Dagonn's Genin Exam

As Dagonn opened his eyes, he was filled with excitement. All that training he did, it was now worth it. Today was the day of the Genin Exams. Quickly, Dagonn jumped out of his bed and ran as fast as he could into his kitchen. He ate his breakfast and got changed, rushing out of the house with only a few items he could gather.

Dagonn arrived at the Ninja Academy, prepared for whatever would come. He was ready for the exam to start.

The proctor enters the room, looking around at the students who would be taking the exam. There were quite a few, he wondered how many of them would pass the test and become official Genin of the village. The young man held a clipboard in his hand as he walked towards the front of the room. He glanced down at it, looking over the names of all of the students taking the test and wondering who he should pick first.

"Dagonn, you shall be first. Come over here and perform the Henge No Jutsu and the Bunshin No Jutsu. If you succeed you pass and become a Genin of the Village, good luck!"

Nervously, Dagonn stepped towards the front of the room, and eyed the proctor. The young man payed close attention to Dagonn, who looked unconfident and shaken up. Dagonn looked behind him, the line of Academy students that could possibly beat him out of his spot as a genin.
All of the other students in the ninja academy were also scared out of their wits by this exam. Many of the students were white in the face, others clutching their bellies. There must’ve been less than five other students in the class that looked confident enough to pass the exam, the others looking nervous and lacking confidence.
He turned his head left, towards the small window, and he gazed outside. As usual, it was raining in the village, the water splashing against the window. The clouds overtaking the sky. It seemed that the clouds never disappeared in this village. Dagonn wondered what it was like to see the city in sunshine, or another city in sunshine. It was a dream Dagonn had hoped would happen, but he had to focus on the Genin exams at the moment.
Dagonn slowly turned his head back towards the Proctor. His body was shaking with fear, and he didn’t know what he was doing. He wanted to run away as fast as he could, so that he wouldn’t have to do the exams. No, he couldn’t do that, he trained too hard.
All that time spent training, all that hard work and effort he put in. It was not going to go to waste. The painful hours spent throwing rocks around the place, and distributing his chakra to different areas of the body, he wasn’t going to give up all that he worked for now!
He put his hands together and prepared to do the hand signs for the Henge No Jutsu. He quickly sent a bit of chakra to his hands to stop the shaking though.
He had begun doing the hand signs for it without shaking, replicating all of the hand signals almost perfectly. After finishing the hand signs, he said before executing it “Transformation Jutsu!” and he transformed himself into a perfect version of the Proctor. The short black hair, brown eyes, sparkly new suit and clipboard.
For the second time, Dagonn looked back towards his fellow students. They looked surprised at the way that Dagonn had perfectly performed the last Jutsu. A few of them were smiling at him, including a few of the cute girls. Dagonn seemed quite the ladies man at that time.

In the line, one of Dagonn’s friends screamed out “Common Dagonn, you can do it!” Everybody stared at him in disbelief and the Proctor gave him a stern look. Embarrassed, his cheeks flushed a rose red colour, and he buried his face into his hands. Dagonn chuckled lightly, smiling at him and the rest of the class. A few of them gave him a thumbs up. Dagonn felt more confident.
He looked outside the window again, and it seemed that it was less stormy outside. Of course, it was still cloudy outside. It was the Village hidden in the Clouds after all. The strong gales of wind stopped as well, the trees swaying gently from side to side.

Somehow, all of this gave Dagonn a massive boost of confidence. Dagonn wasn’t scared of the Proctor or the exam at all now. The recognition of his fellow classmates, and them enthusiastically supporting him to the point of someone risking failure to encourage him, and also the irregular calmness of the village. This was the confidence boost he needed, what would push him over the edge.

Once again, he looked dead at the Proctors face, and smiled. Dagonn’s smile grew even wider, as he begun to move his hands. He had all his confidence in the people around him. The weather was on his side, his friends were on his side. He knew he could do this, there was absolutely no way of him not passing!

Once again, he swiftly made all the hand signs perfectly, and right before he finished the hand signs he said “Clone Jutsu!” In a mere split-second, a puff of smoke appeared and a perfect Clone appeared beside him, smiling just like his original. Oozing with confidence, he stood there for a good 30 seconds or so, just brimming with confidence.

Dagonn smiled as he walked out of the room, smiling at the rest of his classmates, and giving them a thumbs up. Dagonn was very confident that he would become a Genin after his performance. As he walked out of the room, he was surprised at how easy the exam really was. Then again, he had been solidly practising all this for a long time. He knew he was going to pass the exam. How could he not?

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Exam voided for godmod.
A staff is clearly npcing the proctor, why are you controlling their character?

Edited, still getting used to doing this RP stuff.

Everybody stared at him in disbelief and the Proctor gave him a stern look.

Still left this in.

Post is only 721/800, your missing another 79 words for this post.

Edited.

Approved - Genin obtained.

Thankyou <3