- Menma UzumakiCitizen
Ryo : 2500
[Private] Genma's Failure [Closed]
Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:15 pm
Genma made way for the Training Grounds inside of Konohagakure no Sato to of course get some training done. He saw that it was empty and no one was there, perfect, he thought to himself. He began to do basic exercises, first he prepared to do some jogging. He did a few leg stretches and then made his way around the training grounds, running in a circle at a moderate pace. He figured that this was very good, he hoped that no one would come. He also found that there were a few training logs, which would prove useful for him when it came to Taijutsu training, he was a Ninjutsu specialist though. After lapping around the invisible lines twice, he took out a marker and traced lines to represent a little track. He began to run around the track and began to go quicker and quicker.
He felt that it was becoming harder and harder but still he didn't give up with his training, he wasn't supposed to give up, he huffed and puffed, and collapsed against the ground, completely fatigued from his little hardwork. He decided it was time to do something else, and he listened to his gut and began to rest. Clasping his hands together, he recuperated all of his chakra and meditated for awhile, this proved to be worthwhile. For a few minutes, he imagined what he could do if he ever gotten stronger, knowing that he could get stronger some day.
There was no way he'd still weak, he couldn't let himself be a weak ninja, the pride inside of him was rising but didn't get the best of him, he gulped and stood up, glancing at the wooden eight inch log with different sticks pointing out, about half an inch wide. He punched in every direction that the wooden log was visible, kicking and punching repetively with all he had. He breathed heavily, trying to contain his pace and his chakra, "I won't give into my weaknesses! I'll fight them and beat them!"He shouted, punching the air even faster and faster. He kept becoming even more fatigued, and finally he collapsed.
He lost most of his stamina, barely able to move from such consumption of his chakra and his stamina itself. Still, he stood up, he breathed heavily, concentrating his senses and slowly recovering once more. He flinched for a moment, and left the area.[Exit]
He felt that it was becoming harder and harder but still he didn't give up with his training, he wasn't supposed to give up, he huffed and puffed, and collapsed against the ground, completely fatigued from his little hardwork. He decided it was time to do something else, and he listened to his gut and began to rest. Clasping his hands together, he recuperated all of his chakra and meditated for awhile, this proved to be worthwhile. For a few minutes, he imagined what he could do if he ever gotten stronger, knowing that he could get stronger some day.
There was no way he'd still weak, he couldn't let himself be a weak ninja, the pride inside of him was rising but didn't get the best of him, he gulped and stood up, glancing at the wooden eight inch log with different sticks pointing out, about half an inch wide. He punched in every direction that the wooden log was visible, kicking and punching repetively with all he had. He breathed heavily, trying to contain his pace and his chakra, "I won't give into my weaknesses! I'll fight them and beat them!"He shouted, punching the air even faster and faster. He kept becoming even more fatigued, and finally he collapsed.
He lost most of his stamina, barely able to move from such consumption of his chakra and his stamina itself. Still, he stood up, he breathed heavily, concentrating his senses and slowly recovering once more. He flinched for a moment, and left the area.[Exit]
- UchihaLegendCitizen
Ryo : 33200
Re: [Private] Genma's Failure [Closed]
Fri Sep 27, 2013 7:29 pm
Not sure if this is a training thread or not, but there is a few things I seen if it is.
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First off, I do not think you fully understand stamina. Depending on how much stamina you have, depends on how many posts you can last doing actions, not how many actions you are limited to.
Since this is a solo training of just a single post, you do not need to deduct any stamina.
Please fully read about stamina in the stat rules.
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The total wordcount is 405 which amounts to 2 stats, and 4JP.
Next time please include the wordcount, and the calculations of your rewards so it is easier to review.
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If your post is you leaving the thread, you need to put [Exit] at the bottom to say that your fully out of the thread unless stopped. If you are the last person to exit, or if it is a solo thread like this, include [Closed] to say that the topic is fully closed. Otherwise your still considered in the topic, and it being open to join for everyone.
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Make use of the thread tags, since this was a solo thread you should of put private at the top. Otherwise, this compiled with the fact you did not exit, is grounds for someone to enter the topic and do any number of things to your character, which you might not realize at a later date due to you thinking the topic was done and over with.
This is approved, and the topic is closed with the character exiting the thread should this be the conclusion of the training.
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First off, I do not think you fully understand stamina. Depending on how much stamina you have, depends on how many posts you can last doing actions, not how many actions you are limited to.
Since this is a solo training of just a single post, you do not need to deduct any stamina.
Please fully read about stamina in the stat rules.
-)
The total wordcount is 405 which amounts to 2 stats, and 4JP.
Next time please include the wordcount, and the calculations of your rewards so it is easier to review.
-)
If your post is you leaving the thread, you need to put [Exit] at the bottom to say that your fully out of the thread unless stopped. If you are the last person to exit, or if it is a solo thread like this, include [Closed] to say that the topic is fully closed. Otherwise your still considered in the topic, and it being open to join for everyone.
-)
Make use of the thread tags, since this was a solo thread you should of put private at the top. Otherwise, this compiled with the fact you did not exit, is grounds for someone to enter the topic and do any number of things to your character, which you might not realize at a later date due to you thinking the topic was done and over with.
This is approved, and the topic is closed with the character exiting the thread should this be the conclusion of the training.
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