- SaturnChunin
- Stat Page : Saturn's Shenans
Business: Orbital Oddities & Palm Predictions
Mission Record : Missions
Summoning Contract : Dragonflies
Familiar : (MIMAS)
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 0
Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Tue Nov 01, 2022 9:30 pm
Name: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Element: -
Rank: D/C/B
Specialty: Taijutsu
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory: Suction
Appearance:
Duration: Up to 3
Cooldown: Posts used +1
Range: Touch
Power: 10/20/30
Speed: User's speed
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
The user first whips the target with one of its tentacles, with 10/20/30 power to deal physical damage once. After landing a strike on an opponent, the user may hold on to them for the remaining duration of this technique by paying upkeep, or release the target at will during any point.
While holding on to the target, the suckers on the user's tentacles grip, hold on firmly and suck to cause them to feel an uncomfortable pinching sensation for the remaining duration of this technique, which makes them unable to perform hand seals and wield weapons; they must drop their weapon(s).
This technique takes place through clothing and armor whose health is less than its power. The disorienting effect may be overcome by a target who has a strength stat equal to or higher than the power of this technique.
If the user is shaken off of the target's body, this technique is immediately ended and it goes on cooldown.
* The D rank version of this technique only lasts one turn and disorients the target for only the one post in which damage is dealt to them.
Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 500/1000/1500
Action Cost: 10/20/30 Activation + 5/10/15 Upkeep
Mastery: -
Bonus Requirements: Be a cephalopod*
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site Cannon
*This jutsu can be learned by summons/familiars that belong to a cephalopod raceElement: -
Rank: D/C/B
Specialty: Taijutsu
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory: Suction
Appearance:
- Spoiler:
Duration: Up to 3
Cooldown: Posts used +1
Range: Touch
Power: 10/20/30
Speed: User's speed
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
The user first whips the target with one of its tentacles, with 10/20/30 power to deal physical damage once. After landing a strike on an opponent, the user may hold on to them for the remaining duration of this technique by paying upkeep, or release the target at will during any point.
While holding on to the target, the suckers on the user's tentacles grip, hold on firmly and suck to cause them to feel an uncomfortable pinching sensation for the remaining duration of this technique, which makes them unable to perform hand seals and wield weapons; they must drop their weapon(s).
This technique takes place through clothing and armor whose health is less than its power. The disorienting effect may be overcome by a target who has a strength stat equal to or higher than the power of this technique.
If the user is shaken off of the target's body, this technique is immediately ended and it goes on cooldown.
* The D rank version of this technique only lasts one turn and disorients the target for only the one post in which damage is dealt to them.
Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 500/1000/1500
Action Cost: 10/20/30 Activation + 5/10/15 Upkeep
Mastery: -
Bonus Requirements: Be a cephalopod*
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site Cannon
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Sat Nov 05, 2022 10:54 am
Before I trial approve this, two things, both are extremely simple and minor edits:
First up, can you also add that the suction effect would only last for the remaining duration of the technique. I.e. you have it at B Rank, but you don't hit someone until the second post, you would only be able to hold onto them for 1 post, and it wouldn't still be 3.
Second, along the same basis, even if the effect can only be held for one post at D Rank, there is still a duration of more than that on the technique itself so you'll need to add an upkeep for that.
First up, can you also add that the suction effect would only last for the remaining duration of the technique. I.e. you have it at B Rank, but you don't hit someone until the second post, you would only be able to hold onto them for 1 post, and it wouldn't still be 3.
Second, along the same basis, even if the effect can only be held for one post at D Rank, there is still a duration of more than that on the technique itself so you'll need to add an upkeep for that.
- SaturnChunin
- Stat Page : Saturn's Shenans
Business: Orbital Oddities & Palm Predictions
Mission Record : Missions
Summoning Contract : Dragonflies
Familiar : (MIMAS)
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 0
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Sun Nov 06, 2022 4:44 am
- Log of edits:
Added upkeep cost to D rank version
Clarified duration of suction;
--It now reads such that all versions can hold for a maximum of 3 posts so as to justify the upkeep costs
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Tue Nov 08, 2022 10:12 am
Trial Approved
- Ayato HyuugaHogokage
- Stat Page : ㊆
Mission Record : ㊆
Summoning Contract : Forest of Dreams Ravens
Living Clones : Natsuki
Toneri
Familiar : Maneki
Legendary Equipment : Raiment of Eternal Fortune
Stone of Gelel
Clan Focus : Taijutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 435700
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Wed Nov 09, 2022 4:52 pm
A small edit to make the check equal or greater than the technique's power
- SaturnChunin
- Stat Page : Saturn's Shenans
Business: Orbital Oddities & Palm Predictions
Mission Record : Missions
Summoning Contract : Dragonflies
Familiar : (MIMAS)
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 0
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Wed Nov 09, 2022 4:53 pm
Done
- Ayato HyuugaHogokage
- Stat Page : ㊆
Mission Record : ㊆
Summoning Contract : Forest of Dreams Ravens
Living Clones : Natsuki
Toneri
Familiar : Maneki
Legendary Equipment : Raiment of Eternal Fortune
Stone of Gelel
Clan Focus : Taijutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 435700
Re: Familiar: Octopus Suction No Jutsu
Wed Nov 09, 2022 4:56 pm
Approved
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