- ChishikiCitizen
- Ryo : 3750
Re: ... [IO]
Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:27 pm
On the borders not too far away from his home, Tengakure borders. He would just walk slightly at the borders, looking at the road of Tengkaure. Chishiki was walking on the boarders, gazing upon the land of Tengakure. A boy, more like a man, with a teddy bear mask and a black tank top. Chishiki was wearing his field attire, in case of any emergency to come. Chishiki would be holding his violin in his hands, then playing one specific song, To Glory. Chishiki had his attire of the chain mail, torso armor, gloves, gauntlets, finger piece, katanto and his heavenly phoneix sword. he was also wearing his mask, a mouth mask with the picture of a dragon mouth. This was his attire for the field and just walked around today. He scouted around to see anyone other than the man with the teddy bear mask, but nobody was around.
- Tonotsuchi HaotomeCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: ... [IO]
Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:41 pm
He walked around the borders as he usually did when he was bored. Sunagakure wasn't a place known for how lively it was at all. He wore his usual attire, but this time he only had a white tank top on; it was an especially hot day, and that was saying a lot for a place basically out in the Desert. He wiped some sweat off of his forehead while some of it continued to drip down his perpetually frowning face. It wasn't often for him to speak to others because he looked unapproachable, not that he would really appreciate the company of others too much.
Further down the road, he could hear the distinct sound of a violin playing, he immediately glanced to his side, seeing a young male play a song that sounded familiar to him, but he couldn't quite put his finger on it. What impressed him was how he seemed to be able to play it so effortlessly with all of that heavy equipment on. But when he noticed he was staring for too long, he fixed his gaze forward.
However, when he happened to do that, he saw someone he would deem odd; another young male wearing a teddy bear mask. Tonotsuchi wasn't quite sure why, but something about him ignited a deep disturbance within him, and he found himself involuntarily walking a bit faster compared to before. And unusually, there was a slight hint of nervousness on his face. He was a little surprised by his own reaction. Why did he feel so uneasy about someone with a teddy bear on their head? He shook the thoughts from his head, and soon found himself off the road and on the dirt.
Further down the road, he could hear the distinct sound of a violin playing, he immediately glanced to his side, seeing a young male play a song that sounded familiar to him, but he couldn't quite put his finger on it. What impressed him was how he seemed to be able to play it so effortlessly with all of that heavy equipment on. But when he noticed he was staring for too long, he fixed his gaze forward.
However, when he happened to do that, he saw someone he would deem odd; another young male wearing a teddy bear mask. Tonotsuchi wasn't quite sure why, but something about him ignited a deep disturbance within him, and he found himself involuntarily walking a bit faster compared to before. And unusually, there was a slight hint of nervousness on his face. He was a little surprised by his own reaction. Why did he feel so uneasy about someone with a teddy bear on their head? He shook the thoughts from his head, and soon found himself off the road and on the dirt.
- Samuru UchihaCitizen
- Ryo : 17188
Re: ... [IO]
Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:45 pm
[17:42:53] @ Samuru Uchiha : Ok well here is my verdict, the post is voided for vague manip and a godmod area, restart the topic. The post itself is good aside from that, it was a valid kill on chishiki. Vague manip parts being his location, if you indeed clarified this in the CB you should of had him edit in such as one of his three strikes as mentioned in the rules, since you did not it counts as a forward vague manip and thus voids the post. Godmod area being the street made with copper, since it is going to a hidden village that domain lies with the kage, thus we can call every past Tenkage, and KAzekage in here and ask if they ever made a copper road going through the borders, I doubt they ever have so thus there is not a copper road.
[17:42:57] Irou has been disconnected on Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:42 pm (session timeout)
[17:43:06] Denki Hyuuga : Akira
[17:43:08] Denki Hyuuga : We are training
[17:43:10] Denki Hyuuga : Me and you
[17:44:05] Akuryo Hakugane : Fair enough.
[17:44:25] @ Samuru Uchiha : Tengakure has been poor and run down all while Zee was in power, so they would not have the extra funds to preform such an act.
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[17:42:57] Irou has been disconnected on Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:42 pm (session timeout)
[17:43:06] Denki Hyuuga : Akira
[17:43:08] Denki Hyuuga : We are training
[17:43:10] Denki Hyuuga : Me and you
[17:44:05] Akuryo Hakugane : Fair enough.
[17:44:25] @ Samuru Uchiha : Tengakure has been poor and run down all while Zee was in power, so they would not have the extra funds to preform such an act.
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