Komatsu's Big Chance [P,NK, Zachariah ]

The punch caught him in the elbow as the ropes obscured his vision just enough. This very reason was why he was training his sensing, constantly trying to feel out the boy in front of him. If he could just achieve it, he would be able to stop using his eyes as his main source of information intake. It was a major downside to himself. He depended on his eyes, but he could not see fast enough for somethings. If someone who was on the speed of some of the greats of times past, such as the fourth hokage who held position after the volcano (note: the current set of hokages were after this one), were to attempt to kill him, he would be unable to react fast enough because his eyes were not fast enough. However, if he could just get the ability to passively sense chakra, he would be able to follow anyone, everyone. His brain already functioned on a level unknown to the common person. Well, when you consider only speed at the very least. "Good move, Komatsu. Keep up those sorts of things and you will go far."

The staff no longer turned, and it disappeared in a puff of smoke. "Perhaps I know someone who will be a better match," Zachariah said as he walked to and stepped outside the door. Closing the door behind him, making sure it would not open, and that Komatsu was still inside, he made the seal that would bring forth Koneko Aichi. Che would be a much more fitting opponent for this child. He and she would walk in after waiting several minutes so as to imitate having taken time to leave and return. When they entered together, Zachariah would, after having checked for and disabled and water traps that may have been prepared over the door using the same method as before, or catching it before it fell, whichever would work better, he would say "This is Koneko. She will be a much better fit for you. I am a Kage, while she is only a student. However, she is quite advanced for a student, so it will likely still be a challenge. I wish you good luck, Komatsu. I will watch what happens from here on out."

Koneko would step forward and assume an attack stance "This should be fun. Don't be too hard on me, please?" she would ask as she put up a bit of a cute/innocent face. Zachariah, at this same time, found himself able to sense them both without concentrating too hard.

(Total words: 1030. Minds Eye of the Kagura trained. Feel free to control Koneko as if she were an NPC to finish your training.

Rank: Academy

Clan: None

Current Stat Points: 61

Health: 15
Chakra: 21
Stamina: 10
Speed: 15
Strength: 5

Specialities: None
Element(s): Lightning
Jutsu Points: 0
Jutsus Unlocked:

Lightning Body Control
Lightning Shock
Storm Cloud Jutsu)

Komatsu jumped back landing almost against the wall, "alright Tenkage-sama I'll do my best." The Tenkage left leaving Komatsu to sit for a moment and gather his energy, hearing the click of the door he jumped back up and stood waiting for the continuation of the match. Looking up at the girl as she entered he tensed momentarily, odds of success rising maybe he could pull this off. She had asked him to go easy on her, he dropped the rope balling his fists at his sides before politely smiling, "how about we both try our best, hm?" Seeing her attack stance Komatsu relaxed his muscles, feeling the sweat drip off his brow as he waited for her first move.

Koneko jumped forward bringing her fist down against the boys knee, quickly landing and dodging back to stand a little distance away. She giggled before starting to circle the boy, she was obviously faster than him. She dropped down getting into a defensive stance at his more than likely attempt at a counter attack. "Come on lets play..."

Komatsu dropped his hand down quickly checking to make sure his knee hadn't been to damaged. Adjusting his stance Komatsu stepped to one side slowly, sweeping low pretending to be going to knock her of her feet, he would then turn tuck his legs in and uppercut the girl while dropping to the side and moving away from the wall. "Very well lets play I suppose."

Smiling to herself the girl easily hopped to avoid the sweeping leg of the boy, only to get caught midair by his uppercut. Landing back on her feet Koneko turned to look at the boy, charging forward she wildly swung at the boys center of mass. "No fair!" She screamed in his face rather angrily.

The boy blocked some of her punches but took the others rolling with the force of the blow to dissipate it without much harm. Grinning the boy swung as if going for her jaw again but switched mid-swing bringing his other hand up and jabbing at the girls throat. Flicking his wrist the boy would barely commit to the attacks before ducking back and motioning for the girl to follow, taunting her.

She dodged the feint leaving herself open to the light flick of his knuckles against her throat, she would have to be careful. Stepping forward putting herself back into punching range she quickly swept for his legs before jabbing at his knees and driving an elbow towards his chest. She was going to drive the air from his lungs and beat on him until he would submit or just slip into unconsciousness.

Komatsu lost his footing for a moment the many blows to his knees and chest starting to accumulate and cause a slowing in his reaction times. Catching a small breath the boy leapt up and dodged around to throw a few more quick jabs at the girls throat. Stepping back he set his stance and started to gather his energy back again, hoping that she would drop from his jabs stopping the flow of oxygen.

Koneko gasped to bring in the air, she hadn't suspected him to get away, it looked like her onslaught was starting to wear the boy down. Turning she offered a hand, "alright lets just call it here for now."

Komatsu stumbled forward being careful to keep his feet as he shook the girls hand, "alright."Koneko flipped the boy and left the building, leaving Komatsu to drag himself off the floor and make his way out of there.

(1680 words total for topic...)

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