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- SachikoCitizen
- Ryo : 2002
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 3:47 pm
Sachiko watched her friend silently, inwardly cheering him on. Go, Chishiki! You can do it! Inner Sachiko cheered, causing the tiny girl to quirk a smile. I see what he's trying to do, the young girl thought to herself.
The young girl then decided to help her friend out by giving him more advice. "Chishiki," she started kindly, in a soft voice as not to break her friend's concentration,"You're doing really great! Now, if it helps, just imagine your inner fire as an urn that's tipped over and spilling out small drops of its contents until it trickles into your hand."
The young girl then decided to help her friend out by giving him more advice. "Chishiki," she started kindly, in a soft voice as not to break her friend's concentration,"You're doing really great! Now, if it helps, just imagine your inner fire as an urn that's tipped over and spilling out small drops of its contents until it trickles into your hand."
- LightwindCitizen
- Ryo : 9500
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:03 pm
Hearing the voice of Sachiko, he would then try to imagine the Urn inside him, tipping to the side, feeling the chakra falling from his heart inside his chest and rush the chakra out of his pumped chest and felt the urn's small drops, the drops was chakra, and his hand began to glow blue. He was mentally getting stronger and stronger, but when he tried to feel the fire inside the urn, but when getting a clap on his hand, his concentration was bursting. The urn was breaking and the chakra burst was emerged and blew up his concentration. He then felt pain in his chest, bursting the concentration and felt the pain of no concentration and looked up in the sky, noticing his dad standing there, he then noticed the weather, it was dark and stars was beginning to show up.
''Chishiki, i'm sorry if I destroyed your concentration, but we have to go home now, say good bye to your friend there'' His father would say and begin to drag him away.
Chishiki felt a tear on his cheek and felt the pain, he was so close to do it, and then it all disappeared in a second, he pulled his hand out of his fathers and looked angry at him. Sorrow was in his head now, feeling sadness of his father killing his so close goal, he now had to start from scratch again.
''I WAS SO CLOSE! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING!?'' he would yell and begin to cry, he would run and grab his skateboard, he would then run behind Sachiko. He would stand there behind her and wait for his father to see what was wrong and calm down, Chishiki's father was a good man and loved Chishiki a lot.
''Say goodbye to your friend Chishiki, we'll get back tomorrow, i'm sorry, Chishiki'' he would say calm to Chishiki and see Chishiki dry of his tears and hug Sachiko ''See you tomorrow'' he would say and go to his father, but he still felt the pain in his chest, a feeling in his eyes was tingling. He would stare at Sachiko and smile (but his eyes was changed, the first tomoe awakened ... Knowing that sorrow was still in his heart, he would still smile and hide the sorrow.)
[First tomoe awakened?]
[()=Void]
[Word count: 1.566/2.000]
''Chishiki, i'm sorry if I destroyed your concentration, but we have to go home now, say good bye to your friend there'' His father would say and begin to drag him away.
Chishiki felt a tear on his cheek and felt the pain, he was so close to do it, and then it all disappeared in a second, he pulled his hand out of his fathers and looked angry at him. Sorrow was in his head now, feeling sadness of his father killing his so close goal, he now had to start from scratch again.
''I WAS SO CLOSE! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING!?'' he would yell and begin to cry, he would run and grab his skateboard, he would then run behind Sachiko. He would stand there behind her and wait for his father to see what was wrong and calm down, Chishiki's father was a good man and loved Chishiki a lot.
''Say goodbye to your friend Chishiki, we'll get back tomorrow, i'm sorry, Chishiki'' he would say calm to Chishiki and see Chishiki dry of his tears and hug Sachiko ''See you tomorrow'' he would say and go to his father, but he still felt the pain in his chest, a feeling in his eyes was tingling. He would stare at Sachiko and smile (but his eyes was changed, the first tomoe awakened ... Knowing that sorrow was still in his heart, he would still smile and hide the sorrow.)
[First tomoe awakened?]
[()=Void]
[Word count: 1.566/2.000]
- Primrose UchihaChunin
- Stat Page : Primmys Stats
Mission Record : Prims Missions
Clan Focus : EMS
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 12000
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:17 pm
(Gotta jump in, sorry) Primrose hid in the shadows yet again watching in amusement at her younger cousin. Primmy had awakened hers in sorrow for leaving her family after she found her brother. She kinda rolled her eyes as she stood there. Oh the memories, now here she was watching yet another family member whom she doubted even knew of or remembered her. Alot had changed for Primmy, including the acceptance of two dear people she called brothers. And her new love interest Navi had helped her learn a few things along the way to! She wasn't the same person she use to be. Primrose kept her eyes on her little cousin.
- SachikoCitizen
- Ryo : 2002
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:18 pm
Sachiko's smile was full of pure joy as she saw her friend close to opening his chakra element, until suddenly a voice rang through the air, breaking the boy's concentration. It was his father.
The young girl was filled with rage. How dare he? Chishiki was so close! Angrily, the girl narrowed her eyes and was about to tell the guy off when suddenly her friend burst out yelling.
"I WAS SO CLOSE! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING!?'' He then ran behind Sachiko, hiding from his father until the man came over, crying.
The young girl's sky blue eyes softened before she was hugged. Smiling gently, the young girl returned the hug tightly and said warmly, "See you tomorrow, Chishiki. Please have a good night, 'k? Also, don't worry, I KNOW you'll open your elemental affinity soon."
The young girl was filled with rage. How dare he? Chishiki was so close! Angrily, the girl narrowed her eyes and was about to tell the guy off when suddenly her friend burst out yelling.
"I WAS SO CLOSE! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING!?'' He then ran behind Sachiko, hiding from his father until the man came over, crying.
The young girl's sky blue eyes softened before she was hugged. Smiling gently, the young girl returned the hug tightly and said warmly, "See you tomorrow, Chishiki. Please have a good night, 'k? Also, don't worry, I KNOW you'll open your elemental affinity soon."
- Primrose UchihaChunin
- Stat Page : Primmys Stats
Mission Record : Prims Missions
Clan Focus : EMS
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 12000
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:33 pm
{Primmy exits yet again}
- LightwindCitizen
- Ryo : 9500
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:11 am
[Need a Mod here, have i gained the First Tomoe yet? I felt hard sorrow when my dad interrupted me and I began to cry like a little baby :3]
- UchihaLegendCitizen
- Ryo : 33200
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:21 am
The emotions have to be brought about by an actual character, you can not manipulate the situation with your own npc, sorry but denied for Sharingan awakening so that part of your post is hereby void.
- LightwindCitizen
- Ryo : 9500
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:24 am
e]
About the Uchiha Clan
Specifically about the Uchiha clan, there are some rules regarding the Sharingan.
Sharingan Rules:
Must master the prior level of sharingan before being allowed the next state, you only get the powers of the tomoe if you master it.
You may use NPC to awaken the Sharingan, and advance it to the third tomoe, but if this route is taken the post must be a minimum of 2K words per tomoe, no stats are given also due to this reflecting character development.
I'm going to write 2k words then :P]
- UchihaLegendCitizen
- Ryo : 33200
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:36 am
Happy writing
- LightwindCitizen
- Ryo : 9500
Re: Chishiki's hard training [Open/NKill]
Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:25 am
A NEW DAY
It was morning again, Chishiki was walking towards the training grounds again, he would look after Sachiko, of course he wasn't sure if she would appear this early at the day, in Kumogakure. Chishiki would then get help from his father, he stood there and prepared his chakra as an urn again. The urn with the fire chakra, that tilted a little to the side and dropped some drops of charka, slowly and steady the chakra flew out in his arm and formed in his hands. As he then formed the chakra into fire nature and it ignited and turned into fire. The fire unleashed and Chishiki's father applauded loudly and Chishiki left the chakra again, this time without a burst. Chishiki's father then gave his son some claps on his shoulder and then walked away to sit at the bench not too far away.
Chishiki would then notice a shadow at the horizon and he would try to identify the shadow, it appeared to be Sachiko. Chishiki would straighten his back and look at the shadow getting nearer and nearer. Chishiki would run at the direction and get closer to Sachiko.
''Be careful, you could trip!'' Chishiki's father would say to Chishiki running away. And as talking about the devil, Chishiki would trip and face plant on the ground. He would the lift his body up again and cry. Some small pointy rocks on the ground had made some wounds in his face and there appeared a bit blood, but not the worst. Chishiki would stand up and dry off his tears and try to get teh worst amount of blood off.
It was morning again, Chishiki was walking towards the training grounds again, he would look after Sachiko, of course he wasn't sure if she would appear this early at the day, in Kumogakure. Chishiki would then get help from his father, he stood there and prepared his chakra as an urn again. The urn with the fire chakra, that tilted a little to the side and dropped some drops of charka, slowly and steady the chakra flew out in his arm and formed in his hands. As he then formed the chakra into fire nature and it ignited and turned into fire. The fire unleashed and Chishiki's father applauded loudly and Chishiki left the chakra again, this time without a burst. Chishiki's father then gave his son some claps on his shoulder and then walked away to sit at the bench not too far away.
Chishiki would then notice a shadow at the horizon and he would try to identify the shadow, it appeared to be Sachiko. Chishiki would straighten his back and look at the shadow getting nearer and nearer. Chishiki would run at the direction and get closer to Sachiko.
''Be careful, you could trip!'' Chishiki's father would say to Chishiki running away. And as talking about the devil, Chishiki would trip and face plant on the ground. He would the lift his body up again and cry. Some small pointy rocks on the ground had made some wounds in his face and there appeared a bit blood, but not the worst. Chishiki would stand up and dry off his tears and try to get teh worst amount of blood off.
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