Re: The Shy meets the Sluggard (Private, nk)

Mon Apr 13, 2015 8:59 pm

While that is a reason, its not one that a ninja would usually treat a random stranger to. Basically what you need is either more cd topics to show Ana and Isshin have a deeper bond that warrants such levels of concern or add more detail in this topic to jutify the transfer.

Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:09 pm

Isn't the bond obvious enough? My character doesn't help typical people with training, or offer to train them again, or give them money. Curiosity is enough of a reason to give someone money.

Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:20 pm

Maybe I'm just missing something but a bond develops over time and this is their very first meeting. Anyway, since I probably won't understand the complexities of Isshin's character decisions and I don't want to shortchange you, I'll pass this to another mod for a second opinion. I hope you get a fair verdict on this. <3

Mon Apr 13, 2015 10:35 pm

I'm sorry but unless your character randomly hands all of his money to strangers, I don't see why he'd give money to someone he had just sorta kinda taught a jutsu or two.

Even if the character wasn't your alt I don't believed this would be allowable, I'm sorry but you need to have your characters become more closely associated for simply handing away large sums of money to be a believable action IC.