Kalix Taking the Genin Exam

Kalix was finally ready to take his genin exam.
The day had been said about a week ago. When Kalix had gone to the school and asked for the ninja teachers to give him a test to prove his worth. Although he was far older than any of the other students there the teachers allowed him to take this test like the other ones.
Kalix wasn’t one to wake up early, so he asked if his test could be in the afternoon, and they accepted that. When the sun was at his highest point Kalix would arrive at the academy ready to take his test.
He would be escorted to a small room with no windows, just a small desk for the student, and a larger desk for the graders. When he walked in there were three in the room.
Kalix walked to the desk and stood at attention ready to face off against this test. For a minute the ninja would wait was the proctors would write down notes about his appearance and begin to write down the proper paper work for advancement.
What made this the more nerve wracking was the concept of time. If Kalix did not pass the test, he did not know when again he would be able to do it again, if ever. There would be nothing for him if he had to quit the ninja life which would mean he never would gain the status he so desired from the ninja leaders.
The one proctor asked the ninja to give him an example of the clone technique and transformation technique. Two jutsu that Kalix had been working on for a bit when he learned of the test. Kalix was nervous but composed when he heard about this task. And with a slight pause and a step forward he would begin to do the following jutsu.
 
Kalix would start with the transformation technique. He would do  the proper hand signs, dog-boar-ram, in quick succession. HE would feel the chakra course through his body as he prepared to transform into the young man who was in the center of the desk. The ninja would look at the facial features that the man had and focus on making sure he understood what he had to transform into.
With a quick puff of smoke the ninja would transform. When the smoke cleared it would reveal that transformation. Kalix would not be able to see what he transformed into, as the quiet and serious proctors had no mirror to show him. They would write down some notes about the technique and after about a minute of holding the jutsu he would release it. The proctors said nothing which made Kalix assume that he had done the technique correctly. After a brief pause he would then continue on with the second technique, the clone technique.
The clone technique was going to be the easier one out of the two. He had performed that one more and actually enjoyed doing this technique. Like before he would do the proper hand signs, ram-snake-tiger, in quick succession. This would give the ninja that concentration of chakra necessary to perform the technique. Now back in his original state he would focus on making an exact copy of himself to transform into.
Kalix tried his best to focus directly on the clone, and after a few moments he would release the chakra that he had been holding in. After a puff of smoke the ninja would behold the clone on his right hand sign. Kalix saw that the clone looked perfectly similar to himself. Everything about the clone would be exactly the same on Kalix, making the two perfectly similar and presumably a successful demonstration of the technique.
Kalix would again wait a minute before releasing the technique, though the techniques wree not chakra instesive the main stress of the exam would cause him to sweat a bit on his brow. Did the proctors notice that? Did they care, those were things that Kalix would think about as the  three proctors would put down their pens, thank the ninja, and ask him to leave the room.
Kalix would wait in the lobby of the academy for about 30 minutes. He was one of the last to be tested that day, and he could see parents with their children all nervously waiting for the results. The proctors would come out of the room and direct the twenty or so testers into another room. The proctors would then file us one by one depending on name, which meant Kalix was one of the very last. The proctors would call a few names forward, Kalix was not one of them, and they did so. These ninja were informed they did not pass the test, and were escorted out of the room. The rest, including Kalix, were given a letter certifying that they had been promoted to a genin, and instructions as for what to do next.
 
[WC: 829, Requesting Genin Rank, 4 Stats for my work, 15 stats for the rank up, and the ability to begin missions]

fifi wrote:The genin exam is the first step to becoming an official shinobi, obtaining Genin however requires a bit of work, as is expected. However, before you can qualify for the exam, you must first gain at least 40 stat points.

-You must learn the Clone Jutsu, and the Transformation Jutsu.  

-After the aforementioned, you must either do an 800 word post in the academy in your village, or be examined by a player character of Chuunin+.  Said rank up must be approved.

Nowhere in the rules does it say that I need an NPC proctor to do the 800 WC. If you can see in my post I did have 3 proctors that "graded" the exam. All it says is that it must be approved. Correct me if I am mistaken?

Noted, remove the 4 stats that I said I would gain for my work.