The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
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- Rinku ZerudaCitizen
- Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 2:54 pm
It was the fist bumps of all fist bumps. Niran might not think the same thing since he was older and more mature than Sora but on the inside and outside Sora was beaming. His smile radiated and his eyes manifested sparkles at the awe of what just happened.
"That was the coolest thing ever! I was like bam, and you were like bam, and then we were both like bam!" Sora laughed out. The Uzumaki was training to be more disciplined and a real ninja, but sometimes his kid side still showed, and there was no way he could hide it when they had an awesome fist-to-fist struggle match.
Then there was that fire fist! It had so much chakra built up into it and the fact that it strengthen the muscles and also blasted out fire at the exact same time was an amazing technique. He was pretty sure that Niran just came up with that as well.
"Woah, that was an awesome move Niran!" Sora would say with a huge smile on his face, "Could I learn it? It'd really help me out in the Taijutsu portion of the Chuunin Exams."
As they were talking regularly Sora would shot chains out of his two feet and make sure that his chakra was suppressed so that Niran couldn't sense them.
Sora stretched and yawned, the sounds of bone cracking and popping a delicacy. "I'm ready to go again!" He said with a smile as he started running through hand seals for the Great Fireball jutsu.
As soon as he finished the last hand seal, which was really fast since there were only two hand seals, two chakra chains burst out of the ground and wrapped around both of his ankles, he then hardened the chakra around them so that he wouldn't be able to jump or escape, he was a sitting duck.
A huge ball of condensed fire came out of Sora's grinning mouth, the boy was having so much fun sparring and actually thought the idea with his chakra chains was a genius idea! The fireball would travel quickly as the two were ten meters away. He had greatly lessened the power of the fireball, so he wouldn't hurt his friend.
WC: 384
TWC: 1391
"That was the coolest thing ever! I was like bam, and you were like bam, and then we were both like bam!" Sora laughed out. The Uzumaki was training to be more disciplined and a real ninja, but sometimes his kid side still showed, and there was no way he could hide it when they had an awesome fist-to-fist struggle match.
Then there was that fire fist! It had so much chakra built up into it and the fact that it strengthen the muscles and also blasted out fire at the exact same time was an amazing technique. He was pretty sure that Niran just came up with that as well.
"Woah, that was an awesome move Niran!" Sora would say with a huge smile on his face, "Could I learn it? It'd really help me out in the Taijutsu portion of the Chuunin Exams."
As they were talking regularly Sora would shot chains out of his two feet and make sure that his chakra was suppressed so that Niran couldn't sense them.
Sora stretched and yawned, the sounds of bone cracking and popping a delicacy. "I'm ready to go again!" He said with a smile as he started running through hand seals for the Great Fireball jutsu.
As soon as he finished the last hand seal, which was really fast since there were only two hand seals, two chakra chains burst out of the ground and wrapped around both of his ankles, he then hardened the chakra around them so that he wouldn't be able to jump or escape, he was a sitting duck.
A huge ball of condensed fire came out of Sora's grinning mouth, the boy was having so much fun sparring and actually thought the idea with his chakra chains was a genius idea! The fireball would travel quickly as the two were ten meters away. He had greatly lessened the power of the fireball, so he wouldn't hurt his friend.
WC: 384
TWC: 1391
- Madrigal KaguyaCitizen
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Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 3:18 pm
Niran smirked as the boy tried to send his chains at him through the ground. He shook his head as he sensed the boy trying to hide his chakra with the suppression technique, forgetting that you can’t hide your chakra if you’re using an active technique. This meant that since the kid was trying to use the chains. He couldn’t hide them from his sense. He was standing about ten meters away from Sora when he brought his hands up to perform two hand seals the moment the kid started stretching, extending his arms away from each other. He would then step back twice to eleven meters and unleash a blazing fireball at the boy that would shoot out toward the boy. The kids chains would never be able to reach him, and he’d have shot the fireball well before his fellow genin could even begin to perform seals, much less finish them. If the fireball landed Niran might call the spar there. If not he would keep his eyes on the kid and watch for anything he might be planning to do this time around. He still grinned at how the kid tried to use suppression with his technique, it was obvious you couldn’t hide your chakra while you were actively doing something as complex as a jutsu.
TWC - 419
TWC - 419
- Rinku ZerudaCitizen
- Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 3:49 pm
Sora's demeanor took a three-hundred-sixty degrees turn and his eyes narrowed as he made two chakra chains dissipate and then someone ten from his chest. There would be no way to dodge it so his chains started spinning as fast as they could causing the fireball to start slowing down. The boy would start walking forward as the fireball would start being pushed back until it was nothing more.
The boy had a smirk on his face as he rushed forward and cast a Genjutsu on Niran by waving his arm. Sora assumed it'd be just like when he was first put in a Genjutsu by Iesada. He was terrified and confused, he didn't know what was going on and what was happening. Sora brought those thoughts out of his mind, the Genjutsu Leaf-Style: Willow would make it appear that his arm had duplicated and he wouldn't notice until Sora finally attacked the boy.
As he finished those thoughts he got into Niran's personal bubble and immediately used the Taijutsu move Chain Fist. He hit him in the neck, the chest, the stomach, the face, and finally in his arm. He'd be feeling tons of strain on everywhere he punched the boy.
When he finished the Taijutsu move he'd still be in the Genjutsu and probably have seen hundred of fists when he did that. He created two clones and started to hit him again, he'd probably see about five-hundred fists and not know what to do.
He'd dispell the Genjutsu at the end and hit him in the face knocking him to the ground. He'd probably still be hazy as Sora walked backward a bit keeping his eye on Niran till he reached five meters and stopped.
WC: 304
TWC: 1696
The boy had a smirk on his face as he rushed forward and cast a Genjutsu on Niran by waving his arm. Sora assumed it'd be just like when he was first put in a Genjutsu by Iesada. He was terrified and confused, he didn't know what was going on and what was happening. Sora brought those thoughts out of his mind, the Genjutsu Leaf-Style: Willow would make it appear that his arm had duplicated and he wouldn't notice until Sora finally attacked the boy.
As he finished those thoughts he got into Niran's personal bubble and immediately used the Taijutsu move Chain Fist. He hit him in the neck, the chest, the stomach, the face, and finally in his arm. He'd be feeling tons of strain on everywhere he punched the boy.
When he finished the Taijutsu move he'd still be in the Genjutsu and probably have seen hundred of fists when he did that. He created two clones and started to hit him again, he'd probably see about five-hundred fists and not know what to do.
He'd dispell the Genjutsu at the end and hit him in the face knocking him to the ground. He'd probably still be hazy as Sora walked backward a bit keeping his eye on Niran till he reached five meters and stopped.
WC: 304
TWC: 1696
- Madrigal KaguyaCitizen
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Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 5:02 pm
Niran would raise an eyebrow as he noticed Sora’s arms begin to duplicate and he would wonder for a brief instant he wondered if it was an optical illusion before he remembered the third main shinobi art form, Genjutsu. He narrowed his eyes in realization as he recognized his first encounter with the illusory arts outside of the simple clone technique. He’d bring his hands into the tiger hand seal to focus his chakra and flare his chakra system up, causing the genjutsu to release instantly. He’d then immediately chain two more hand seals and bring his Flaming Impact Fist back into existence right as the boy closed in. He’d swing his arm into a powerful punch right as the fire chakra took hold within his muscles, causing them to turn red. He’d aim the punch straight for Sora’s chest, causing the fire to explode outward and ignite his clothing if it hit him. If Sora dodged or disengaged he would focus in on his chakra system. He didn’t want to be so vulnerable again to an illusion if he could help it. He focused on how that release technique felt when he did it, performed the hand seal again and flared his chakra once more. He nodded his head in satisfaction of how it felt and then proceeded to begin to channel and control his chakra. Harnessing his power as it flowed through him at high speed and he nodded his head again as he released the same burst of chakra as before. He’d smirk at the boy as he knew he could dispell any genjutsu the youth would use on him now as long as he noticed it. This would give him an extremely powerful advantage over him and he nodded his head in satisfaction before cracking his neck to work out the kinks they’d worked out in their spar. He held his hand over his head to get a look at the sky and noted that it was getting late. He shrugged and spoke out “What say we call it a day within the next few moves? It’s getting late and I’d like to eat.” He’d say as he brought his hand back down and looked toward Sora again. Whether the boy would answer or not he’d begin to channel a few hand seals and inhale sharply before releasing six smaller fireballs toward the kid that would attack him as well as the area around him with a lot of fire. The amount most people would get scared of. He’d then wait for the kid’s response before turning into his chakra once more, grabbing hold of it and releasing out in the same manner he had done when he had released the genjutsu before. He nodded his head again in satisfaction. He wanted to make sure he would be able to do a repeat performance later on and that it wasn’t just a fluke because he had just used the technique. At this point he’d look over toward Sora, to see what he was doing, taking note as he turned his head toward the boy that the sun was indeed going down and the sky was starting to become an impressive display of oranges, pinks, and purples. He’d let loose a small smile at the display before finishing the turn of his head to look toward Sora, eyes alert, and body ready to move a moment’s notice to move the moment Sora tried anything to try and attack him.
TWC - 1001
TWC - 1001
- Rinku ZerudaCitizen
- Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 8:17 pm
Sora groaned as he gently moved ten chains to block the punch, once again the chains were superior to the technique he used so they didn't break and literally stopped the attack like it was nothing. The boy had just dispelled his Genjutsu like it was nothing causing Sora to pinch the bridge of his nose in annoyance. With great, speed he shot five chakra chains on each side of Niran so there would be no way for him to escape unless he jumped or backed away, but with his boost of speed from the technique he was about to use there was no way he could dodge it. The boy used two hand seals that Niran would absolutely know what it was, rose his fist, and without a single word his hand imploded with fire as he smashed it into the man's face copying the technique that he seemed to favor.
There would be no words spoken as he was launched, literally launched in the sky, but all ten chakra chains would wrap around his body. Two would go around his waist to stop the ascent, two would go around both arms so he wouldn't be able to create hand seals unless he could use one hand, but he knew the boy wasn't that experienced to have the skill, two would go wrap around his legs so he would get a firmer grip. He'd then slam Niran onto the ground, probably making him dizzy and sick to the stomach. Then he'd bring him up ten meters and slam him into the ground one again.
"Give up or I'll continue," Sora said with a glare. If he said he gave up then the boy would stop slamming him into the ground, if the boy said he didn't he'd continue. After five slams from ten meters, he'd put up the rest of his chakra chains and aim them at his jugular, head, gut, and one would be dangling freely.
"Check and mate." Sora would say with a cocky smile and a peace sign.
WC: 354
TWC: 2050
There would be no words spoken as he was launched, literally launched in the sky, but all ten chakra chains would wrap around his body. Two would go around his waist to stop the ascent, two would go around both arms so he wouldn't be able to create hand seals unless he could use one hand, but he knew the boy wasn't that experienced to have the skill, two would go wrap around his legs so he would get a firmer grip. He'd then slam Niran onto the ground, probably making him dizzy and sick to the stomach. Then he'd bring him up ten meters and slam him into the ground one again.
"Give up or I'll continue," Sora said with a glare. If he said he gave up then the boy would stop slamming him into the ground, if the boy said he didn't he'd continue. After five slams from ten meters, he'd put up the rest of his chakra chains and aim them at his jugular, head, gut, and one would be dangling freely.
"Check and mate." Sora would say with a cocky smile and a peace sign.
WC: 354
TWC: 2050
- Madrigal KaguyaCitizen
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Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Thu Mar 02, 2017 11:14 pm
Niran would be amazed with the tenacity of this kid. Every time he had a chance he’d try the same move over, and over, and over, and over again. It was insane, he smirked as the kid moved the chains to block the punch, all ten of them. This required him to completely lose sight of Niran in order to do so as all he had used all ten chains earlier to completely block a fireball jutsu. This meant they were wide enough to cover his whole body across. He would focus his chakra on a stone just before Sora, he would overpower the stones small, natural amount of chakra with his own in a way that felt perfectly similar to the substitution technique that they had all learned. When they were in the academy. He would overwhelm the stone and then switch places with it. Appearing directly behind Sora with his fist still cocked back and his muscles glowing an angry red he would smash his fist as hard as he could into the boys back. From such range and without the initial line of sight to know he had substituted it would be virtually impossible for the boy to dodge the heavy hitting blow to the boys back and to make matters worse fire would explode out of his fist angrily, compounding onto the damage he would perform as it exploded outward onto his back engulfing the boy’s body in fire if he didn’t stop the burning soon. If everything landed, Niran would shake his head at the boy “That’s why you don’t keep trying the same thing over and over unless it’s to try and get someone into a false sense of security..It also gives your opponents too much time to figure out your moves since they can just see them over and over. I know now that you can only spawn ten of those chains at once. I also know that their range is limited.” He would explain as he waited for the kid to get back up. He would proceed to hold up his hand in the universal sign for ‘stop’. “That’s enough for today, it’s late, and I’m hungry. Let’s go home and get some rest, we’ll spar again some other time.” He would say before turning away and leaving the training grounds. ‘That was too close, I didn’t realize the kid was that strong..I’ll need to step up my training if I’m gonna get ahead of the curve to the point where everyone would be forced to respect and admire me. Although I have a feeling Sora would do that if I just taught him a few more jutsu…’ He thought as he began to walk home, admiring the sunset absent mindedly as he did so. He always loved sunrise and sunset, the way the colours mixed in the sky always soothed him and kept him grounded in reality. The magnificent paintings that the world could bring about never ceased to amaze him.
[EXIT]
WC - 500
TWC - 1501
Claiming 7 more stats, genjutsu release mastery for no hand seals.
[EXIT]
WC - 500
TWC - 1501
Claiming 7 more stats, genjutsu release mastery for no hand seals.
- Rinku ZerudaCitizen
- Ryo : 0
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Fri Mar 03, 2017 12:00 am
Sora didn't want to lose here, he had worked so hard to win this spar and he was still failing. He needed to become stronger! This was the first step to becoming stronger and he wouldn't fail here, he couldn't fail here. Sure, it was just a friendly spar; but it meant so much to him that he didn't want to lose, he wanted to show how strong he was to Niran and how awesome he was as well.
He ran through hand seals and activated the jutsu that would make sure he didn't lose right now. Fuuinjustu: Chakra Barrier activated and stopped the fist of fire. It exploded on his back, and he just turned around with a glare that said, 'really?'.
On the contrary, the chains had not blocked his site of view, Niran was aiming for his stomach so the boy had placed them below his eyesight and planned to stop the boy's advance, the ten chains would only reach to his upper chest. So he had seen Niran use the Substitution Jutsu and had already planned on a backup move. Sora had wanted to learn this forever, it was one of the Uzumaki clan's techniques. The ten chains disappeared and four new chains sprouted out of his back glowing red as the fire in Niran's eyes.
These chains were stronger than the regular chains, way stronger! The new ones were called Adamantine Attack Chains and if you touched them you weren't able to perform any jutsu as they cut off all of your chakra (AP).
Sora easily swatted away the fist causing all the chakra in Niran's system to shut down. If somehow Niran dodged the attack then he'd lash out with the four chains once again.
"These chains cut off your chakra, and considering that you can't use anymore jutsu I think this is over," Sora said with a curt nod. Sora would assume that the boy was okay, but he should feel a bit of shock from having his chakra cut off.
"It was fun, we should do this again another time," Sora said before he started walking away with a smile. As he reached the orphanage he would go to the backyard and pull his fist back. Fire chakra would begin to knead itself in Sora's muscles, strengthing the attack. The boy grin grew wider as he brougth his hand back and hit the air with an explosive results. Fire flew forward and Sora smiled, he had done the move Niran had! He would need to work out the kinks but then he'd finally be able to punch people in the face with a flaming fist. Check and mate.
(OOC: Could you approve mine while I wait for Niran to approve his?)
WC: 483
TWC: 2535
Requests:
Adamantine Attack Chains (2125/2125)
Flaming Impact Fist (1436/2000)
Stats: 12
He ran through hand seals and activated the jutsu that would make sure he didn't lose right now. Fuuinjustu: Chakra Barrier activated and stopped the fist of fire. It exploded on his back, and he just turned around with a glare that said, 'really?'.
On the contrary, the chains had not blocked his site of view, Niran was aiming for his stomach so the boy had placed them below his eyesight and planned to stop the boy's advance, the ten chains would only reach to his upper chest. So he had seen Niran use the Substitution Jutsu and had already planned on a backup move. Sora had wanted to learn this forever, it was one of the Uzumaki clan's techniques. The ten chains disappeared and four new chains sprouted out of his back glowing red as the fire in Niran's eyes.
These chains were stronger than the regular chains, way stronger! The new ones were called Adamantine Attack Chains and if you touched them you weren't able to perform any jutsu as they cut off all of your chakra (AP).
Sora easily swatted away the fist causing all the chakra in Niran's system to shut down. If somehow Niran dodged the attack then he'd lash out with the four chains once again.
"These chains cut off your chakra, and considering that you can't use anymore jutsu I think this is over," Sora said with a curt nod. Sora would assume that the boy was okay, but he should feel a bit of shock from having his chakra cut off.
"It was fun, we should do this again another time," Sora said before he started walking away with a smile. As he reached the orphanage he would go to the backyard and pull his fist back. Fire chakra would begin to knead itself in Sora's muscles, strengthing the attack. The boy grin grew wider as he brougth his hand back and hit the air with an explosive results. Fire flew forward and Sora smiled, he had done the move Niran had! He would need to work out the kinks but then he'd finally be able to punch people in the face with a flaming fist. Check and mate.
(OOC: Could you approve mine while I wait for Niran to approve his?)
(EXIT)
WC: 483
TWC: 2535
Requests:
Adamantine Attack Chains (2125/2125)
Flaming Impact Fist (1436/2000)
Stats: 12
- KaiCitizen
- Ryo : 12000
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:40 pm
Approving Sora for claims and his exit is approved provided Niran doesn't attempt to stop him
- KaiCitizen
- Ryo : 12000
Re: The Fiery Whirlpool (NK, P, Sora)
Sat Mar 04, 2017 2:15 pm
Approving Niran's exit and claim of 7 stats and genjutsu mastery. Unfortunately substitution jutsu cannot be mastered so ill have to deny that claim. Remember to edit this so that i dont have to highlight underneath your post to read the claims please<3
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