read his post and don't underestimate people's abilities to counter what you AGREE IN STAFF CHAT would be an unacceptable form of RP, precisely what you displayed with that section.

Not actually, it was never said what the boat was made out of. So I made it out of drigftwood, driftwood as you said would not have a hull thus there is no way I could have. Logic Zee, you used to use it all the time.

Um nobody else would be voided, it would be permission to edit and that has been proved time and again so again I will say I am waiting for the one person who could possibly hope to mod this.

The Hive is my special ability it is a walking body with bugs in it so, nice try, no not really that was the biggest stretch we have seen here thus far.

SAM

Its her job, so yes she will end up with the final say instead of me. As a battle usually would fall unto me, however I do not battle mod my threads.

As I said before those things were not necessary, I agreed in the staff chat that there must always be clarifications. Which I did...

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