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Komori
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Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Ryo : 23750

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Sun May 29, 2022 1:55 am
Howdy

-"the user picks one or more pieces of literature within the range of the technique that they can see with their golden eye"

Let's slap a limit on this bad boy per use. As it's a C rank tech, maybe 2, even 3 books/scrolls max per cast? I'm leaning three at a time for texts, but in the case of anything pertaining to customs/exclusives, only one at a time. More on this below.

-"It can be used to learn the generic basics of what a technique does however."

Clarifying generic basics would also be helpful. I'm willing for you to be able to know specialty, element as applicable, even rank, but not necessarily the precise potential dimensions of say a laser beam. You can tell it's Ninjutsu, you can tell it's Fire, you may even be able to tell it's S rank, but you can't tell that it has the capacity to reach Xm by Xm large.

-"This technique is designed more for IC character development, and less for stealing customs and Village exclusives."

Maybe rephrase this line to state that the technique is designed for IC development, and not for stealing customs/VEs. The "less" part might still imply that it could be used as such, but that's semantics.

-The duration is also strange, as it can be up to 3 posts, but the user is able to read it instantly? Perhaps a nice little caveat could be that when it comes to reading scrolls like VEs and the like, that the user must initiate one post contact within range.

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Hikari Namikaze
Hikari Namikaze
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Sun May 29, 2022 5:14 pm
Edits made, but I'll be honest, I'm a little bit confused about the direction of this technique at this point. The idea behind it was more since back when She was Deputy Kage, Hikari would spend a lot of time reading mission reports, and during my time away from the site she would also read business reports, and this technique was just going to be something she developed for IC purposes that would make her a more effective secretary, not as much for stealing techniques. (Someone just pointed out the way I had it written before someone could instantly learn techniques from it, so I figured I would write something in about limiting that, and now it seems more like a technique  based around that.) If this technique is good in your eyes, its good for me, but honestly I'm ok with just removning any aspect of learning Customs and VE's from this technique, since it wasn't really the point behind it.

Let me know if there are any other edits you would like me to make.  
Damon
Damon
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Stat Page : The Tengu
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Tue May 31, 2022 11:26 pm
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