the blades of the double edge evolution

Shotaro was excited. He could join the two member of his own clan through training. It made him happy. He did not need to train alone anymore. He was genin. The gates were open to him. Aburame head was teaching today. It was beautiful day for Shotaro. He smiled. He listened to what Yensung said. It was important to him now. He sometimes looked at girl, but without any deeper sense. He did not get disturbed by her. It was not that she was not pretty. Shotaro preferred to focus on the training. Like he always did.  He was neither interested in her. A spider web. That was absorbing him. How to make it? This question was in his head. Yensung's lecture was very splendid. He did not bore him. Shotaro knew that he had to get finger out to achieve something. To gather a whole army of pawns. The mock exam was coming. He was quite envious of skill his teacher. But that was normal. He accumulated a  lots of chakra to make that jutsu, which his sensei was talking about. Thus, he spitted on the ground. He expected a great result. But he merely found a thread in his sputum. It was not even a web. And the amount was not enough to catch a bug. He claimed a admirable results. Thus he trained. He stifled bad emotions, which occurred. He compiled a new plan. His jutsu needed to be exceeded with extent. Majority of technique stared out in the battle. Shotaro had more time to practice in peaceful situation. Then in combat he could engage without wound. But brawls was not so simply. Shotaro was accompanied by two member of his clan. That was his first serious group. He bit his nails in act of worry. But he stopped doing that. There was no time for that. Moreover, it was reckless. He needed to be more mature. He had promoted to genin. The higher you are, the more chores you have. There was time for second attempt. Shotaro shut off all senses and focused. He gathered a little bit of chakra in his stomach. He tried to mold it in some web, but he failed. It was not praiseworthy at all. The chakra, which scratched in his abdomen, deceived him. There were no improve. Invariably he failed. It was meaningless, because he had to put a big effort in that to manage. He could retreat, but he did not want to recall. He sighted Yen, who made a web.
- It is difficult - Shotaro said. - but i will manage. 
He smiled and went back to training. A loop of actions repeated. With the same result. The external world did not exist for Shotaro in this moment. It should not have misled you. What i only want to say is, that he concentrated on the task. A stab would for sure reset him. He must have been more exact. Another try. This time he helped himself with a hand sign. He looked earnest and he was aware of that. He did not bother with it. He spitted up. Something looking better was served. He ducked it. Otherwise, he would be nailed to the ground and wet. It was weird. The web was not good enough to handle Shotaro. It was a bit worn-out. It spread and disappeared. It was not tough. Throughout his genin rank he would learn few jutsu. And he would make an enormous effort to know them. Time, when he had done prank, was gone. He thought about a person, who invented all that staff. This person was not a dumb. 

It was not rivalry. He did not race with anyone. No one abused him for his failure. Or he only did not notice. Desirable outcome was waiting somewhere. He developed his his web with every try. Ultimately, he achieve next level. The strand was sticky. Not overly, but still. Bright arose in his head. He needed to work with a shape of that. Threads was too thick and rough. Shotaro should have been able to freely manipulate with that. That's the point. It would be pleasure to know more dangerous technique than Transformation. There was plenty of possibilities. In next attempt Shotaro narrowed the web. He threw it in direction, from where the scream was coming. He hit the grasshopper. It was his first success. He wait impatiently for next. Then no tough would lay a finger on him. He must have mended. Temptation of a break occurred, but he remained. When he tried to approach a bit to Yen, he tripped. He stood up quickly and dusted off himself. 
- I nearly can do that. I need a tip - Shotaro replied.
He showed, what he could do at this time. Some web from his mouth appeared, but it was not big amount.

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Yen smiled at shotaros effort in making webbing and chuckled as he spat out a bit of webbing admist the spittle that projected from his mouth. A slight nodds came from yen  As he discarded the ball of webbing smiling as he massed up his chakra yet again. "Good effort you got the webbing at least formed but you gotta not force it out. Webs require chakra control and mixing of your body chemicals after all you must make a base of liquid and mix your chakra with it in order to make use of the webbing. If it's not balenced your webbing will either not fly or break apart or not stick as intended. You must be ready to face the fact that while it might be weird it's like throwing up. Focus on your goal that must be to create the webbing instead of forcing it ." Yen would speak before taking a breath and mixing his chakra and body fluids he would spit out 4 spider Webs in a nice webby nets at the full force of his technique noting a large crack ecco through the clearing as the wood of the tree had in fact been stripped a bit from it. well now that's something the webbing is surely a powerful solution but  if that's the case then I could in fact make it strong enough to  do  that to another.  Yen thought to himself as he noted the other webbing nets he made made the similar sound as they impacted with the trees. 

"Take note of the power as well as the color of my webs. Normal webbing is often white but through a evolution of my insects well I learned the webbing has a different property to it. I would I'll advise touching the webs of mine unless you would like to lose your own chakra in the progress. But perhaps should you have the will I'll sometime shotaro enable you to use these fellows." Yen spoke as he mentally called up a kilkikaichu to his hand. The female one flew a small circle around yens  head before landing on his outstretched hand. " for the chakra draining property you will require this species of kikaichu they are a fun bunch but unless your body can handle it the change will be painful so your endurance to pain has got to be relatively high. However web making is your goal now focus your chakra into the pit of your stomach and start working your body fluids that way for it won't be that easy  but you can still do it."

Yen would speak as the kilkikaichu retreated back into yens body and taking a breathbyen released one of his newer insects the kilshiku once again taking a seat next to hota as she recovered yen mentally communicated once again with the insect  As a male and female came from the depths of yen and crawled out of his skin bitting into his skin and prepairing to reproduce once more as they did awhile ago. Due to his notes yen  began to uncover the basic fact that they were in fact not only fast producers but also  terribly fragile.  another double edge blade within the spectrum yet they are subtle in nature  still they require a chakra scource from another human to reproduce at the alarming rate. Truely I can see that I can in fact improve them to suit their talents. As I have improved they will not fall behind and in fact may be take over the kilkikaichu spot as a successor.  Yen thought to himself as he evaluated the speed of the insects. It was in truth to his eyes and sense as a insect keeper they lacked the speed and strength to  use their abilities to yens disired tastes. 

Time to buffalo them up a bit. Yen thought to himself as he called out 5 more kilshiku prepairing for a training run for them. All the while carefully monitoring both shotaro and hota for improvements 

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Shotaro felt that would be the last part of his training with this jutsu. He listened to his sensei and noticed further steps. Next lecture was about color of the web, but he had time to mind this. He could train round the clock. He made a stir in his stomach. He toiled with that. His abdomen served as vessel.A little bit of thrust was needed to mix chakra with a fluids from his body. He did not forget about that. He frowned. He bit his thumb. He had to bear proccess of production web. He was not coward. He was in some was valiant. The web flourished there. Shotaro casted it at the tree. The web formed into beautiful gossamer. It did not have enough power to stop a criminals, but it was a step in the right direction. He was glad. He worhisped that gossamer. He tried again. He did not give in. He utilized all sources he had. His subordinates cheered him. Ruckus in his abdominal transformed into a beautiful show. Chakra mixed with chemicalias in good proportions. Shotaro giggled in way he expected some good results. Otherwise it must have been his funeral. He gently combined all the staff with affection. Counsels was useful. He make a motion like he was throwing up. The web was fired with high speed. It was brilliant. He dedicated that one his mother, who always helped him. Whence he aimed into direction of his family house. Of course it would not hit it, because of its range. Shotaro wanted to start learning new technique willingly.
- I succeed! - he announced. - Its all because of you.
He smiled and stared at his sensei.

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Yen chuckled as he took nitevof shotaros progress and smiled. "Good work you did it and learned quickly too." Yen smiled at shotaro as he noted the stickiness and density of the webbing all the while noting the speed in which his kilshiku was moving was far too slow as they may have been a new species for yen yet in comparison to his kilkikaichu they were not up to the bar.  Yet studying the webbing shotaro made he took note of the density and strength as he nodded with approval. "Well I'll be surely glad to have both you and hota as my students. Showing of promise and growth lies within you both." Yen gave hota a small kiss on the cheek as she wasn't feeling well still and smiled. Yet it was a instant before the sound of his kilshiku buzzing above his head at a. Fair speed for them that caught his attention. Speaking back to shotaro yen sat down on the ground as he talked. "What is it that you seek as a shinobi shotaro? and tell me what is it that drives you further down your path  as a an shinobi? Power? Leadership? Knowledge? Loyalty? Adventure? What are your greatest talents and where do they lie in service of konoha?"

These deep questions yen would ask in a more serious tone as he desired to teach shotaro more should he have the will not only as a clans man but also as one in service of the village. The mere idea of loss of potential in a shinobi without a strong goal never Sat well with yen as he was if he had to was going to mold the boy if he had to as a leader and a guide towards his goals even if he had to stand before nature itself to shield both him and hotaru. being a leader has always been my goal and dream maybe not the village but that lies a possibility but also of my clan as head. It's only right to ensure that I'd I'd I'f ready they can too grow within the depths of their duty as my dear beloved is diving into the medical arts I too seek to know what shotaro sees beyond the horizon for himself. Yen thought to himself as his kilshiku began to speed up slowly as they began another speed run set by yen.

Shotaro saw a approval in his senseis eyes. He was glad of that. He smiled. It was a very nice day to him. He thought about what Yen had said. It was quite deep, but Shotaro knew what he meant. So the lessons was not going to be onlu about jutsu. He was learning something more. It molded his nature.
- I am looking for a power, which could make me safety. I favour the genjutsu. I sometimes learn a earth technique. I love my clan for his ability. This is my pathway. Hence i am here. Thine student - he said. When he was saying it, he was not quite sure if it was that, what teacher wanted. He told a bit about himself. Some news, which could help out their relations as a mentor and follower. Shotaro had come into great power. He should have developed it. His childish face disappeared. He thought, if security was the true reason why he wanted the power.  It was quite entertaining.  There was no penalty, even when he deceived them either himself. He was not sure his answer. Wisdom took over his head for a while. And he returned poised.

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"Power huh." Yen looked down as he sighed  before speaking again his yellow auburn eyes shining a bit with seriousness gleaning as bright as his serious was equally reflected in his voice "power is sought by many and used by many more. It is a paradox and a complication in us mortals as all beings that brings corruption to the kindest and humility to the greedy. The doors of chaos can be opened with it, or..." Yens voice trailed off a bit as he thought to his most prized technique as he spoke softly " madness  can be seen. But no matter how much power you seek you can forever chase it but you can chase only a shadow. I can teach you techniques and such but unless you gain wisdom and take your limits in place you could become a shadow of yourself. It's an admireable path as straight forward as it is but take your knowledge as a genjutsu specialist from me a genjutsu specialist. It's a illusion till you realize you have all you need in front of you. The depths of such a easily misleading quest only points to that unless your will can pass your disire your quest makes it so that under almost all scenarios it can be dangerous. Ninja walk along the shadows of death all the time but it's not death you should fear but the loss of self. Be warned as I train you shotaro as your head and teacher."

Yen would relax in a instant as he finished his speech and his kilshiku landed on his shoulder and enteres his skin yen smiled at shotaro as he spoke. "The baisis of genjutsu huh well I'm not best at earth as it's my second element but I got some stuff and skill in genjutsu. Depending how well you do when learning I might in fact teach you one of my own."  It was a thought but yen relaxed shotaro had a while to go and a lot of understanding of himself before he learned that technique. Still as insentive yen chuckled as he began to build up a bit of chakra and preform a few handsigns surely for the splendor to hotaru and a flashback but to show shotaro that there's a great world ahead of him.

Bird-rat-monkey-ox-rat-snake the handsigns were brief but yen smiled as the sky got dark and the  sound of rain began to fill the area as he looked at shotaro he spoke. "What are the basics of genjutsu and tell me a few ways to break free from a genjutsu? This is key to your training" yen awaited shotaro's reply as the rain began to fall around them.

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The teacher tried to explain everything about power to him. He was quite serious. Shotaro still wanted to get power. This disire did not dissolve. He was warned. It was good for him. He thought more about himself. And then was time for training. It could help with it. Wisdom. Shotaro had to gain it throught the life. Otherwise, he wouldn't last. Yen was an expert in Genjutsu, so he was glad having him as a sensei. Shotaro could not wait for moment, when he would learn another technique. He was excited. Sensei did handsigns. Something bad happened. Sky got dark. Shotaro did not know what happened. It was mysterious. He was geting wet. Did Yen has power under water? Shotaro wonedered. Or maybe it was genjutsu about which they were talking? There were no sure answers. Only guesswork. He pondered about genjutsu. There must have been some ways to interrupt it. He recalled what he had learned in the Academy.
- There are few ways. Stop the flow of chakra. There are few option. Someone do it on his own by genjutsu kai or another unaffected ninja apply a sudden surge of chakra into the affected person. This is the easiest way.- Shotaro said and took a little break for breath.
- Another is through intense pain. The real one, no this caused by an illusion. Some clan can do it with theirs bloodline. I do not have a lots of data about that. Strong smells can counter genjutsu. The best way to fight against genjutsu is not be caught.
There was nothing more to say. Shotaro was excited he did such a good job. He hoped that was it and there were no other ways about which he forgot. He smiled even when it was raining. He thought about that rain like a illusion. He could drain himself on sun, if it had not been a bluff. He wondered about that rain a while. He was pretty sure it was illusion. Even if it had not been, he could try escape from it. He took the fastest way. He bit his left arm. A bit of blood leaked down. He screamed. This hunch bothered him. He had to know. Then he did three handsigns fast and started healing the wound, no matter if he was free from the genjutsu. A big mettle was in him. Everyone could see it. He did not mind about girl. She could see him in this no bright situation. He was gutsy. Maybe it was pure luck. Maybe his hunch deceived him. The bugs was one whose knows. He did not meantioned that. The one bug crawled from his skin and went around him. The insect could say if it was raining either not. His body cringed. He was healing himself. His skills in that area was not vast. There was needed time. It was not deep cut either. By the way the taste of blood was pretty good for Shotaro. He liked it. But it was his own liquid. There would time, when he would had to use that way of escaping genjutsu. 

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Shotaro did not know, if he got angry him. But this did not matter. He had a problem to solve. With the fire ball. It was terrible. He knew it was only a genjutsu. But his senses could be deceived. In that case, his own body could make a damage to him. He did not want to happen something like that. He needed to break this illusion. It was not easy. His teacher was more powerful than him. He was intrested in why girl did not say anything. He did not have time for any conclusion. He focused on his task. He knew all the methods of breaking genjutsu. But when he was in stressful situation, he broke down. For his sake he regained consciousness. He thought soberly. All he need to do was made a hand sign. He could do that. He knew about that. Maybe it was not so hard like it seemed. Shotaro looked high at the fire ball and made a hand sign. Tiger. It was all he needed. Sweat from his head dropped on the ground. His fate was in his hands. A small amount of chakra was circuling in his veins. He wanted to stop it for a second. Shotaro needed to break Yen hold over his chakra flow. He concentrated. And the chakra begun to go faster. That was it. It could work. Like they had written in scrolls. It was good feeling. He let it last. He needed more time during his first attempt.
- Release! - He shouted. He hoped it would work.

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Yen nodded as shotaro struggled under the genjutsu yet he susceeded in breaking free he smiled and clapped. "Good work for a moment there I was afraid you couldn't get free. Now I know you are upset at a sudden genjutsu but shotaro it is how it is out there. You never know when you will be attacked or hit even if you could read minds it's inevitable. Plus this is real training you must know The effects to handle it and use it. Unlike medics that must read and study you have to do the same and learn the effects. Under pressure the rules change and panic only makes an illusion stronger just like if you hit someone with a powerful technique and you trained it for ages just so that they shrug and crush you. You must know your limits as and what it is you wish to accomplish."

Yen would weave the handsigns in reverse before the stormy weather dispersed and he nodded at shotaro. "So now tell me what do you think that genjutsu was used for and how can it be used in multiple ways?" Yen would ask with an attentive look on his face as the sun came out from the dark clouds.

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