- Korman Hyuuga <3Citizen
- Ryo : 500
koroman learns the Byakugan
Wed May 11, 2016 12:05 pm
Korman decided that today was the day that he would start to unlock the secrets of his Byakugan. He walked over to the training grounds and started to concentrate chakra into his feet. He walked towards a tree and started to walk up it. He pulled out a kuni and held it in his hand. He ran as quickly at the tree as he could. He ran up the tree and made it about 2 ft up. He slashed the tree with the kuni. He went back down grabbed a drink of water. He started to run up the tree again. This time he got about 4 ft up, he slashed the tree. He started to fall back down. He landed on the ground and rolled to keep him from breaking his leg. He was frustrated so he decided he would go to get some ramen. He walked down the busy street. He saw parents wrestling with rowdy kids and ninja rumbling from roof top to roof top. He made it to the ramen shop and pulled the curtain over so he could walk in. He saw a member of the legendary Sanien. The toad sage. He walked up to the counter and sat down. He ordered an extra large bowl of miso pork ramen, with an egg scallions and chili paste. He sat there and waited. while he waited he talked to the toad sage. He asked him how to improve his chakra flow. The sage said that he should sit and meditate while building large amounts of chakra into his feet. He got the ramen and mushed the egg up. When he was donee doing that the egg had coated the pork. Then he sipped the broth and it was perfect like normal. He took a bite of noodles and they were cooked just right. He started to eat the ramen. and looked over to where the sage was sitting but he was gone. Korman thought nothing of it and kept eating. Then when he went to pay and the ticket said he had already paid. He said ok and walked out and went back to the training grounds on the way he saw the outline of the sage fly across the street. He decided he would repay the sage someday. When he got to the training grounds and got back at it. This time he tried what the sage had said. He sat down and started to meditate. He gathered as much chakra as he could in his feet. He ran at the tree and started to run up the tree. He made it about ten feet up and grabbed a branch. He slashed the tree at that height and started to run back down. He landed on the ground with an oomph. He decided he would try to activate his Byakugan. He sat down and gathered chakra in his eyes. He opened them and yelled Byakugan . His Byakugan activated he looked down and saw the lines of chakra running all over his body then it stopped and he felt very light headed. he decided to lie down and recover his chakra. He ended up passing out. He woke up the next morning realized he had ran out of chakra to maintain his Byakugan. He decided he would keep training his chakra. He sat down and started to meditate. He meditated for about ten minutes and stood up. He ran at the tree and ran up and up he made it about 15 feet up. He slashed the tree and ran back down he did this around twenty more times. When he was done with that he decided to go home. he was walking down the street and saw his brother be rude and disrespectful to the members of the village. His brother walked away after taking money from them. Korman walked up to the villager and started to talk to them. Telling them that all members of the hyuuga weren't like that. He kept walking and made it back to the clan house. He saw village elders sparing and he said to him self that he would do that some day. He went to his room and started to meditate. He meditated and started concentrate the chakra into his eyes. He knew that he could do it. He opened his eyes and saw his father sitting on his bed watching him. Korman said Byakugan and saw his father's chakra network. he walked up to his window and saw the village like it was feet way even though it was around a mile away. His father looked at him and said " you have done it my son you have come of age". Korman was esthetic. He looked at his father and gave him a hug. He may hate his father but he is still his father. His father said that he could finally learn the ways of the hyuuga. He went down stairs and saw that all,of the members of the clan were bowing down to his family. He stood next to his brother in front of his mother and father. His father said " Korman has come of age, He has learned to use his Byakugan he will now start to train in the gentle palm fighting style". His father then asked him if he wanted to say anything. Korman responded by saying that he was to excited to speak. The clan asked him to show them his Byakugan. He gathered as much chakra as he could in his eyes and said Byakugan. His eyes activated and he say everyone's chakra network. There was a large party and after the festivities were over he went to his room with a large headache. He awoke the next morning and went down stairs, he asked his mother why he had had a headache. She said it was because he had over used his Byakugan. He want to the main hall and sat down. There was food on the table he had large helpings of rice and eggs. His eyes started to feel normal again. He decided that his eyes were a blessing not a curse.
( claiming 10 stat points and Byakugan ) total wc 1027
( claiming 10 stat points and Byakugan ) total wc 1027
- Akihana AkariCitizen
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Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 223500
Re: koroman learns the Byakugan
Wed May 11, 2016 12:16 pm
Please list your total word count, and remember to always use paragraph breaks. Reading is much easier for us when its not one large block of text
- Akihana AkariCitizen
- Stat Page : [url=statpage]Stat Page[/url]
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 223500
Re: koroman learns the Byakugan
Wed May 11, 2016 12:42 pm
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