Arrival at Suna's gates

The beast seeing that Kurisu sacrificed his own arm to avoid damage to his throat, and wind pipe shows a few things, that he is a true warrior, willing to take pain to keep fighting, but also that he is becoming desperate. After slamming him into the ground he watches him cough and gasp for air before getting up and trying to speak with him, for some reason the Raikage thinks that he can make him stop by trying to relate, and to show compassion and forgiveness toward him, the mere thought of it makes him laugh. Why would he, the strongest of all tailed beast care if he had befriended one of his peons? Why would he care if he was forgiven for his actions? Why would he, a powerful proud demon agree to being a slave once more? Although one part of his meaningless rant did make some sense, take some anger out on him? he would be glad to. These thoughts flow through his mind as the beast begins to slowly walk forward toward Kurisu in the stance that he was in before as he wants to show him once again the power that he now has, so that maybe he will realize that his plan of trying to reason with him, is nothing more than a child's fantasy.


"You really think that talking is going to help you now? Do you honestly think that a pathetic human can hope to reason with me?" The beast says as he continues to walk forward toward Kurisu, walking very slowly toward him as Kurisu if he continues with his planned attack strikes out with his right fist, aiming toward Koroshi's face. Seeing the attacking coming very clearly he thinks that he is going to show him how demonic he truly is. So he allows the fist to come closer and closer to him, but right before it is about to come in contact with him, the beast opens his mouth bearing his fangs for a fraction of a second before biting down into Kurisu's fist, ripping through his flesh, but stopping however at his bone, thus stopping the force of his punch. The bite would cause Kurisu's hand to begin to free flow with blood as it pours out of him, and drips on the floor. Should this not stop Kurisu's other attacks, he would see the leg coming at him out of the corner of his eye with his sharingan, and would yank backwards on his hand while stepping backward,  this causing the beasts teeth to dig into the other parts of his hand, ripping into them as Kurisu is forced to hop forward on his right leg, causing the kick to stop due to the lack of balance, the kick would lose all power.

With him losing balance in this way, it is unlikely that he is going to be able to attempt his third attack, the punch with his wounded left arm, however if it does not and he continues with it, Koroshi would use his right hand to catch to in his palm, squeezing it tightly, while pushing forward toward Kurisu, this forcing his hand and wrist into his arm to cause him a great deal of pain. With the attack stopped he would use his free hand to punch forward at Kurisu, slamming it into his ribcage, the force of the attack would be enough to break whatever ribs he happened to hit, Koroshi's medical sharingan allowing him to see the bones snap from the pressure, which causes the beast to get even more excited. He would continue to release punch after punch into the Raikage's ribs until there is nothing left but splinters.

In the more likely event however that the third attack does not go through, The beast in stead would begin to shake his head and body from left to right, this causes his fangs to rip and dig more into Kurisu's hand, while also with the force and strength behind the beasts neck, jaw, back, and other parts of the body, he is able to force him off of the ground, swinging him from left to right in mid air by his hand which is gushing with blood, as with the added motion it begins to splatter around them, making this scene look rather gory. The beast would shake him around for some time, wanting to cause him a great deal of pain, as well as to hopefully get him past the idea that talking is still going to work on him. The shaking would continue for some time until their is a nice bloodly line around him from all of the shaking, afterward he would release him from his jaws, sending him flying a few feet to the right with all of his might, if he does not do anything to catch himself, the Raikage would slam into the ground, forming a huge crater around him as the ground cracks and breaks away from him, leaving him in a bloody pile of rubble. "You see, this is what happens when you mess with the best, the best in the world!" The beast says with his same twisted grin, however after he finishes a look of horror appears on his face as some of Echo's personality is still in his mind, corrupting him, and influencing his actions, in this brief moment, Koroshi who is still within his own mind hears the sound of a heart beat, and some light before it vanishes, seeing that the beasts control weakened for a moment, before he took the control back. "Grrr damn him, damn that brat! damn all of you humans, you are nothing more than a disease to us!" The beast growls out as he leaps into the air, hoping to land on the rubble that is covering Kurisu, should he still be there, should he land on him this would break a lot of his bones due to the armor not being there to protect him, and how much strength and force the beast put into this attack, once he lands on him however he does not stop there, he leans down grabs him by the throat while stepping off of his body, and lifts him into the air in front of him, he glares at his form for a moment before dropping him, while he is dropping it is as if the scene is going in slow motion for him, wanting to do a great deal of damage the beast does a quick turn, spinning to his right until he makes a full circle, while he is in the middle of this motion however he kicks his right leg backwards, using the momentum of the spin to deliver a divesting kick to Kurisu's chest, sending him flying at great speeds toward the wall of the crater that was formed from the beasts last attack. If not stopped by any means Kurisu's body would fly through the wall, through the earth for 50 meters before slowing to a stop, the rest of the earth falling in on him, trapping him there

Darkness. It was all Kurisu could see after a while and it wasn't unexpected as he had done many horrible things in his life, hell would be his new home once the kyuubi was done with him. Before the darkness there was the torture, the biting into his hand, his kick doing nothing, his final attack being stopped and leading the kyuubi to relentlessly punish his ribs. Breathing became sporadic and difficult with his lungs cut up with fragments of his ribs. Blood seemed to be everywhere around him and covering both him and the kyuubi, even with his broken state he was still able to rise back to his feet and stare at the kyuubi with blurry vision.

He wasn't sure what had kept him standing at that time but he could clearly hear the kyuubi speak like Echo for a moment before getting mad about it. "Y...Yeah you so..sounded just like Echo..." he had a hard time trying to speak. "Too bad y...you're weaker than Echo." he gave a light laugh along with coughing out blood at times during the talk. Probably wasn't smart at the time to have pissed off the kyuubi and maybe that was what ended up getting him killed. 

Losing his balance he'd fall to the ground just as the Kyuubi leap to the air and slammed down on him, at this point he had lost count of the broken bones and how much blood he'd lost from his wounds. The Kyuubi seemed to not care and simply grabbed his neck to lift him into the air. "What are you doing! You're letting it kill you! Let me get a crack at him." Nike seemed to hit desperation mode which was strange to Kurisu. Did Nike actually not want him to die? Wouldn't it free him? Maybe there was potential for Nike to become better too, at least if things had gone differently.

Getting kicked in the chest nearly finished him off, breaking his sternum. He still had something to say to the Kyuubi so he needed to live for a little longer. Before slamming into the wall of the crater he'd use the power in his eyes to form a compressed version of Susano'o and with help from his lightning release armor he'd stop him from getting buried. Even though the impact stopped at the wall it still nearly ended up killing Kurisu anyways. 

All of his jutsu turning off he'd look at the Kyuubi. "You're weaker than Koroshi too, you'll see that. I'll let Echo and Navi know you miss them Koroshi." the end of his words were directed at Koroshi who would hopefully be able to hear it. He had a feeling that being inside of Asgard would mean that if Koroshi got back control then he'd be revived. Either way, this was the end for now, his body collapsing to the ground as the life began to leave his body.

Shrouded in darkness Koroshi is alone, no more visions are being shown to him, he is just left there in complete nothingness, the silence almost driving him mad, however he begins to feel a great pain inside of him, he does not know what is happening but deep down in his gut he knows that something horrible is happening, and he knows that he has to stop it. Looking around the darkness Koroshi sees nothing but gets a strange feeling toward the north, so without any thought on this he begins to run as fast as he can toward it, traveling for some time until he reaches a plain wooden door, it seems rather strange for it to be there, but Koroshi doesn't think too much about it, as it seems to be calling to him like an old friend. Taking a deep breath Koroshi grasps a hold of the doorknob and opens it, seeing the scene of a bar, it seems to be empty, there is a piano in the far corner of the room, and behind the bar which is lined with stools there is many different kinds of bottles filled with alcohol. Staring at this for a moment Koroshi wonders why no one else is here, and why he is getting this pulling feeling to go deeper into the bar, seeing as there is nothing else and turning back there is only darkness and the pain of his visions Koroshi steps into the bar, sitting on one of the stools.

After a few moments of sitting here Koroshi hears a door open behind him, not thinking that there was anyone else in this world Koroshi turns around to see if it might be the nine tailed beast, or some other type of danger, however what he sees is not what he had expected, in fact it catches Koroshi so of guard that his eyes begin to water "Koroshi, never figured you for one to give up so easily" Hearing his voice Koroshi knows that this is really him, and not just enough vision that the beast is showing him "E-Echo... I'm sorry that I wasn't there, I'm sorry that you went through all of that on your own I'm sor-" Koroshi tries to speak apologizing for everything that has happened in Echo's life, and that he was not there to do something about it, however his words are cut off by Echo speaking "Look what I have done, cannot be undone, and neither can what happened to me. However you still have a chance to changes things so you can't stop fighting now! If you haven't guessed Kurama has control over your body, if you don't do something a lot more people are gonna die, so stop blaming yourself about what happened to me!" Hearing these words Koroshi begins to hear that loud heart beat again, as well as Kurisu's voice "You're weaker than Koroshi too, you'll see that. I'll let Echo and Navi know you miss them Koroshi." After hearing this Echo snaps his fingers making a screen above the bar appear, allowing him to see through the beasts eyes, he gets to see how injured Kurisu is, and how he is still facing the beast that is within his body, despite him being on the verge of death. After speaking however his eyes gloss over, and he begins to collapse. Koroshi at this point is filled with so many different emotions as he watches his brother about to death right before his eyes, he has already lost one brother, he is not going to lose another!


Filled with brand new determination, and having a new drive Koroshi's fists tighten and he looks toward the open door to the darkness "I'm not gonna lie to you, if you pass through those doors you will be accepting a lot of pain, you will deal with loss, and there will be a lot of darkness that you will have to deal with, so I will leave the choice to you. Give up, accept death and leave that to some other chump, or you can get off your ass and live up to all of that saving the world crap that you have been talking about" Echo says with a grin. Hearing these words Koroshi looks toward Echo with a grin of his own before charging out the door into the darkness, his body steaming as the 7th gate begins to flow through him increasing his movements as he leaves the room in a flash. Echo walking toward the door shutting it as he says "Black and scarlet is a bad look for you anyway, beat it and don't come back until you've got something worth sharing a drink over".



The nine tailed beast hearing Kurisu's cocky words begins to walk toward him, growling as he cracks his knuckles, he plans on making Kurisu eat those words, however he begins to roar out in pain as the seal on Koroshi's stomach begins to light up, burning his flesh and making the beast shout out "No! What is happening?!" The seal burning brighter as his chakra begins to fade away, his fangs shrinking back to normal teeth, his claws returning to Koroshi's normal hands as the beasts continues to roar as it is forced back into the seal and Koroshi's mind"This is my body, you got that?!" Koroshi shouts loudly as the beast is forced into the dark space with him, Koroshi delivering a kick to the beats throat, sending him flying 100's of meters away until it slams into a wall, the cage closing him in as the seal locks.



At this moment Koroshi's eyes return to normal, his eternal mangekyou sharingan looking at Kurisu as he dashes forward in a blink of an eye catches him in his arms just before he hits the ground as he begins to use his Jizo Bosatsu to heal all of Kurisu's wounds, and bring life back to his body "Hey! Wake up!"

Peace and quiet, death wasn't that bad in fact it felt pretty good to just let go. Kurisu wasn't really sure what to think nor did he know what was next, would he arrive in hell? There was a bright light, maybe he was wrong about paying for his sins though something seemed wrong. He could still feel Koroshi and Kyuubi not to mention immense levels of Viper's chakra that he normally felt in Asgard. He never considered the idea that hell was actually Asgard and perhaps that was what had corrupted Viper during his time as Hokage.

Of course Kurisu was wrong, Koroshi had managed to steal him from the grasp of death although he was unaware of this at the moment. Opening his eyes he'd see Koroshi and instinctively slam his right fist forward to Koroshi's face with his lightning release armor engulfing his body and his eyes changing back to their eternal form. It would take a moment for him to realize what had happened as he'd simply assumed the kyuubi was still an issue. If the punch hit like it was suppose to then Koroshi would have been launch many meters away and then Kurisu would get up and look over to Koroshi, the action of getting up would still occur even if the punch failed. 

"Well if you did kill me it turns out Viper is the Devil and this is hell." he'd joke to Koroshi being able to tell that the kyuubi was definitely not in control anymore or else he would actually be dead at this point. "So what's up with the damn fox?" he'd ask, still getting his senses back together after being revived so his final words came out in the same tone that Nike used.

Koroshi over joyed to see Kurisu open his eyes as that means that he was able to save him is distracted and doesn't expect the punch from Kurisu, so it lands right on his left cheek, causing him to be flung many meters to the side before skidding to a stop, normally Koroshi would be able to stop an attack like this, but he doesn't care at the moment, his enhanced body not having any real marks on it as he is still having his 7th gate Ki, and the nine tails chakra flowing through him for a moment before his golden state begins to fade. After Koroshi stops skidding across the floor and he hears what Kurisu has to say Koroshi cannot help but laugh "If this was hell then I think there might be a bit more fire, as for the fox after I had a chat with a friend I was able to force the beast back into its cage, and slammed the door shut, so for the time being I don't think we have to worry about it" Koroshi says rubbing his face slightly for comedic effect as he stands up, powering the gates down as he looks toward Kurisu "So, what would be the next step? he already put me through a metal hell, how do I gain its respect, and full power?"

Even having been healed and saved from death there was still lingering soreness in his muscles. He was tired and wanted to take some time to clear his head and find some peace for a while. The hard part that he was needed for was completed but now it was time for Koroshi to finish things. 

"You have to do the next part on your own, take the Kyuubi's chakra to tame its power. After that its just about reasoning with him, doing it alone is what will help the Kyuubi respect you." he wanted to help but it would be pointless against such a prideful bijuu; however, the good news was that Koroshi had the power to do it that was something Kurisu was sure of. "I'll see you later bro." with that he'd exit from Asgard and into Konohagakure no Sato. 


[Exit; 9515 words total +95 AP 

Jutsu (Didn't take %25 deduction since I took AP; If I can't have both I pick the Jutsu just let me know so I can put on the WC Reduct at that point.)

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1000 for Dynamic Entry

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You can't have both. Lol no this whole thread is denied

Trial approved.

just gonna slap my claims on here:

All using 25% discount:
(2,915)
Evening Elephant (1000)
Dancing Blade Risk (1000)
Rest can be fuck all

(Denied!) Approved


Hearing Kurisu's words he can understand that, even though he does not like the beast right now, if he has help to gain its chakra then he will not be able to earn its respect. However before he leaves Koroshi would stop him to see if he can get a little more information first "Before you go, what should I do to enter the fight the Kurama, and what do I need to do? Also do you have any advise since you have already fought your beast?" Koroshi says, hoping to get some parting words of wisdom from his brother before he faces his demons alone.

He'd walk over to Koroshi and place his right hand on Koroshi's shoulder. He used the help of Asgard to transfer some of his own memories of mastering the four tailed beast. "Just keep in mind, the Kyuubi is strong but you've got Echo's spirit with you." while he had not said much, the memories would show Koroshi the process he'd have to go through. 


(Okay now exit.)