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Haru Hyuuga
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:10 am
This was a long time coming...

In Haru's new, somewhat unhinged mental state, his old demons had once again emerged, once again, the strange voices haunted him. They begged, no, they commanded him to become whole again, to reclaim his Byakugan from the one he had given it to. For a moment, he considered killing the ANBU captain in cold blood to reclaim what was his. He needed to be whole again... His body longed for the feeling of his two matching eyes, as opposed to his mismatched ones.

No, he would not be brought that low. 

While he hated to defecate a corpse once more, Haru had few options. He released the body of Matsu from the scroll he contained the boy in, still perfectly preserved, and with his one eye remaining. He wished he didn't have to do such a thing, but he feared the alternative was the betrayal of a friend, and Haru would not let himself be reduced to Xyxer's level.

Surgically removing the eye, Haru stood before a mirror, his byakugan activated, giving him the range of vision he needed for this operation. He applied anesthetics out of habit, though he was certainly tough enough to endure the operation, as he began the slow, arduous process of transplanting dojutsu. He removed the sharingan from his left eye, using his optic splitting technique to create another slit for the eye, symmetrical to the other. He inserted the sharingan gingerly, using the mystical palm to connect it, before moving on to his now empty eye socket. 

He inserted the byakugan, and felt a definite rush of dopamine as the eye returned home, and for the first time in forever, he felt whole again. Applying the mystical palm, the eye was healed, and now both were nearly in working condition. All that was left now was to wait.

(Exit)
(Sharingan moved to forehead to match the other, Matsu Hyuuga's Byakugan eye added to left eye socket)
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:24 am
Just looked through it, a C-Rank it not going to be able to alter your genetic structure, and reality warp your body...an eyeball cannot fit in your forehead due to their being a skull and brain behind the 1/10th of an inch of skin there. This jutsu will have to be gone through again before it can be used, as on the update thread all jutsu had to be reported in, and all of them with their stamp was locked for use.


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Haru Hyuuga
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:26 am
http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t28258-optic-splitting-technique?highlight=Optic

Just noticed Yousei approved it, if you need to go back over it.
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:30 am
Just looked through it, a C-Rank it not going to be able to alter your genetic structure, and reality warp your body...an eyeball cannot fit in your forehead due to their being a skull and brain behind the 1/10th of an inch of skin there. This jutsu will have to be gone through again before it can be used, as on the update thread all jutsu had to be reported in, and all of them with their stamp was locked for use.
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:36 am
Alright, that's my bad. Is the other sharingan just not implanted, then? Because that was the eye that my MS ability was in.
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:38 am
It's gonna require tweaking as this jutsu should of never been approved, same with the transplant in the first place, it just kinda slipped through. Best case scenario, how would you want everything to work out? We got 4 eyes here that need to be moved around...xD
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:44 am
Quite honestly, I don't even want the four eyes anymore. The sharingan don't really matter to me any longer. I'm willing to just let the jutsu get denied and say the sharingan never got implanted? I don't know if you'd let me refund Meikai, since it was in that eye, but I really don't want them anymore regardless.

In the end, all I really want is the two byakugan. It feels more appropriate for the character.
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:46 am
That can be done, we void the jutsu, refund the ms for the eyes and optic splitting, just kinda say it was incompatible with your genetic structure, started causing pain, etc. and it had to be removed. Just post your total refund amount and I'll slap an approval on it.
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:52 am
4k Words for tomoes, dunno if that counts
10k for Meikai
2k for Optic Splitting
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Sun Jun 05, 2016 1:40 am
Tomoe won't get refund cause this is now a MS in a jar, refund for 12K approved.
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