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zuyansky
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Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC) Empty Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC)

Fri Feb 22, 2019 10:17 am
Clone Technique Jutsu Lesson
Yan was Sitting in class quietly watching everybody Talking  he hope for a Friend but knew Nobody would talk to Him so he just sat quietly.
*Teacher comes in class, And after him Another Person who looks like him *
*The second Person dissapears into smoke*
Yan is confused but manages to realize it was a clone while everybody had shocked and scared looks on there faces
Yan: You guys know it was a clone right? *Yan says so with a light grin on his face*
*Everyone looks at Yan with unfriendly looks beacause he just insulted his intellegence*
Teacher: So as Yan already noitced today we will be learning the Ninjutsu technique Known as the Clone Technique.
*Teacher starts to demonstrate hand signs , Ram,Snake,Tiger and The teacher Screams "Clone technique Jutsu" and he clones himself*
*Everybody in the class is chanting WOW!!*
Teacher:Would you like to try Yan?
Yan:*looks at him anxiously* Sure.Ill give it a try 
Yan:Starts doing Hand signs *Snake Ram Tiger and He screams "Clone technique jutsu" but nothing happens*
Yan:I messed up the hand signs
*Everybody starts Laughing and Yan can Hear People Saying Loser in the background*
Yan says to the person who screamed loser at him to give it a try
The kid who screamed loser's Name was Iranu 
Iranu:okay *ram snake tiger" "Clone technique Jutsu" And he cloned himself Not once But twice
Yan:*Screams in frastraution* WHAT HOW!!!?!
Iranu:I Guess you just suck Huh?*Chuckeling*
Yan:*has veins popping out of his forehead* OH YEAH?! *THROWS A KUNAI AT HIM*
Iranu::*Catches it and throws it back to yan and Sits down*
Teacher:Good job Iranu.now go practise it kids
*Everyone gathers in groups in class*
Yan:*thinks* welp i am alone i guess ill practise by myself again
A random girl yan has never seen around is walking towards yan 
Yan:*Looks behind him to see if she was walking towards someone behind him and when he turns around She stands Next to him*
Random girl:Hi my name is Miyu. i am new may i work with you
Yan:Hi my name is Yan ill be happy if youll work with me 
*Yan and Miyu start Doing hand signs*
*Ram Snake Tiger "Clone Technique Jutsu"
And both of them make a clone correct 
Teacher:Good job for making a clone now try to make 2 clones 
Yan:TWO CLONES?!?! ill never do it  
Miyu: i Belive in you Yan 
Yan:thanks. you know what teacher ill do it  and i wont make 2 ill make 4!
Teacher:If you think You can
Yan:Oh yes i can ! *Starts doing hand signs* Ram snake Tiger "Clone technique jutsu !" *Yan Feels Chakra flowing his body when he screams "Clone technique jutsu"
and He manages to make 4 Clones*
*Everybody looks shocked* And Iranu even Screams 4 CLONES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Teacher:*jaw Dropped* G-G-GOOD job yan 
Miyu:Wow yan good job
Yan:thanks


Teacher: well guys with that class dismissed
Learned:clone technique 
Health:15(+1)
Chakra:7
Stamina:3
Speed:2(+2)
strength:3

500 words +2 stats
Hikari Namikaze
Hikari Namikaze
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Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC) Empty Re: Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC)

Fri Feb 22, 2019 1:09 pm
Hello.

I am going to let this slide this time, but as I believe you were told on your character application, you are going to need to write this in a novel story structure rather than this play structure you have going on.

Also, in the future, please link the jutsu you are claiming at the bottom of your post.

Approved unless overruled.
zuyansky
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Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC) Empty Re: Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC)

Fri Feb 22, 2019 3:07 pm
Transformation Technique Jutsu


Yan was Sitting in class again He was Bored enough to start Chewing on his pencil.He was Doodling something in His notebook Even Doe He cant draw,he Couldnt hear himself think from all that noise.So Yan Screamed at his classmates To calm Down And took quietly.One of Yan's Classmates rose up From His table which was surronded with People His "Friends",More like followers Yan thought to himself.His name is Iranu.Iranu Went to Yan's chair and said maybe you should calmn down if you dont wanna get beat up uh? he said with a grin on his face and a army of followers laughing after every sentence of his.Yan said sure i'd like to get beat up by you ;).Iranu started to raise his fist but as soon as he was aiming it to Yan's Face the teacher came in the classroom.The teacher looked at them and moitoned his face Telling Iranu to sit down.The teacher started his class by saying "Good morning students,Today we will be learning About the Transformation Jutsu.The transformation Jutsu is a ninjutsu type jutusu that allows a shinobi to Change form into another animal,Human and even a monster.This Jutsu can be preformed by using the hand signs Boar dog Ram ill demonstrate, The teacher started to demonstrate the Hand signs like this 
"BOAR DOG RAM TRANSFORMATION JUTSU TECHNIQUE" and the Teacher Transformed into Yan.Everyone laughed at the sight of Another Yan.And after the laughing parade 
the teacher sent everybody to practice as usual Yan was Practicing With the new girl her name Is Miyu She is the Only one who Talks to Yan.Yan and Miyu Usaully go to Practice 
in the Woods Beacause both of them Like the Nature and it helps them focus.Yan and Miyu were on their way to The Woods To practice  When they encounter Iranu and his "crew"
Iranu said "We have some unfinished buisness dont we?" Followed up by A shuriken Thrown Towards Miyu But She Blocked it with Her kunai.Yan then said Then lets Settle it Us she didnt Do anything to you.Iranu Then followed Up by a Simple Okay and Punch in Yan's face.After a Second of Shock Yan Brang himself Back and Ran at full force Towards Iranu and started to Do the hand signs Ram Snake Tiger "Clone Technique" And 2 more Yan Appeared Beside him.Iranu Threw 3 shurikens at them and the clones faded so Yan Kept Running towards Iranu and he kept and kept running but couldnt Get to him So then He realized he Was under the influence of genjutsu So he Screamed for Miyu To preform Genjutsu release on him And she did and by the time she was done Yan was Transformed into A Lion That ran Towards Iranu and once he got to him he Turned back to Yan and Knocked him out with a punch.The teacher then Approched them telling them He saw the whole thing and he was proud of Yan's Transformation Then after that Yan tutored Miyu and the class was dismissed

this is the link to the jutsu :http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t22306-transformation-technique

i Have gained 2 Stats  

Health:16
Chakra:8(+1)
Stamina:4(+1)
Speed:3
Strength:3


Last edited by zuyansky on Sat Feb 23, 2019 9:57 am; edited 1 time in total
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Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC) Empty Re: Yan's Lessons (Training ,ETC)

Sat Feb 23, 2019 8:03 am
Hi Yan.

Thank you for using the novel structure over the play structure.

the transformation technique "allows the ninja to take any human form they picture in their head".  So its Ok this time, but a lion isn't normally allowed by that technique.

Also 500 words only gets you 2 stats.  You can't save words from previous claims.

If you'd like to do multiple posts but not claim after each one, thats fine.  Then when you do claim you add up all the words to that point in the thread where you claim.  But once you put a claim down, you start fresh after that, nothing rolls over, excess is lost

So 2 stats.
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