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Atarashī SenjuCitizen
Ryo : 0
general training
Wed May 24, 2017 2:17 am
As Atarashī Senju looked to his classroom door, he started questioning his life decisions. Was he really doing this? Had he died sometime ago and this was his hell? He didn’t really have time to ponder these questions as he walked into the classroom he was supposed to be in (he checked his papers for the thirteenth time to make sure). Inside was a surprisingly empty classroom. Only about ¾ of the desks were occupied. Everyone was staring at Atarashī and he started slowly backing away. Before he could get too far the teacher speaks up. [teacher] “It’s alright. Please come in.” Atarashī walks over to the teacher who addresses the class. “Everyone, we have a new student. His name is Atarashī of the Senju clan.” Everyone says hi and Atarashī says hi back. The teacher addresses Atarashī “My name is Kyōfu Tasuke. It’s nice to meet you. Would you please have a seat?” Atarashī nods and walks over to the seat farthest from everyone else. Kyōfu sighs and addresses the class. “Alright let’s get started.”
176 words intro
Day 1: After a little bit of math Kyōfu takes the class to the gym for a little bit. When they get there Atarashī looked around. The gym had a bunch of stuff that he didn’t understand yet, but he did find one thing he knew, that being a pull up bar. Atarashī walks over to the pull up bar and jumps up to it. He grabs on and just sort of hangs there for a moment. After making sure no one was watching him he starts his first pull up at the academy. It goes surprisingly well, as in it only took him a minute to do it. He relaxed a little and did another. This one was easier and took only about half a minute. He did a few more and his hands started to burn. Despite the pain in his hands he did few more. After that he let go and he had a hard time moving his hands because of how much they hurt. He got a drink and secretly washed his hands to alleviate some of the pain. He went back with his hands feeling better and went back over to the pull up bar. He leapt up to grab it and when he did his hands started hurting again, but not as bad this time. This time when he pulled himself up he didn’t just pull his chin above the bar. He pulled his entire chest above the bar and accidentally hit his head. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next part of the day and Atarashī lowers himself down. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
277 words. +1 strength
The next area seemed to be a room with several small sparring arenas. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up. Atarashī just sort of stands there while everyone pairs up. After everyone else has paired up Atarashī and another of his classmates are they only ones left. Kyōfu tells Atarashī and the other student to pair up. Atarashī walks over to the student and reluctantly says hi. The other student just nods. Once that’s been done Kyōfu tells the students the rules of sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī waits for his opponent to make the first move. The other student charges and attacks with a flurry of fists. Atarashī blocks and starts to get fairly bruised. Atarashī ducks to the side and tries to land a blow on the other student. The student retaliates by elbowing Atarashī in the back. Atarashī drops and before the student can land another blow Atarashī rolls to the side and gets back up. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī gets moved back a little by the force of the kick. The student does some kind of spin kick. The kick knocks Atarashī onto his back. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
244 words, +1 health
The next area is a track. Kyōfu tells the class that who ever runs the most laps for that day will get a special reward. Everyone in the class get excited except for Atarashī who just sort of sighs and looks downtrodden. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in last place and stays there for a long time. After a bit Atarashī passes one student who looks like he’s about to pass out. The running starts to get to Atarashī. Every pound of his feet cause his muscles to shake. His arms start getting heavy from how hard he’s pumping them. His breath starts becoming labored. Somehow he’s able to pass another student who looked like he didn’t care too much. As Atarashī is about to pass another student, said student trips him and Atarashī falls face first into the ground. After Kyōfu used some medical ninjutsu, the trouble making student getting in trouble, and Atarashī calming himself down, Atarashī picks up where he left off in the lap running. He continues to run for as long as he can. After a little bit though he has to stop and rest. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the last place. Atarashī follows after.
234 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. There he instructs the students to sit and meditate. Then he tells the students to try and mix their physical and spiritual energies into chakra and try to maintain that balance for as long as possible. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. It takes a little bit but he starts to meditate after a little bit. After a minute or two he finds his physical energy and his spiritual energy. He starts mixing them inside his abdomen. At first glance it seems to be the case the Atarashī seems to have a knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra. But a little while later the connection starts to fade. Atarashī tries his hardest and the connection becomes stable again but it doesn't seem to be very stable. Atarashī tries mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy in various different combinations. One combination stood out but just as Atarashī was about to try and examine it, it disappeared. Suddenly Atarashī’s chakra flares. For a moment Atarashī is scared but he’s able to calm down and his chakra calms down with him. When he opens his eyes everyone is staring at him and Kyōfu looks very concerned. [Kyōfu] “Are you alright?” [Atarashī] “Yes. Why do you ask?” Kyōfu gives a sigh of relief. Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. Kyōfu Dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
250 words +1 chakra
Day 2: After a little bit of art Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a little bit. When they get there Atarashī looks something else to do. Something that caught his eye was off in a far corner of the room. It was some mats. Atarashī walks over to mats and gets into the position to do some push ups. He goes down and prepares to go back up, but since this spot is more visible it takes a moment for him to work up the nerve to start. After making sure no one was watching him [again] he starts his push ups. It goes surprisingly well. He tensed up a bit when he thought someone was looking at him and slows him down for a bit. It gets easier after a while when he reaffirms to himself no one is watching and making fun of him. He did a few more and his arms started to hurt. Despite the pain in his arms he switches to one fingered push ups. After that he took a small break because of how much his arms and abdomen hurt. He ate some food and then went back to doing his push ups, except he only used one arm at a time and would alternate them. His arms kept hurting but he was able to ignore it. At one point he slipped and fell on his face but he got back into it after a moment. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
269 words +1 strength
The sparring area seemed to have retain a large part of itself. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. Before everyone else has paired up, one of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī hesitantly says yes. The other nods starts talking about something inane. Once that’s been done Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī waits for his opponent to make the first move. The other student charges and attacks with a single powerful blow. Atarashī blocks and takes the blow. Atarashī retaliates with a swing at his opponent's right side and tries to land a blow on the other student. The student retaliates by kneeing Atarashī in the stomach. Atarashī drops and before the student can land another blow Atarashī spins and sweeps his opponent off of his feet. Atarashī moves back a bit as his opponent hits the mat. The student gets up and gets ready for another attack. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī gets moved back and trips from the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. The kick knocks Atarashī onto his back. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
261 words +1 health
Next is the track again. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer will continue to stand. Atarashī just sort of accepts it and continues looks downtrodden. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in last place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes one student who looks like he’s about to pass out. Atarashī starts to catch up to the next student rather quickly. Every pound of his feet causing his muscles to shake and ripple. He passes the third student. His arms start getting heavy, but he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes a fourth student with some effort. His breath starts becoming labored. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down. Atarashī is about to pass another student, but can’t quite do it. Kyōfu continues to observe. Atarashī runs for as long as he can but just can’t seem to pass this next person. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the last place. Atarashī follows after.
219 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. The students sit and meditate again. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. Atarashī gets into the chakra groove pretty quickly. After a minute or two he finds strange energy again. He starts messing with it inside his abdomen. At first it seems to be the case that the strange chakra is stable but it once again disappears. Atarashī’s knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra let’s him bring the strange chakra back for a moment. But a little while later the connection fades. Atarashī tries his hardest but he can’t bring the chakra back. Atarashī tries mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into even more various different combinations, but some starts looking similar. Just as Atarashī was about to quit he tried something different. Atarashī’s chakra flare from yesterday comes back but it’s weaker this time. Atarashī takes the chakra and tries to use it to bring back the strange chakra. For a moment the chakra appears but then is goes away explosively. Atarashī suddenly feels as though he were punched in the gut. When he gets up Kyōfu looks very concerned. [Kyōfu] “Maybe you should be more careful.” [Atarashī] “I know.” Kyōfu gives a sigh of concern. Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. Kyōfu Dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
238 words +1 chakra
Day 3: After a little bit of “english” Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks something new to do. Something that catches his eye was off on a far wall of the room. It was some dumbbells. Atarashī walks over to the dumbbells and grabs some of the lighter ones. He starts lifting the dumbbells slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure no one was making fun of him he starts lifting heavier weights. It goes surprisingly well. He accidentally drops one of the dumbbells and everyone looks at him. He shrinks in stature and waits for everyone to look away. He goes back to lifting when everyone looks away. He did a few more and he started to get board. Despite this he braced through the boredom and continues curling. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to doing his dumbbells, except he starts using much larger weights. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
203 words + 1 strength
The sparring area hasn’t changed a bit. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī hesitantly says yes. The other nods only talks occasionally. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student charges at Atarashī attacks with a swift blow. Atarashī blocks and strikes his opponent. They go back a bit from the blow. Atarashī’s opponent retaliates with a swing at his left side and tries to land a blow on him. Atarashī takes the blow and roles into a crouched stance. Atarashī pounces at the student and tackles him. Atarashī jumps back before the student can land another blow. Atarashī moves back a bit as his opponent hits the mat. The student gets up and gets ready for another attack. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī tanks the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
246 words +1 health
The track continues to be a recurring theme. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer still stands. Atarashī just sort of accepts it and gets ready. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in second to last place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes into the top half of students with the most laps. He passes another student. His arms start going faster, and he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes another student with a bit of effort. His breath starts becoming quicker. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down a bit. Atarashī is about to pass another student, but the student in question is just a bit faster than Atarashī. Kyōfu continues to observe diligently. Atarashī runs for as long as he can but just can’t seem to pass this next person. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the classroom. Atarashī follows after.
207 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. The students sit and meditate again. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. Atarashī gets into the chakra groove almost instantly this time. After a minute or two he finds strange energy again. He starts messing with it inside his abdomen. It seems to be the case that the strange chakra is stable. Atarashī isolates the strange chakra. Atarashī’s knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra let’s him bring the strange chakra into an area where he can examine it. Atarashī starts observing how the chakra acts. It seems to be a mixture of his normal chakra and Another chakra from somewhere else. This second basic chakra is very malleable and has a very sloshy consistency. Atarashī decides it might be a good idea to ask his sensei about the strange chakra. Atarashī’s chakra flare from yesterday doesn’t come back. When it’s time to stop he gets up and Kyōfu looks very happy. [Kyōfu] “did you figure out what was happening?” [Atarashī] “Yes. Sensei, my chakra felt weird.” Kyōfu is confused. [Kyōfu] “Weird how?” Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. [Atarashī] “At first it was normal but then it mixed with another chakra I hadn’t seen before and it became something different.” [Kyōfu] “There’s no need to worry. That’s just your kekkei genkai.” Atarashī nods and Kyōfu dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can so he can ask his father some questions.
255 words +1 chakra
Day 4: After a little bit of general studies Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks for some other new to do. Something that catches his eye was off on a far wall of the room. It was some medicine balls. Atarashī walks over to the medicine balls and grabs some of the lighter ones. He starts swinging the medicine balls slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure no one was watching him he starts lifting heavier weights. It goes well. He accidentally drops one of the medicine balls but catches it before it hits the ground so everyone won’t look at him. He looks around just in case. He goes back to swinging when he made sure no one was looking. He did a few more and he started to get tiered. Despite this he braced through and continues swinging. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to using the medicine balls, except he starts using much larger balls. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
214 words +1 strength
It’s the sparring area hasn’t changed a bit. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī says yes. The other student nods and asks what Atarashī’s style is. Atarashī says he doesn’t know. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student side steps Atarashī’s attack with a swift dodge. Atarashī rolls into a crouched position. The student waits for Atarashī to attack again. Atarashī retaliates with a swing at his left side and tries to land a blow on him. The student dodges towards Atarashī’s right and hits him in the back of the head. Atarashī takes the blow and falls to the mat. Atarashī pounces at the student from the floor and tackles him. The student puts Atarashī into a joint lock. Atarashī stands up a bit and fall onto the student. The student lets go of Atarashī and Atarashī gets up and gets ready for another attack. Atarashī kicks at the student but he counters it with a knee to Atarashī’s back. Atarashī tanks the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
280 words +1 health
The track makes it’s triumphant return as the place after the sparring section. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer still stands. Atarashī gets ready. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in fifth place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes the student in fourth place. He passes another student. His arms start going faster, and he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes another student with a bit of effort. His breath starts becoming quicker. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down a bit. Atarashī is having a hard time keeping first, but the student who’s trying to pass him is just a bit slower than Atarashī. Kyōfu continues to observe diligently. Atarashī runs for as long as he can and continues with his spot in first place. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more and gets first place by just a tiny margin. Kyōfu walks over to Atarashī. [Kyōfu] “Congratulations.” [Atarashī] “What’s my reward?” [Kyōfu] “Have patience. I’ll show you tomorrow.” A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to another room. Atarashī follows after.
223 words +1 speed
The room Kyōfu takes the class to isn’t the classroom. It’s a room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Kyōfu tells the class to transfer their chakra into the statues and try to last as long as possible. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a very fast pace. Atarashī tries to slow down the absorption of his chakra. He manages to slow it down a bit but it’s still pretty fast. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to feel more and more tired. Atarashī continues against the ever hungry statue for control of what was left of his chakra. He can feel his chakra start to give but he continues to persevere in the face of the nondescript monk. Atarashī’s stature starts to decrease as he’s weakened by the drain of chakra by the monk statue. A little bit later Atarashī has to stop the training because he gets too tired. Kyōfu dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
224 words +1 stamina
Day five: After a little bit of general studies Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks for some other new to do. Something that catches his eye was, unfortunately for Atarashī, in the middle of the room. Atarashī asks Kyōfu to spot for him and Kyōfu agrees. It was the weight bench. Atarashī walks over to the bench and puts some of the lighter weights on the bar. He starts bench pressing the weights slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure Kyōfu was spotting him, which he was, he starts pressing heavier weights. After a little bit Atarashī starts to slow down. He sets one the bar down so that he can rest for a moment, after which he starts going again. He focuses all his attention on making sure he doesn’t drop the bar as he continues to press it. He adds even more weight to the bar and keeps pressing. He added more weight and he started to get tired. Despite this he braced through and continues pressing. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to using the bench. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī puts the bar back on the bench. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
240 words +1 strength
It’s sparring time again. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī says yes. The other student nods. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student dodges Atarashī’s attack and tries to perform a counter attack. Atarashī rolls and performs a sweep kick. The student falls to the mat. The student gets up and swings at Atarashī. He retaliates with a counter to the student’s right leg and tries to “pinch” the leg in a joint lock. The student dodges away from Atarashī’s right and tries to hit him in the process. Atarashī takes the blow and counters with a kick to the student’s stomach. The student shrinks back from the blow. The student tries to put Atarashī into a joint lock but Atarashī counters by punching the student in the pressure point just under the ribcage. The student falls to the mat and tries to crawl away while in pain. Atarashī kicks at the student but he counters it with his arm. Atarashī tanks the blow. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
276 words +1 health
The room Kyōfu takes the class to isn’t the track. It’s the room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Everyone of the students is confused. Kyōfu tells the class that the track in under construction so they’ll have to do this for a while. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a slower pace than yesterday because Atarashī knew that he needed to keep his chakra under control. Atarashī tries to slow down the absorption of his chakra even more than yesterday. He manages to slow it down a bit but not by much. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to feel more and more tired but less so than yesterday. Atarashī continues to struggle against the ever hungry statue for control of his chakra. He can feel his chakra start to give after a while and he continues to persevere against the monk. Atarashī starts to weaken his chakra is drained by the monk statue. A little bit later Atarashī stops the training when he’s approached by Kyōfu. Kyōfu dismisses the class to go to the gym and keeps Atarashī behind.
242 words +1 stamina
Kyōfu takes Atarashī to the empty classroom. [Atarashī] “What are we doing here?” [Kyōfu] “I’m going to be teaching you a technique that will help you later on.” [Atarashī] “A: what are you talking about? B: is this the reward for getting the most laps?” [Kyōfu] “Yes it is.” [Atarashī] “What technique are you going to teach me?” [Kyōfu] “I’m going to be teaching you a technique called genjutsu release. It allows the user to escape from most genjutsu they are placed under, though that’s assuming you know you’re under a genjutsu and you have the chakra to break out of the jutsu.” [Atarashī] “Are you going to put me under a genjutsu then?” [Kyōfu] “Yes I am, but don’t worry I won’t try to hurt you. It’ll just make it look like there isn’t a door or windows. I don’t want you to ask for my help so I’ll leave the room and let you try to break the genjutsu on your own.” [Atarashī] “Okay.” [Kyōfu] “the seal for the technique is the tiger seal. You perform the technique by disrupting the chakra in your brain which will disrupt the effects of the genjutsu be resetting your chakra network.” [Atarashī] “Okay. I’m ready.” [Kyōfu] “Good.” Kyōfu makes a couple hand seals and suddenly Atarashī perceives that the door and windows have disappeared. Kyōfu also seems to have disappeared. Atarashī performs the tiger seal and tries to grab his chakra network to speed it up. At first Atarashī can’t get a hold of it and this unfortunate trend of events continues for some time. A little bit later he thinks he’s gotten the hang of it and tries to speed up his chakra to disrupt his sensei’s genjutsu but he looses it pretty fast. Atarashī tries to grab his chakra network again and disrupt the genjutsu, but it doesn’t last much longer than last time. Atarashī tries expelling a lot of his chakra at once to try and “blow the genjutsu out of his body”. It doesn’t work but it does make Atarashī more able to observe his own chakra. Atarashī tries speeding up his chakra again but it still doesn’t go too well. Atarashī starts trying to think of what he need to do to speed up his chakra network to dispel the genjutsu. [Atarashī] “Maybe a significant shock will help me out.” Atarashī starts biting into his own thumb and trying to speed up his chakra. All it does is make speeding up his chakra harder than it was before. Atarashī sits still and just starts speeding up his chakra slowly until he starts losing control and goes even slower in the acceleration of his chakra. At a certain point it stops acceleration and Atarashī has to put more effort into his chakra network to continue the growth of the speed of his chakra network to dispel the genjutsu. Atarashī eventually is able to get it up to speed but it doesn’t seem to be working. Atarashī is confused for a moment but he then gets an idea. Atarashī let's his chakra calm back down, he then performs the jutsu rapidly and it breaks the genjutsu. Atarashī looks around and sees that the room has returned to normal. He also sees Kyōfu. [Atarashī] “That’s not a big surprise.” Kyōfu is confused. [Kyōfu] “Did you know I was here?” [Atarashī] “Sort of. I guessed because you’re a teacher and I’m probably using a high level technique so you wouldn’t be allowed to leave me alone.” Kyōfu dismisses Atarashī and they both go home.
594 words genjutsu release http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22313-genjutsu-release
Day 6: Kyōfu takes the class to the room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Everyone of the students is confused. Kyōfu tells the class that today the class is going to be learning some jutsu and that this will help them prepare for the jutsu. All of the class starts cheering except for Atarashī who just sort of is in awe. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a slower pace than yesterday because Atarashī prepared himself to keep his chakra under control. Atarashī tries something new this time. He manages to get his kekkei genkai chakra to manifest. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to release the chakra into the monk statue. Atarashī continues to push his chakra into the maw of the ever hungry statue. He can feel his chakra start to give after a while and he continues to persevere against the monk. Atarashī starts to weaken his chakra is drained by the monk statue. After a bit the monk stops absorbing his chakra. Atarashī looks at the statue and sees that it’s been warped into a larger form. Kyōfu takes the class back to the classroom.
251 words +1 stamina
Kyōfu takes the class back to the classroom. [Kyōfu] “Alright class, the first technique we’re going to learn is the clone jutsu. The clone jutsu is a ninjutsu that creates an intangible copy of one's own body, without any substance. Since the clone itself doesn't have the ability to attack, and thus can only be used to confuse the enemy, it is mainly used in combination with other ninjutsu. It's a basic technique, but depending on one's ingenuity, it can be used effectively. The clones may not dissipate when they come into contact with something. The user can create at max two replicas of themselves that mirror their actions, these clones are not solid and are just projections of the original. The hand seals for the jutsu are the following: ram, snake, and tiger. Once you’ve performed the hand seals you must then push your chakra into an area near you and shape it into a shape that is similar to yourself. After that you will color and refine the clone until it looks just like you. After that you will link yourself to the clone and it will follow your movements. Be weary though, the clones you make are very obvious if you aren’t careful. These clones won’t disturb the environment, such as they won’t displace water, crush grass, kick up dirt, or create a slight breeze when running. You must also be vigilant. The clones won’t react until you do, so if your clone is attacked you’ll have to react to the attack and edit the clone in real time. They also don’t have a shadow. I’ll demonstrate.” Kyōfu performs the hand seals and creates a clone of himself to his right. [Kyōfu] “Are you ready?” All the class says yes. Both of Kyōfu’s clones disappear and he walks into the room. The class oohs and the feat. Everyone starts trying to perform the jutsu. Atarashī performs the hand seals and starts putting chakra into a place two feet in front of himself. The chakra starts taking his form but it seems to glow a bit for some reason. The clones starts to disperse and Atarashī puts more chakra into it to stabilize it. The clone has a very basic humanoid figure. Atarashī starts shaping the clone to look more like himself. Atarashī’s clone takes on a similar shape to himself but the blue coloration makes it hard to properly shape it so Atarashī starts coloring it in. First he colors his hair, then he colors his skin, then his eyes, then he colors his currently worn clothes, then his shoes, then his socks, and finally he colors the inside of his mouth and the inside of his nose. The clone is not very good. It looks like someone tried to take an eraser to his body and got halfway done before his father came in and killed them in a very slow and a very very painful way. Atarashī starts refining the clone until it looks just like him. He then dispels the jutsu and recasts it. It’s a bit better but he has to make a couple of adjustments. After a little bit it’s back to looking like Atarashī. Atarashī tries to create the second clone and both of them go down in quality by a large margin. Atarashī spends a bit of time tweaking the clones until they both look right. Both of the clones still glow for some reason. Atarashī restricts the chakra flow to the clones and they dim to normal.
588 words clone jutsu http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22310-clone-technique?highlight=clone+jutsu
Once it seems like everyone’s gotten as far as they will today, Kyōfu asks everyone to look at him and pay attention to him. [Kyōfu] “Alright, the next jutsu we’re going to learn is the transformation jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would most likely be interacting with the environment. This puts mental strain on an inexperienced ninja. Thus the best way to determine if there is indeed a transformation in place is to cause this strain upon the user; though this is of course not always successful. This technique allows the ninja to take any form they picture in their head, though they cannot exceed human sized. Do not get any misconceptions, these do not give you any physical boosts. It’s just an illusion.” All of the students nod. [Kyōfu] “Alright. The hand seals for this jutsu are dog, boar, and ram. To perform the jutsu you emit chakra from your entire body and and shape it around yourself. After that you the refine it and color it in a similar fashion to clone jutsu.” Kyōfu performs the hand seals and transforms into one of the wooden statues. He dispels the jutsu a moment later. [Kyōfu] “I think something’s missing though. I wonder where I hid the mirrors for the training of this jutsu.” Atarashī catches the gist and performs the genjutsu release. He sees the mirrors. A couple of other student release themselves as well. [Atarashī] “Please release the jutsu.” Kyōfu smiles and releases the jutsu. Everyone else is in awe. Everyone starts practicing the jutsu. Atarashī walks to a mirror and performs the jutsu. He’s sheathed in a blue cloak of chakra. He starts shaping the chakra into the shape that he wants it to be. But after a little bit the jutsu starts to loose form. This one is harder to maintain because of the fact that it has to come from every part of the body. After a bit of time Atarashī is able to keep the jutsu stable. He finishes shaping the chakra as much as he can. After that he colors the hair, then he colors the skin, then he colors the eyes, then he colors the clothes, then he colors the shoes, then he colors the socks, and finally he colors the inside of the mouth and the inside of the nose. After Atarashī finishes he notices the glow is back. He tries to turn it off but ends up disrupting the jutsu. After a little bit of trial and error Atarashī is able to get the jutsu to where it was before he tried to fix it. He wonders to himself. [Atarashī] ‘Maybe it’s because of my chakra.’ He tries compensation for the disruption and is able to keep the jutsu from glowing. Atarashī adds the final touch and present his transformation jutsu to Kyōfu. [Kyōfu] “It’s impeccable, not to mention an uncanny resemblance.” Atarashī has used the transformation technique to disguise himself as Kyōfu. Kyōfu dismisses class and everyone goes home.
527 words transformation technique http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22306-transformation-technique
4853 words for stat increases
+1709 words for jutsu
6562 sub-total of character boost
+ 176 words for intro
6738 character plus frivolous stuff
I request +3 chakra, +3 stamina, +4 speed, +5 health, +5 strength, the ability to use Genjutsu release, the ability to use the Transformation jutsu, and the ability to use the Clone jutsu
I don’t know if I have this right, but I’d also like to claim the four miscellaneous stat point that resulted from my training for stats ((4853/200=24)-(3+3+4+5+5=20)=4) and the eight miscellaneous stat point from my jutsu training (1709/200=8). That makes thirty two stat points in total (20+4+8=32). Please note that calculations in this part are rounded down.
If I have any of this wrong then please tell me so I can fix it.
176 words intro
Day 1: After a little bit of math Kyōfu takes the class to the gym for a little bit. When they get there Atarashī looked around. The gym had a bunch of stuff that he didn’t understand yet, but he did find one thing he knew, that being a pull up bar. Atarashī walks over to the pull up bar and jumps up to it. He grabs on and just sort of hangs there for a moment. After making sure no one was watching him he starts his first pull up at the academy. It goes surprisingly well, as in it only took him a minute to do it. He relaxed a little and did another. This one was easier and took only about half a minute. He did a few more and his hands started to burn. Despite the pain in his hands he did few more. After that he let go and he had a hard time moving his hands because of how much they hurt. He got a drink and secretly washed his hands to alleviate some of the pain. He went back with his hands feeling better and went back over to the pull up bar. He leapt up to grab it and when he did his hands started hurting again, but not as bad this time. This time when he pulled himself up he didn’t just pull his chin above the bar. He pulled his entire chest above the bar and accidentally hit his head. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next part of the day and Atarashī lowers himself down. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
277 words. +1 strength
The next area seemed to be a room with several small sparring arenas. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up. Atarashī just sort of stands there while everyone pairs up. After everyone else has paired up Atarashī and another of his classmates are they only ones left. Kyōfu tells Atarashī and the other student to pair up. Atarashī walks over to the student and reluctantly says hi. The other student just nods. Once that’s been done Kyōfu tells the students the rules of sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī waits for his opponent to make the first move. The other student charges and attacks with a flurry of fists. Atarashī blocks and starts to get fairly bruised. Atarashī ducks to the side and tries to land a blow on the other student. The student retaliates by elbowing Atarashī in the back. Atarashī drops and before the student can land another blow Atarashī rolls to the side and gets back up. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī gets moved back a little by the force of the kick. The student does some kind of spin kick. The kick knocks Atarashī onto his back. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
244 words, +1 health
The next area is a track. Kyōfu tells the class that who ever runs the most laps for that day will get a special reward. Everyone in the class get excited except for Atarashī who just sort of sighs and looks downtrodden. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in last place and stays there for a long time. After a bit Atarashī passes one student who looks like he’s about to pass out. The running starts to get to Atarashī. Every pound of his feet cause his muscles to shake. His arms start getting heavy from how hard he’s pumping them. His breath starts becoming labored. Somehow he’s able to pass another student who looked like he didn’t care too much. As Atarashī is about to pass another student, said student trips him and Atarashī falls face first into the ground. After Kyōfu used some medical ninjutsu, the trouble making student getting in trouble, and Atarashī calming himself down, Atarashī picks up where he left off in the lap running. He continues to run for as long as he can. After a little bit though he has to stop and rest. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the last place. Atarashī follows after.
234 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. There he instructs the students to sit and meditate. Then he tells the students to try and mix their physical and spiritual energies into chakra and try to maintain that balance for as long as possible. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. It takes a little bit but he starts to meditate after a little bit. After a minute or two he finds his physical energy and his spiritual energy. He starts mixing them inside his abdomen. At first glance it seems to be the case the Atarashī seems to have a knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra. But a little while later the connection starts to fade. Atarashī tries his hardest and the connection becomes stable again but it doesn't seem to be very stable. Atarashī tries mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy in various different combinations. One combination stood out but just as Atarashī was about to try and examine it, it disappeared. Suddenly Atarashī’s chakra flares. For a moment Atarashī is scared but he’s able to calm down and his chakra calms down with him. When he opens his eyes everyone is staring at him and Kyōfu looks very concerned. [Kyōfu] “Are you alright?” [Atarashī] “Yes. Why do you ask?” Kyōfu gives a sigh of relief. Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. Kyōfu Dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
250 words +1 chakra
Day 2: After a little bit of art Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a little bit. When they get there Atarashī looks something else to do. Something that caught his eye was off in a far corner of the room. It was some mats. Atarashī walks over to mats and gets into the position to do some push ups. He goes down and prepares to go back up, but since this spot is more visible it takes a moment for him to work up the nerve to start. After making sure no one was watching him [again] he starts his push ups. It goes surprisingly well. He tensed up a bit when he thought someone was looking at him and slows him down for a bit. It gets easier after a while when he reaffirms to himself no one is watching and making fun of him. He did a few more and his arms started to hurt. Despite the pain in his arms he switches to one fingered push ups. After that he took a small break because of how much his arms and abdomen hurt. He ate some food and then went back to doing his push ups, except he only used one arm at a time and would alternate them. His arms kept hurting but he was able to ignore it. At one point he slipped and fell on his face but he got back into it after a moment. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
269 words +1 strength
The sparring area seemed to have retain a large part of itself. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. Before everyone else has paired up, one of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī hesitantly says yes. The other nods starts talking about something inane. Once that’s been done Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī waits for his opponent to make the first move. The other student charges and attacks with a single powerful blow. Atarashī blocks and takes the blow. Atarashī retaliates with a swing at his opponent's right side and tries to land a blow on the other student. The student retaliates by kneeing Atarashī in the stomach. Atarashī drops and before the student can land another blow Atarashī spins and sweeps his opponent off of his feet. Atarashī moves back a bit as his opponent hits the mat. The student gets up and gets ready for another attack. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī gets moved back and trips from the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. The kick knocks Atarashī onto his back. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
261 words +1 health
Next is the track again. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer will continue to stand. Atarashī just sort of accepts it and continues looks downtrodden. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in last place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes one student who looks like he’s about to pass out. Atarashī starts to catch up to the next student rather quickly. Every pound of his feet causing his muscles to shake and ripple. He passes the third student. His arms start getting heavy, but he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes a fourth student with some effort. His breath starts becoming labored. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down. Atarashī is about to pass another student, but can’t quite do it. Kyōfu continues to observe. Atarashī runs for as long as he can but just can’t seem to pass this next person. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the last place. Atarashī follows after.
219 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. The students sit and meditate again. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. Atarashī gets into the chakra groove pretty quickly. After a minute or two he finds strange energy again. He starts messing with it inside his abdomen. At first it seems to be the case that the strange chakra is stable but it once again disappears. Atarashī’s knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra let’s him bring the strange chakra back for a moment. But a little while later the connection fades. Atarashī tries his hardest but he can’t bring the chakra back. Atarashī tries mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into even more various different combinations, but some starts looking similar. Just as Atarashī was about to quit he tried something different. Atarashī’s chakra flare from yesterday comes back but it’s weaker this time. Atarashī takes the chakra and tries to use it to bring back the strange chakra. For a moment the chakra appears but then is goes away explosively. Atarashī suddenly feels as though he were punched in the gut. When he gets up Kyōfu looks very concerned. [Kyōfu] “Maybe you should be more careful.” [Atarashī] “I know.” Kyōfu gives a sigh of concern. Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. Kyōfu Dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
238 words +1 chakra
Day 3: After a little bit of “english” Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks something new to do. Something that catches his eye was off on a far wall of the room. It was some dumbbells. Atarashī walks over to the dumbbells and grabs some of the lighter ones. He starts lifting the dumbbells slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure no one was making fun of him he starts lifting heavier weights. It goes surprisingly well. He accidentally drops one of the dumbbells and everyone looks at him. He shrinks in stature and waits for everyone to look away. He goes back to lifting when everyone looks away. He did a few more and he started to get board. Despite this he braced through the boredom and continues curling. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to doing his dumbbells, except he starts using much larger weights. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
203 words + 1 strength
The sparring area hasn’t changed a bit. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī hesitantly says yes. The other nods only talks occasionally. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student charges at Atarashī attacks with a swift blow. Atarashī blocks and strikes his opponent. They go back a bit from the blow. Atarashī’s opponent retaliates with a swing at his left side and tries to land a blow on him. Atarashī takes the blow and roles into a crouched stance. Atarashī pounces at the student and tackles him. Atarashī jumps back before the student can land another blow. Atarashī moves back a bit as his opponent hits the mat. The student gets up and gets ready for another attack. The student kicks at Atarashī but he blocks it. Atarashī tanks the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
246 words +1 health
The track continues to be a recurring theme. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer still stands. Atarashī just sort of accepts it and gets ready. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in second to last place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes into the top half of students with the most laps. He passes another student. His arms start going faster, and he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes another student with a bit of effort. His breath starts becoming quicker. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down a bit. Atarashī is about to pass another student, but the student in question is just a bit faster than Atarashī. Kyōfu continues to observe diligently. Atarashī runs for as long as he can but just can’t seem to pass this next person. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more but is unable to do so. A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to the classroom. Atarashī follows after.
207 words +1 speed
Kyōfu takes the students back to the classroom. The students sit and meditate again. Atarashī sits down away from the other students and closes his eyes. Atarashī gets into the chakra groove almost instantly this time. After a minute or two he finds strange energy again. He starts messing with it inside his abdomen. It seems to be the case that the strange chakra is stable. Atarashī isolates the strange chakra. Atarashī’s knack for mixing his physical energy and his spiritual energy into chakra let’s him bring the strange chakra into an area where he can examine it. Atarashī starts observing how the chakra acts. It seems to be a mixture of his normal chakra and Another chakra from somewhere else. This second basic chakra is very malleable and has a very sloshy consistency. Atarashī decides it might be a good idea to ask his sensei about the strange chakra. Atarashī’s chakra flare from yesterday doesn’t come back. When it’s time to stop he gets up and Kyōfu looks very happy. [Kyōfu] “did you figure out what was happening?” [Atarashī] “Yes. Sensei, my chakra felt weird.” Kyōfu is confused. [Kyōfu] “Weird how?” Atarashī starts to get a little nervous. [Atarashī] “At first it was normal but then it mixed with another chakra I hadn’t seen before and it became something different.” [Kyōfu] “There’s no need to worry. That’s just your kekkei genkai.” Atarashī nods and Kyōfu dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can so he can ask his father some questions.
255 words +1 chakra
Day 4: After a little bit of general studies Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks for some other new to do. Something that catches his eye was off on a far wall of the room. It was some medicine balls. Atarashī walks over to the medicine balls and grabs some of the lighter ones. He starts swinging the medicine balls slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure no one was watching him he starts lifting heavier weights. It goes well. He accidentally drops one of the medicine balls but catches it before it hits the ground so everyone won’t look at him. He looks around just in case. He goes back to swinging when he made sure no one was looking. He did a few more and he started to get tiered. Despite this he braced through and continues swinging. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to using the medicine balls, except he starts using much larger balls. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī gets up. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
214 words +1 strength
It’s the sparring area hasn’t changed a bit. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī says yes. The other student nods and asks what Atarashī’s style is. Atarashī says he doesn’t know. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student side steps Atarashī’s attack with a swift dodge. Atarashī rolls into a crouched position. The student waits for Atarashī to attack again. Atarashī retaliates with a swing at his left side and tries to land a blow on him. The student dodges towards Atarashī’s right and hits him in the back of the head. Atarashī takes the blow and falls to the mat. Atarashī pounces at the student from the floor and tackles him. The student puts Atarashī into a joint lock. Atarashī stands up a bit and fall onto the student. The student lets go of Atarashī and Atarashī gets up and gets ready for another attack. Atarashī kicks at the student but he counters it with a knee to Atarashī’s back. Atarashī tanks the force of the kick. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
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The track makes it’s triumphant return as the place after the sparring section. Kyōfu tells the class that his special reward offer still stands. Atarashī gets ready. Everyone sets up on the track. Kyōfu says start and everyone starts running. Atarashī starts off in fifth place but doesn’t stay there for long. After a bit Atarashī passes the student in fourth place. He passes another student. His arms start going faster, and he keeps pumping them for every bit of speed he can get out of them. He passes another student with a bit of effort. His breath starts becoming quicker. Somehow he’s able to pass another student but starts to slow down a bit. Atarashī is having a hard time keeping first, but the student who’s trying to pass him is just a bit slower than Atarashī. Kyōfu continues to observe diligently. Atarashī runs for as long as he can and continues with his spot in first place. After a little bit though he has to start breathing heavily. He tries to run a little bit more and gets first place by just a tiny margin. Kyōfu walks over to Atarashī. [Kyōfu] “Congratulations.” [Atarashī] “What’s my reward?” [Kyōfu] “Have patience. I’ll show you tomorrow.” A little bit latter Kyōfu tells everyone that it’s time to go to another room. Atarashī follows after.
223 words +1 speed
The room Kyōfu takes the class to isn’t the classroom. It’s a room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Kyōfu tells the class to transfer their chakra into the statues and try to last as long as possible. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a very fast pace. Atarashī tries to slow down the absorption of his chakra. He manages to slow it down a bit but it’s still pretty fast. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to feel more and more tired. Atarashī continues against the ever hungry statue for control of what was left of his chakra. He can feel his chakra start to give but he continues to persevere in the face of the nondescript monk. Atarashī’s stature starts to decrease as he’s weakened by the drain of chakra by the monk statue. A little bit later Atarashī has to stop the training because he gets too tired. Kyōfu dismisses the class. Atarashī goes home as fast as he can.
224 words +1 stamina
Day five: After a little bit of general studies Kyōfu takes the class back to the gym for a bit. When they get there Atarashī looks for some other new to do. Something that catches his eye was, unfortunately for Atarashī, in the middle of the room. Atarashī asks Kyōfu to spot for him and Kyōfu agrees. It was the weight bench. Atarashī walks over to the bench and puts some of the lighter weights on the bar. He starts bench pressing the weights slowly and eventually gets up to a moderate speed. After making sure Kyōfu was spotting him, which he was, he starts pressing heavier weights. After a little bit Atarashī starts to slow down. He sets one the bar down so that he can rest for a moment, after which he starts going again. He focuses all his attention on making sure he doesn’t drop the bar as he continues to press it. He adds even more weight to the bar and keeps pressing. He added more weight and he started to get tired. Despite this he braced through and continues pressing. After that he took a small break to rest. He went back to using the bench. His arms start hurting but he was able to ignore it. Kyōfu tells the class it’s time to go to the next area and Atarashī puts the bar back on the bench. Atarashī follows Kyōfu to the next area.
240 words +1 strength
It’s sparring time again. Kyōfu tells everyone to pair up with different people this time. Atarashī just stands there again while everyone pairs up. One of Atarashī’s classmates walks over to him and asks if he wants to spar. Atarashī says yes. The other student nods. Once everyone’s paired up Kyōfu tells the students to start sparring. All of the student pairs walk to their own sparring mats. Atarashī and his partner bow and take defensive stances. Atarashī makes the first move. He charges at the other student. The other student dodges Atarashī’s attack and tries to perform a counter attack. Atarashī rolls and performs a sweep kick. The student falls to the mat. The student gets up and swings at Atarashī. He retaliates with a counter to the student’s right leg and tries to “pinch” the leg in a joint lock. The student dodges away from Atarashī’s right and tries to hit him in the process. Atarashī takes the blow and counters with a kick to the student’s stomach. The student shrinks back from the blow. The student tries to put Atarashī into a joint lock but Atarashī counters by punching the student in the pressure point just under the ribcage. The student falls to the mat and tries to crawl away while in pain. Atarashī kicks at the student but he counters it with his arm. Atarashī tanks the blow. The student tries to tackle Atarashī. Atarashī dodges the attack. Before the other student can land another hit Kyōfu says It’s time to go to the next area. Atarashī and the student bow to one another and then follow Kyōfu to the next room.
276 words +1 health
The room Kyōfu takes the class to isn’t the track. It’s the room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Everyone of the students is confused. Kyōfu tells the class that the track in under construction so they’ll have to do this for a while. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a slower pace than yesterday because Atarashī knew that he needed to keep his chakra under control. Atarashī tries to slow down the absorption of his chakra even more than yesterday. He manages to slow it down a bit but not by much. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to feel more and more tired but less so than yesterday. Atarashī continues to struggle against the ever hungry statue for control of his chakra. He can feel his chakra start to give after a while and he continues to persevere against the monk. Atarashī starts to weaken his chakra is drained by the monk statue. A little bit later Atarashī stops the training when he’s approached by Kyōfu. Kyōfu dismisses the class to go to the gym and keeps Atarashī behind.
242 words +1 stamina
Kyōfu takes Atarashī to the empty classroom. [Atarashī] “What are we doing here?” [Kyōfu] “I’m going to be teaching you a technique that will help you later on.” [Atarashī] “A: what are you talking about? B: is this the reward for getting the most laps?” [Kyōfu] “Yes it is.” [Atarashī] “What technique are you going to teach me?” [Kyōfu] “I’m going to be teaching you a technique called genjutsu release. It allows the user to escape from most genjutsu they are placed under, though that’s assuming you know you’re under a genjutsu and you have the chakra to break out of the jutsu.” [Atarashī] “Are you going to put me under a genjutsu then?” [Kyōfu] “Yes I am, but don’t worry I won’t try to hurt you. It’ll just make it look like there isn’t a door or windows. I don’t want you to ask for my help so I’ll leave the room and let you try to break the genjutsu on your own.” [Atarashī] “Okay.” [Kyōfu] “the seal for the technique is the tiger seal. You perform the technique by disrupting the chakra in your brain which will disrupt the effects of the genjutsu be resetting your chakra network.” [Atarashī] “Okay. I’m ready.” [Kyōfu] “Good.” Kyōfu makes a couple hand seals and suddenly Atarashī perceives that the door and windows have disappeared. Kyōfu also seems to have disappeared. Atarashī performs the tiger seal and tries to grab his chakra network to speed it up. At first Atarashī can’t get a hold of it and this unfortunate trend of events continues for some time. A little bit later he thinks he’s gotten the hang of it and tries to speed up his chakra to disrupt his sensei’s genjutsu but he looses it pretty fast. Atarashī tries to grab his chakra network again and disrupt the genjutsu, but it doesn’t last much longer than last time. Atarashī tries expelling a lot of his chakra at once to try and “blow the genjutsu out of his body”. It doesn’t work but it does make Atarashī more able to observe his own chakra. Atarashī tries speeding up his chakra again but it still doesn’t go too well. Atarashī starts trying to think of what he need to do to speed up his chakra network to dispel the genjutsu. [Atarashī] “Maybe a significant shock will help me out.” Atarashī starts biting into his own thumb and trying to speed up his chakra. All it does is make speeding up his chakra harder than it was before. Atarashī sits still and just starts speeding up his chakra slowly until he starts losing control and goes even slower in the acceleration of his chakra. At a certain point it stops acceleration and Atarashī has to put more effort into his chakra network to continue the growth of the speed of his chakra network to dispel the genjutsu. Atarashī eventually is able to get it up to speed but it doesn’t seem to be working. Atarashī is confused for a moment but he then gets an idea. Atarashī let's his chakra calm back down, he then performs the jutsu rapidly and it breaks the genjutsu. Atarashī looks around and sees that the room has returned to normal. He also sees Kyōfu. [Atarashī] “That’s not a big surprise.” Kyōfu is confused. [Kyōfu] “Did you know I was here?” [Atarashī] “Sort of. I guessed because you’re a teacher and I’m probably using a high level technique so you wouldn’t be allowed to leave me alone.” Kyōfu dismisses Atarashī and they both go home.
594 words genjutsu release http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22313-genjutsu-release
Day 6: Kyōfu takes the class to the room filled with lots of strange wooden statues that look like monks that have both of their hands parallel with the opposite wall with their fingers pointing to the ceiling. Everyone of the students is confused. Kyōfu tells the class that today the class is going to be learning some jutsu and that this will help them prepare for the jutsu. All of the class starts cheering except for Atarashī who just sort of is in awe. Each student walks up to a statue. Atarashī walks up to one of the statues and places his hands on the statue’s hands and starts transferring chakra into the statue. The statue started taking in the chakra at a slower pace than yesterday because Atarashī prepared himself to keep his chakra under control. Atarashī tries something new this time. He manages to get his kekkei genkai chakra to manifest. As his chakra get absorbed by the strange monk statue Atarashī starts to release the chakra into the monk statue. Atarashī continues to push his chakra into the maw of the ever hungry statue. He can feel his chakra start to give after a while and he continues to persevere against the monk. Atarashī starts to weaken his chakra is drained by the monk statue. After a bit the monk stops absorbing his chakra. Atarashī looks at the statue and sees that it’s been warped into a larger form. Kyōfu takes the class back to the classroom.
251 words +1 stamina
Kyōfu takes the class back to the classroom. [Kyōfu] “Alright class, the first technique we’re going to learn is the clone jutsu. The clone jutsu is a ninjutsu that creates an intangible copy of one's own body, without any substance. Since the clone itself doesn't have the ability to attack, and thus can only be used to confuse the enemy, it is mainly used in combination with other ninjutsu. It's a basic technique, but depending on one's ingenuity, it can be used effectively. The clones may not dissipate when they come into contact with something. The user can create at max two replicas of themselves that mirror their actions, these clones are not solid and are just projections of the original. The hand seals for the jutsu are the following: ram, snake, and tiger. Once you’ve performed the hand seals you must then push your chakra into an area near you and shape it into a shape that is similar to yourself. After that you will color and refine the clone until it looks just like you. After that you will link yourself to the clone and it will follow your movements. Be weary though, the clones you make are very obvious if you aren’t careful. These clones won’t disturb the environment, such as they won’t displace water, crush grass, kick up dirt, or create a slight breeze when running. You must also be vigilant. The clones won’t react until you do, so if your clone is attacked you’ll have to react to the attack and edit the clone in real time. They also don’t have a shadow. I’ll demonstrate.” Kyōfu performs the hand seals and creates a clone of himself to his right. [Kyōfu] “Are you ready?” All the class says yes. Both of Kyōfu’s clones disappear and he walks into the room. The class oohs and the feat. Everyone starts trying to perform the jutsu. Atarashī performs the hand seals and starts putting chakra into a place two feet in front of himself. The chakra starts taking his form but it seems to glow a bit for some reason. The clones starts to disperse and Atarashī puts more chakra into it to stabilize it. The clone has a very basic humanoid figure. Atarashī starts shaping the clone to look more like himself. Atarashī’s clone takes on a similar shape to himself but the blue coloration makes it hard to properly shape it so Atarashī starts coloring it in. First he colors his hair, then he colors his skin, then his eyes, then he colors his currently worn clothes, then his shoes, then his socks, and finally he colors the inside of his mouth and the inside of his nose. The clone is not very good. It looks like someone tried to take an eraser to his body and got halfway done before his father came in and killed them in a very slow and a very very painful way. Atarashī starts refining the clone until it looks just like him. He then dispels the jutsu and recasts it. It’s a bit better but he has to make a couple of adjustments. After a little bit it’s back to looking like Atarashī. Atarashī tries to create the second clone and both of them go down in quality by a large margin. Atarashī spends a bit of time tweaking the clones until they both look right. Both of the clones still glow for some reason. Atarashī restricts the chakra flow to the clones and they dim to normal.
588 words clone jutsu http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22310-clone-technique?highlight=clone+jutsu
Once it seems like everyone’s gotten as far as they will today, Kyōfu asks everyone to look at him and pay attention to him. [Kyōfu] “Alright, the next jutsu we’re going to learn is the transformation jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would most likely be interacting with the environment. This puts mental strain on an inexperienced ninja. Thus the best way to determine if there is indeed a transformation in place is to cause this strain upon the user; though this is of course not always successful. This technique allows the ninja to take any form they picture in their head, though they cannot exceed human sized. Do not get any misconceptions, these do not give you any physical boosts. It’s just an illusion.” All of the students nod. [Kyōfu] “Alright. The hand seals for this jutsu are dog, boar, and ram. To perform the jutsu you emit chakra from your entire body and and shape it around yourself. After that you the refine it and color it in a similar fashion to clone jutsu.” Kyōfu performs the hand seals and transforms into one of the wooden statues. He dispels the jutsu a moment later. [Kyōfu] “I think something’s missing though. I wonder where I hid the mirrors for the training of this jutsu.” Atarashī catches the gist and performs the genjutsu release. He sees the mirrors. A couple of other student release themselves as well. [Atarashī] “Please release the jutsu.” Kyōfu smiles and releases the jutsu. Everyone else is in awe. Everyone starts practicing the jutsu. Atarashī walks to a mirror and performs the jutsu. He’s sheathed in a blue cloak of chakra. He starts shaping the chakra into the shape that he wants it to be. But after a little bit the jutsu starts to loose form. This one is harder to maintain because of the fact that it has to come from every part of the body. After a bit of time Atarashī is able to keep the jutsu stable. He finishes shaping the chakra as much as he can. After that he colors the hair, then he colors the skin, then he colors the eyes, then he colors the clothes, then he colors the shoes, then he colors the socks, and finally he colors the inside of the mouth and the inside of the nose. After Atarashī finishes he notices the glow is back. He tries to turn it off but ends up disrupting the jutsu. After a little bit of trial and error Atarashī is able to get the jutsu to where it was before he tried to fix it. He wonders to himself. [Atarashī] ‘Maybe it’s because of my chakra.’ He tries compensation for the disruption and is able to keep the jutsu from glowing. Atarashī adds the final touch and present his transformation jutsu to Kyōfu. [Kyōfu] “It’s impeccable, not to mention an uncanny resemblance.” Atarashī has used the transformation technique to disguise himself as Kyōfu. Kyōfu dismisses class and everyone goes home.
527 words transformation technique http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22306-transformation-technique
4853 words for stat increases
+1709 words for jutsu
6562 sub-total of character boost
+ 176 words for intro
6738 character plus frivolous stuff
I request +3 chakra, +3 stamina, +4 speed, +5 health, +5 strength, the ability to use Genjutsu release, the ability to use the Transformation jutsu, and the ability to use the Clone jutsu
I don’t know if I have this right, but I’d also like to claim the four miscellaneous stat point that resulted from my training for stats ((4853/200=24)-(3+3+4+5+5=20)=4) and the eight miscellaneous stat point from my jutsu training (1709/200=8). That makes thirty two stat points in total (20+4+8=32). Please note that calculations in this part are rounded down.
If I have any of this wrong then please tell me so I can fix it.
Kobayashi Senshi <3Citizen- Ryo : 8700
Re: general training
Wed May 24, 2017 8:15 pm
Ohh God okay to start approved for all claims including the "12 misc stat points"
Allow me to explain: you get stats for all training be it just training normally or training in learning a Jutsu or skill. So there's no misc stat points it's just stat points received for training (1 stat point per 200 words)
Secondly the next topic you do please just post all the words and then at the end do something like this:
Total Word Count: 3000
Claims:
15 Stat Points
(jutsu link)
(skill Link)
Doing it in the format above just makes it much easier on mods. All in all thought great job
Allow me to explain: you get stats for all training be it just training normally or training in learning a Jutsu or skill. So there's no misc stat points it's just stat points received for training (1 stat point per 200 words)
Secondly the next topic you do please just post all the words and then at the end do something like this:
Total Word Count: 3000
Claims:
15 Stat Points
(jutsu link)
(skill Link)
Doing it in the format above just makes it much easier on mods. All in all thought great job
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