Inspiring Ninja [NK, IO, Ganki, training]

Angel saw the man land on top of her wall and begin to examine it the wall was solid she was sure of it.  Infact she could sense the earth was faultless.  Since she stopped wearing shoes she had been able tosense the earth and the vibrations sent through it.  She had not yet trained the sense but she was able to sense the solidity of her jutsu and knew that it was good.  The man seemed content with his inspection and walked straight down the wall.  Probably could have jumped but then again what did Angel know about this guys abilities?  Not a whole lot. 
 
Angel  waited for him to get all the way down to the ground before asking him to teach her another jutsu.  At his cue she would say “Angel is fine.”  Then he got right into teaching her the new jutsu.  Turning away slightly to direct the jutsu he performed the hand seals slowly for her which she was really thankful for. When he did she felt the ground quake slightly.  And then a head of what looked like a dragon emerged from the ground.  The noise it made was incredible.  With the shape of the training grounds and the wall constructed by Angel the sound echoed around as the dragon opened its mouth.  The roar that emitted next was deafening.  She could not believe the sound level but what happened next was even more impressive.  The dragons throat emitted a white energy that swirled and fired blasts of thick mud that landed like a barrel of bricks, cracking the earth and doing considerable damage.  Angel watched she liked this jutsu.  She didn’t have many offensive jutsu but this one would work well to deal the damage she would need in a high powered fight.  And to think such destructive power drew it’s power from the earth.
 

Angel guessed it was her turn again.  Stepping to a good spot and directing her body in the correct direction as to not hurt anyone.  She built her chakra once more drawing her energy force from a wide stance through the soles of her feet.  Focusing her chakra she formed the handsigns Ram Horse Dragon.  Building her chakra an executing it into the jutsu.  The ground swirled with energy but the jutsu died suddenly with no result.  “GRRRRR”  Angel growled at misfiring the jutsu.  She wasn’t some kind of prodigy she was a fool.  Why did she keep trying.  Over by the wall she had constructed she began to bang her head on the wall in hopelessness.  What had she missed?  Why was she such a terrible ninja? Why could she never do anything right?  Angel threw these temper tantrums when she failed at things they were on of her faults.  She was always harsh on herself but when she way it encouraged her to  become stronger.

Angel? That was a nice name. Finally, he had got her name. That bubbles of discomfort seemed to have vanished now, was she now comfortable around Ganki? Nevertheless, Ganki felt so. Now the time has come to see her perform the jutsu, she seemed very capable of preforming the jutsu. She knew how to mold and create earth chakra quite well. Watching her move towards a safe direction, he too made sure that he was safe, noting his current position. And so she begun, her hands creating the seals, the ground erupted. Ganki stared towards the moving surface in awe, did she really pick this up already? Suddenly, the ground returned to its normally state, did the jutsu fail? His attention towards it was broken when he heard the child thump her head against the wall in frustration.

That sure looked like it hurt, Ganki thought to himself. Ganki, watching her taking the mess up out all on herself, he took a few steps over towards her, in attempt to calm her down. He also found it quite funny, even if it was messed up. Just cause she messed up on her first try, she thinks the world is over, and she had no future as ninja. This was all by Ganki at speculated at first glance. "Yo!! Angel, chill, relax... Its a complicated jutsu, you didn't think you were gonna hit this one out of the park did you?" Ganki stood there, next to Angel, without placing his hands on her, as she might react violently out of stress. Ganki took a quick glance over towards the area which moved previously. Her hand signs and execution was flawless, but there was only one reason he could thing of why the jutsu failed. "This was the same problem that most ninja face with offensive jutsu like this. Not only do you need to send out the chakra necessary to activate the jutsu, but you also have to keep pouring in that same amount to keep the jutsu going, otherwise, the jutsu will gas out. Its like..., what I did earlier. When I walked down this wall here, I used the basic surface walking technique, im pretty sure you heard of it before. Not only do you keep sending chakra towards your feet, but you have to maintain it, but surging the same amount at all times, even if it is a minuscule amount." Ganki hoped that he got to her, making her feel alright. Its moments like these when failures can mess with people's minds, instilling a sense of weakness. But that wont happen here, not while Ganki continued to show support to this kunoichi.

Ganki leaned his back on the wall, next to Angel, should she still be there. "Now lets try this again, and remember, shout the jutsu name out... Also, if you need any help, know that I'm right here, ready and waiting", Ganki said with a smile. Speaking of ready and waiting, by god was Ganki ready to light this stuff up. However, at the same time, he wished for Angel to succeed in her goal today. This was strange, vey strange.

Angel stopped beating her head.  Her earth chakra nature gave her a hard head so she wasn’t afraid of any damage and the hood over her face protected her skin from blemishes.  It didn’t even hurt in fact.  She was less doing this out of punishment as more out of a way to jostle her brain.  It was like doing jumping jacks to get your body ready to exercise.  She was hitting her head to draw in chemicals to be used in cognitive function.  She was upset it hadn’t worked but why…?  Why hadn’t it worked she did everything right.  Angel stopped hitting her head….’It couldn’t be my fault’ Angel turned around and sat down resting her back against the wall.  Ganki came over and tried to console her.  She had missed something.  She would go over it in her head starting at square one.  Signs were good.  She had watched carefully and he had not corrected her when she did the wrong sign.  So the signs must have been right.  Her chakra build was fine.  The form she had used to build her chakra was the same as the earth wall.  The complexity of the jutsu seemed the same as that of the Earth wall jutsu so the execution should have been right too.
 
She remembered back to her lessons on chakra control and how to form elementally aligned chakra.  It was back when her mother was teaching her the earth element.  The key to focusing earth energy was a strong base.  The Idea was that the core of the body produced the power of the entire body.  Drawing chakra into the core muscles and then focusing it into a denser chakra with the core muscles then manipulating the densest of elements.  The wide stance of the muscles allowed for more force to be applied to the core tightening it even further.  That is how her mother had trained her to develop the earth style jutsus.  Her mother had many insights into the nature of chakra but her mother had always told her that true genius came from creativity.  And she always got that far away look she always got when taking about Angel’s father.  Like she was dreaming about him.  But angel had been able to follow her mother teachings and do just that.  When she executed the jutsu her elementally aligned jutsu should have been perfect.  She had been doing it for years.  However the fact that the jutsu began told Angel that she had been able to correctly conduct her chakra into the gorund.  All that left was the form in which she manipulated the chakra into.  She had been able to see the Dragon head in her mind.  It was a simple structure like the wall.  With a simple pulse of her chakra she should have been able to create the dragon head and fire the Dragon bullets. 


Anger considered it further.  The Jutsu had stages.  First in the jutsu the ground roiled.  Then the Head appeared then the energy formed in the mouth then bulltets fired.  It was different.  Angel was used to the defensive jutsu that just had on step.  Wall.  That was it.  This offensive type jutsu must require a different form in which to execute the chakra stream.  Angel was ready this time.  Ganki’s voice broke into her thoughts as he began to explain that she needed to send the chakra in, in pulses.  He really did want to help her that’s what she took from it.  “Thank you.  That makes sense.”  She should try to return the favor for his help.  She stood and walked a few steps forward.  He told her to remember to yell the name of the jutsu.  Which made her roll her obscured eyes.  Smiling she stepped forward to try the jutsu once more.  Angel undid her coat letting it breath still keeping her face covered.  She drew her power together in a powerful vortex the energy spun into her core and she spread her legs into a wide base.  She wouldn’t allow herself to fail again.  Even If it meant exhausting herself.  Dreathing deeply she began her hand seals.  Ram Horse Dragon.  Dragon for the intent of the jutsu was not just to do damage but also to make a statement of power.  Even a dragons will is subject to me.  Under the hood Angel snarled as she began to flow the chakra into the  ground.  The wind picked up and the noise she heard before began to echo through the valley and throughout Angels body.  The sound was the intimidating grind of power emerging from the earth.  Angels power. "EARTH STYLE: Earth Dragon Bullets" She yelled. She was successfully casting the jutsu.  The dragons head roared as it opened its mouth.  The energy built up but Angel wasn’t done yet.  She wanted to prove to herself that she had what it took to be a ninja and that meant that she had to improve any jutsu she wielded.  While still channeling the chakra of the first jutsu she sepreated a segment of that chakra, the same way she had learned to segment and strip away threads from her ckakra threads to master the skill of the 100 puppets technique.  She separated that same chakra and claped her hands together casting another Earth style jutsu at the same time.  the ground beneath the dragon head raised an inch as the dragon gathered energy.  The dragon began to fire it’s deadly payload and Angel manipulated the earth beneath it to slowly rotate the dragon head firing the blasts off in a 45 degree arc.  Devastating the area with powerful blasts from the dragons mouth.  This however took way to much focus to be able to do in actual combat.  As the jutsu ended Angel sank to one knee.  Breathing hard she felt the dip in her energy and knew that she was going to sleep well tonight.  Out of exhaustion as well as out of satisfaction in her.  Breathing deep she stood up and turned to Ganki.  “So how did I do?  Pretty good for a youngling huh?  She laughed and fell over backward, landing lightly on the ground as she had controlled her fall.  She lay there looking up at the sky…Was that the same sky.  

[1500 for learning Earth style: Earth Dragon Bullet]

With everything that took place, the achievement that angel had, Ganki was proud of the young girl, With strong will, and determination, she proved that she could do anything with it. Looking down at her, as she fell to the ground as she laughed, which was the first time Ganki had saw her do this, he smiled himself. He knew that she was shy towards him at first, but at last, Ganki saw the girl's true personality. "Well done Angel, I have to say, you did amazing. And you see!!! I told you yelling out the name would boost the jutsu's power", Ganki said as he laughed at the end of his sentence.  

"Angel, I think if you keep this up, someone is going to notice your talents. A young girl like you with a talent like this, is bound to go some where in life. whether it be a ninja, or some other practice that you take a liking too, your going to get there. Know why? Its cause you have a strong will, to keep going, and not giving up. That's why I pushed you to speak up more, become more sociable. get noticed Angel, and you will get what you always want, whatever that may be... Now, it looks like your done, falling to the ground like a star and crap. That is..., unless you want some more?"  

Ganki stood where he was, waiting for her to reply.

((Rushed and short, sorry XD))

The inspiring words of her teacher warmed Angel to the core.  She believed the words in her heart and she would continue to increase her power.  She would seek to master all kinds of jutsu.  and be the very best like no one ever was.  Angel sat up and then with effort stood.  "Ganki," She said looking at the vast sky letting her hood fall back off the head.  Turning she would look him dead in the eye.  Her crystal blue eyes shining with a spark of Inspiration.  Angel turned to leave walking slowly she called over her shoulder, "You Better Stop Slacking Off, Or Else The Next Generation Will Overtake You."  and with that she would be gone....for now
 

[Attempt Exit]

TWC 4,253
+21 stat Ninjutsu spec
Earth style : Earth Wall
Earth Style :Earth Dragon Bullets

Watching the girl walk off, taking her funny response as a joke, he zipped along the wall tot he other side, about to roll his bag and do his ritual, when suddenly, his anbu tattoo went off, work was to be done. "Aww man...", with that, Ganki disappeared in an instant, with the use of his FTG seal.

((Exit, 3530 words, +1700 ryo))

Approved! :DD