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Kosuke Sashihara
Kosuke Sashihara
Citizen
Stat Page : Ko's Chart
Health: 300 | AP: 1440
Vigor: 100 | Chakra: 150
Speed: 40 | Strength: 10

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Sharingan Sensory Empty Re: Sharingan Sensory

Tue Jul 26, 2022 11:54 am
"Power: 40/Chakra Stat"

- Please up the A-rank power to the base value of 50

"While this jutsu is active any jutsu effects that blind the user, deactivate their sharingan, or put their sharingan on cooldown are ineffective unless their power trumps this technique’s power."

- Change the last part to "unless their power is greater than or equal to this technique's power."

- Please state explicitly how this jutsu does or does not interact with the Mangekyo Blindness.

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Kosuke Sashihara
Kosuke Sashihara
Citizen
Stat Page : Ko's Chart
Health: 300 | AP: 1440
Vigor: 100 | Chakra: 150
Speed: 40 | Strength: 10

Remove Remove Iryōjutsu Remove Remove Remove Remove Remove Jikūjutsu Default
Remove Remove Remove Remove Remove Default
Clan Focus : N/A
Village : Vagabonds
Ryo : 90500

Sharingan Sensory Empty Re: Sharingan Sensory

Tue Jul 26, 2022 1:04 pm
Trial Approved!

-Note: Below I will list areas I am uneasy/unsure about for the Full Approval mod to address or ignore as they see fit.

"This jutsu enhances the sensory capabilities of the sharingan granting their sharingan the ability to detect any jutsu within 40/70m of their field of view."

- The wording here may be too broad and all-encompassing. (Presumably it would not be able to see stronger concealment techniques)

"At S rank this jutsu grants the ability to tell when someone is suppressing their chakra and by how much they are doing so."

- See Above

"If the user is a pureblood Uchiha the S rank version allows the user to even tell if someone is a clone and what type of clone they are (living, shadow, etc)."

- Not sure that living clones should fall under this as they are only created from S-rank techniques that are unlearnable and should be mostly identical to the original.

- Finally, this technique seems on the face to be pretty benign, but it has a lot of effects going on. Jutsu detection, targeted jutsu immunity, effect cleansing, and at S-rank it adds in long range chakra sensory. Maybe this is too many effects to get at once, but not enough for me to not give it a Trial Approval.
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Sharingan Sensory Empty Re: Sharingan Sensory

Wed Aug 17, 2022 6:05 pm
Apologies for the wait, completely slipped by the team.

" Likewise, if the user is currently experiencing one of these debilitating effects, then activating this jutsu cleanses said effects for the duration of this jutsu. "
-Add "provided that this technique's power is equal or greater than the power of the debilitating effect(s.)"

Also, yeah this line, ""This jutsu enhances the sensory capabilities of the sharingan granting their sharingan the ability to detect any jutsu within 40/70m of their field of view" will have to be altered to state that a Sensory technique or a technique concealed by a sensory technique with a power equal or greater than the power of this technique will still be undetectable to Sharingan Sensory.

The Pureblood effect...I'm not that against considering that the range of this technique is smaller than a lot of other Sensory techniques and it requires being a Pureblooded Uchiha with the Sensory specialty and spending a S rank slot as well.

Please make the requested edits.

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Stat Page : The Wraith
Legendary Equipment : Hiramekarei

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Clan Focus : Fuuinjutsu
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Sharingan Sensory Empty Re: Sharingan Sensory

Mon Aug 22, 2022 12:30 am
Approved
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