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- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Tue Dec 02, 2014 4:53 pm
"Tch"
Was all the bandit said before dropping to the ground in just enough time to have the kunai dig into hsi shoulder blade but nothing too serious. Standing back up he would look over to the bushes and nod his head while he ran towards Li Dian. Once the bandit was on the move the other bandit moved from the bushes as fast as he could heading towards the VIP while the two ninja were busy.
Seeing as Coco never did make the hand seals for the substitution jutsu she would find herself now on the ground getting pummeled with kicks and punches from the two bandits as they fought to have their way with the girl ensuring to hold on to her hands so the kunai she was holding would stab into them.
"I get to go first right bro?/Yeah sure whatever, I'm not one for these types of things."
The bandit that was punching and kicking would get a very weird gleam in his eyes as he thought about all the "interesting" things he could do to this girls body. It was a sad thing that they had taken this mission. The boy would more than likely die here, but the girl would live a fate worse than death being their groups plaything.
Was all the bandit said before dropping to the ground in just enough time to have the kunai dig into hsi shoulder blade but nothing too serious. Standing back up he would look over to the bushes and nod his head while he ran towards Li Dian. Once the bandit was on the move the other bandit moved from the bushes as fast as he could heading towards the VIP while the two ninja were busy.
Seeing as Coco never did make the hand seals for the substitution jutsu she would find herself now on the ground getting pummeled with kicks and punches from the two bandits as they fought to have their way with the girl ensuring to hold on to her hands so the kunai she was holding would stab into them.
"I get to go first right bro?/Yeah sure whatever, I'm not one for these types of things."
The bandit that was punching and kicking would get a very weird gleam in his eyes as he thought about all the "interesting" things he could do to this girls body. It was a sad thing that they had taken this mission. The boy would more than likely die here, but the girl would live a fate worse than death being their groups plaything.
- Li DianCitizen
- Ryo : 9000
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Tue Dec 02, 2014 7:34 pm
"Gotcha!" A few of Li Dian's chakra threads managed to connect to his opponent. With him dropping down they few that hit managed to snap him on his head. Perfect. The fool hardly noticed the pale threads connecting the two of them now.
As the man charged towards Li, he charged back. With a mighty pull Li tugged the man's head forward. The sudden pull and the man's forward momentum sent him flailing forwards topping head over heels.
With Li's own forward momentum he sent his knee flying into the man's skull. The two opposing forces met, with a mighty crack as the man's nose and teeth shattered.
Leaving the man who was no doubt either unconscious or writhing in agony behind. Li used the string connecting him to his kunai to tug it back into his hand. With a strong flick he sent the weapon soaring forward to the newly appearing bandit. Well not at him, where he would be by the time the kunai got there.
Then Finally Ram → Snake → Tiger! Two clones of Li Dian appeared by his side. Each looking equally pissed.
Sure that seems like a lot but, well choreographed it only be a few seconds.
200
-5 for clones
195
As the man charged towards Li, he charged back. With a mighty pull Li tugged the man's head forward. The sudden pull and the man's forward momentum sent him flailing forwards topping head over heels.
With Li's own forward momentum he sent his knee flying into the man's skull. The two opposing forces met, with a mighty crack as the man's nose and teeth shattered.
Leaving the man who was no doubt either unconscious or writhing in agony behind. Li used the string connecting him to his kunai to tug it back into his hand. With a strong flick he sent the weapon soaring forward to the newly appearing bandit. Well not at him, where he would be by the time the kunai got there.
Then Finally Ram → Snake → Tiger! Two clones of Li Dian appeared by his side. Each looking equally pissed.
Sure that seems like a lot but, well choreographed it only be a few seconds.
200
-5 for clones
195
- CoCo WeiCitizen
- Ryo : 25150
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Tue Dec 02, 2014 8:53 pm
Rain, Coco hated the rain. She starred up at the jungle canopy. Two men were in her peripheral, but they were dulled and unfocused. She saw the clouds. Coco had always heard that kids would sit outside on sunny days, and look up at clouds. They say what the cloud looks like. Ice cream or a pony. This or that. Coco always knew what the clouds looked like to her. A wall, thick, grey, and impenetrable. All her life. Even now the things cried down upon her. Thick heavy globs hitting her cheeks.
She always felt like the land was mourning for something. Though she didn't know what. Now she did. A dead city, and it's soon to be dead guardians.
It all seemed to happen is slow motion for Coco. Each strike against her moved at a snail's pace almost. Her ribs, face, arms and legs, all ached terribly. It was weird, she'd didn't recall see anyone ever use hands signs for the substitution jutsu. Further more the wondered why it was in use if a series of hand signs would clearly announce it. But a swift kick to her ribs quickly ended that thought.
Then it suddenly became clear to her, what has happening. Her heart sunk. 'Not like this'. A strong Kunochi that's all she'd ever wanted to be. She'd never be at the mercies of a man. When she finally did get married he'd be marrying into her clan not the other way around. Raped, was there a worst fate for her than this. Surely not. Used, and then thrown away dead in the jungle, to be eaten by animals. Like some hunk of meat.
Even if she did live, managed to escape her death. She'd be trash. God her entire body seemed to crawl. No one would ever respect a clan with a rape victim at it's head. She'd be disgusting. Trash, lower even. That'd be worse than death, living on as some leper.
The world around her became mute. Death already seemed to be taking her over. Hope leaving. Body freezing. Hands, gruff and callused on her body. The mud, the mud she'd always lived around. She sunk into. It felt like she was returning to it. Going home. Hands large and practiced. Upon her, grabbing at her pants. Ripping, revealing. Creamy skin, white. The sun's light completely foreign.
A Wet Body. Blood on face. Mud in hair. Tears in eyes. Snot down nose. Now rain on flesh. Her flesh. Rain. She hated the rain.
Her sad dead eyes stared up at her attackers. One over her now. One of his hands still upon her's. His other, god knows where. She couldn't even look at him. Not into his eyes.
The other had her other arm pinned down, her forearm held tight. Her hand slumped, sad and defeated, just barley gripping it's kunai. His eyes were, strange. Not sad, not even regret. Pain, and.... Pleasure? He bit his lip cringing. Hey eye brows were up, not in pain. Like when you pop your back and groan in pleasure.
Then a pressure at her hand. Her knife, it's hilt pressing into her hand. She was just barley holding now, just barley feeding it her Chakra. Just firm enough to hold it in place. It's blade was being pushed against. She looked.
His captors arm was large and scarred over. Light scars, some deep. Running left to right along his wrist and arm. There was a new one, well a new cut. Just opened, bleeding, lightly. It's red tears slowly running down the wrist. It wasn't even steel on flesh. Wind on flesh, her chakra. Cutting sharp, a new sensation?
"Masochist." She whispered, gripping her knife. A Masochist, never before having been cut by wind. What must it be like? To know the difference between the kiss of steel, iron, stone, or wind. To be able to appreciate the way each tore and sliced in a different way. Well, Coco would have to give him a bigger sample With a sharp flick of her wrist she cut downwards with her knife. It's enhanced blade slicing easily through flesh, and muscle with minimum effort. A large chunk of skin and tissue flopped of the man's wrist, only a strip of skin connecting it to his body.
The man roared in pain bringing is other hand to his new wound. He lurched backwards. Hand now free Coco struck. She torqued her free arm with all that she had, Bringing her mighty blade into her rapists skull. His skull no match for the mighty wind, she sliced into his squishy brain matter. Her chakra scrambling all that was inside. She screamed a horrid bestial roar, roar as she saw his eyes grow dull, and fill with blood.
She threw the new corpse off of her, and rolled away. Getting as far away from the other attacker as she could.
Rising to her feet Coco would shrug off her over coat, it now soaked and mud covered. "You're dead." She growled, letting her kunai fly at her former captor. She grabbed her shuriken from her pouch, and readied them. The slightest move to dodge, or charge her would be met with another barrage of metal, five shurikens moving at a speed of 70 would cut him down.
50ap- 10 for Chakra blades = 40
[Twc 2263]
Desperate? Maybe, but to quote Dylan Thomas
Time to get crucified]
She always felt like the land was mourning for something. Though she didn't know what. Now she did. A dead city, and it's soon to be dead guardians.
It all seemed to happen is slow motion for Coco. Each strike against her moved at a snail's pace almost. Her ribs, face, arms and legs, all ached terribly. It was weird, she'd didn't recall see anyone ever use hands signs for the substitution jutsu. Further more the wondered why it was in use if a series of hand signs would clearly announce it. But a swift kick to her ribs quickly ended that thought.
Then it suddenly became clear to her, what has happening. Her heart sunk. 'Not like this'. A strong Kunochi that's all she'd ever wanted to be. She'd never be at the mercies of a man. When she finally did get married he'd be marrying into her clan not the other way around. Raped, was there a worst fate for her than this. Surely not. Used, and then thrown away dead in the jungle, to be eaten by animals. Like some hunk of meat.
Even if she did live, managed to escape her death. She'd be trash. God her entire body seemed to crawl. No one would ever respect a clan with a rape victim at it's head. She'd be disgusting. Trash, lower even. That'd be worse than death, living on as some leper.
The world around her became mute. Death already seemed to be taking her over. Hope leaving. Body freezing. Hands, gruff and callused on her body. The mud, the mud she'd always lived around. She sunk into. It felt like she was returning to it. Going home. Hands large and practiced. Upon her, grabbing at her pants. Ripping, revealing. Creamy skin, white. The sun's light completely foreign.
A Wet Body. Blood on face. Mud in hair. Tears in eyes. Snot down nose. Now rain on flesh. Her flesh. Rain. She hated the rain.
Her sad dead eyes stared up at her attackers. One over her now. One of his hands still upon her's. His other, god knows where. She couldn't even look at him. Not into his eyes.
The other had her other arm pinned down, her forearm held tight. Her hand slumped, sad and defeated, just barley gripping it's kunai. His eyes were, strange. Not sad, not even regret. Pain, and.... Pleasure? He bit his lip cringing. Hey eye brows were up, not in pain. Like when you pop your back and groan in pleasure.
Then a pressure at her hand. Her knife, it's hilt pressing into her hand. She was just barley holding now, just barley feeding it her Chakra. Just firm enough to hold it in place. It's blade was being pushed against. She looked.
His captors arm was large and scarred over. Light scars, some deep. Running left to right along his wrist and arm. There was a new one, well a new cut. Just opened, bleeding, lightly. It's red tears slowly running down the wrist. It wasn't even steel on flesh. Wind on flesh, her chakra. Cutting sharp, a new sensation?
"Masochist." She whispered, gripping her knife. A Masochist, never before having been cut by wind. What must it be like? To know the difference between the kiss of steel, iron, stone, or wind. To be able to appreciate the way each tore and sliced in a different way. Well, Coco would have to give him a bigger sample With a sharp flick of her wrist she cut downwards with her knife. It's enhanced blade slicing easily through flesh, and muscle with minimum effort. A large chunk of skin and tissue flopped of the man's wrist, only a strip of skin connecting it to his body.
The man roared in pain bringing is other hand to his new wound. He lurched backwards. Hand now free Coco struck. She torqued her free arm with all that she had, Bringing her mighty blade into her rapists skull. His skull no match for the mighty wind, she sliced into his squishy brain matter. Her chakra scrambling all that was inside. She screamed a horrid bestial roar, roar as she saw his eyes grow dull, and fill with blood.
She threw the new corpse off of her, and rolled away. Getting as far away from the other attacker as she could.
Rising to her feet Coco would shrug off her over coat, it now soaked and mud covered. "You're dead." She growled, letting her kunai fly at her former captor. She grabbed her shuriken from her pouch, and readied them. The slightest move to dodge, or charge her would be met with another barrage of metal, five shurikens moving at a speed of 70 would cut him down.
50ap- 10 for Chakra blades = 40
[Twc 2263]
... In this case I'm assuming that "Them" refers to the attackers. Otherwise I don't see how you could hold a persons knife so that they would stab their own hands. (Besides I like to think I added my blatant flubbing with a bit of artisty.)Youka wrote:ou keeping track at home, and wondering how I arrived at THAT conclusion I present you with this...
[quote="Youka"]Seeing as Coco never did make the hand seals for the substitution jutsu she would find herself now on the ground getting pummeled with kicks and punches from the two bandits as they fought to have their way with the girl ensuring to hold on to her hands so the kunai she was holding would stab into them
Desperate? Maybe, but to quote Dylan Thomas
Dylan Thomas (Do Not Go Gently Into the Night) wrote:Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Time to get crucified]
- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:57 pm
(haha I'm sorry I misstyped that was supposed to say *so they wouldn't stab into them * them being the two bandits. You can edit to fit that if you want lol my bad.)
- CoCo WeiCitizen
- Ryo : 25150
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Tue Dec 02, 2014 11:50 pm
[Meh I kind of like how it turned out. These guys were obviously getting off on beating and raping her. So it could make sense that one of them, had another equally dark desire. However I know it's not what you intended, so if you want me to rewrite it I shall.]
- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Wed Dec 03, 2014 12:28 pm
(Ok, Coco, get used to writing with what you want to do and also what would happen if you were succesfsul and also what you would do if it didn't work. How you're writing now is controlling the other NPC's, even if you didn't mean for it to come off like that. I like your style though <3. Also both of you need to put your stats and a link to your stat page in your signature so everyone you RP with doesn't need to go hunting for your page please. In a real fight Coco since you have 15 strength and so does the opponent you would be deadlocked for the most part and wouldn't be able to break away so easily. Just throwing out pointers to help in the future ^_^)
The elder of the two bandits that were attempting to hold the girl down didn't have much time to react to anything. One moment his hands were holding the girl down to ensure they weren't cut down. The next his vision vision was being split in two and in slow motion he saw his body from a birds eye view falling atop the girl. He didn't know what happened but from what he saw it was a slash through his head? Shit he had messed up apparently and had payed with his life, his brother wouldn't be able to be controlled now.
"Bro....ey"
Was all the other bandit that was holding the girls legs got out before his eyes widened and he began rambling non sense holding onto the girls lower half as she pushed his brother off of her. He was pulling on her legs drawing her upper body downwards in the mud towards him. If he was able to get her under him he would begin unleashing punches into the girls face uncontrolled for the remainder of this fight. He only wanted the girl dead now and this was the only way he knew how to do it.
On the other side of things the bandit that was now recieving a flying knee to his face hadn't even figured out how it happened. He was no ninja so things like chakra and invisible threads was lost on him. Had he tripped in the mud, was there a vine or root on the ground? Well it was too late he was unconscious. Sadly for one of the VIP's that the bandit had gotten to while Li Dain was dispatching his other comrade, he was about to die. If the trajectory of the kunai wasn't changed it would sink right into the mans head ending his life faster than he would be able to see. If stopped the bandit would hold the VIP from behind and begin to threaten the two.
(P...put all your items down and stop..stop...where you are...if you trying anything else i'm going to kill this guy I PROMISE IT!)
The elder of the two bandits that were attempting to hold the girl down didn't have much time to react to anything. One moment his hands were holding the girl down to ensure they weren't cut down. The next his vision vision was being split in two and in slow motion he saw his body from a birds eye view falling atop the girl. He didn't know what happened but from what he saw it was a slash through his head? Shit he had messed up apparently and had payed with his life, his brother wouldn't be able to be controlled now.
"Bro....ey"
Was all the other bandit that was holding the girls legs got out before his eyes widened and he began rambling non sense holding onto the girls lower half as she pushed his brother off of her. He was pulling on her legs drawing her upper body downwards in the mud towards him. If he was able to get her under him he would begin unleashing punches into the girls face uncontrolled for the remainder of this fight. He only wanted the girl dead now and this was the only way he knew how to do it.
On the other side of things the bandit that was now recieving a flying knee to his face hadn't even figured out how it happened. He was no ninja so things like chakra and invisible threads was lost on him. Had he tripped in the mud, was there a vine or root on the ground? Well it was too late he was unconscious. Sadly for one of the VIP's that the bandit had gotten to while Li Dain was dispatching his other comrade, he was about to die. If the trajectory of the kunai wasn't changed it would sink right into the mans head ending his life faster than he would be able to see. If stopped the bandit would hold the VIP from behind and begin to threaten the two.
(P...put all your items down and stop..stop...where you are...if you trying anything else i'm going to kill this guy I PROMISE IT!)
- CoCo WeiCitizen
- Ryo : 25150
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Wed Dec 03, 2014 1:17 pm
(Oh terribly sorry about that sir.)
As Coco felt herself being pulled down by this man she would grip the hilt of her remaining Kunai. (The other being firmly lodged in a dead man's skull.)
Now depending on how the man is over her she will....
1) The man is on his knee's standing, straddling his body, while remaining mostly upright punching her. (I.E The Cowgirl Position)
As the man pulls her into position she will hold her kunai with both hands thrusting into the man's chest as soon as it's in range. No doubt suffering a few serious punches along the way. If she manages to penetrate the man's chest she'll slash downwards hoping to gut him.
2) The man is hunched over her, beating her like that. (I.E Missionary Position.)
As the man pulls her underhim, she'll lurch forwards. Bringing their bodies as close together as she can from her position. She'll throw her arms around his body, the Kunai in her right hand stabbing into his back. If she missed the initial target of the man's spine, she will rip the Kunai outwards to her right shredding anything she can.
If the option picked fails she's going to simply fold her arms up over her face. Protecting the money maker. Her kunai will still be in hand waiting for an opening. Though with the beating she's already received a few good blows would be enough to knock her unconscious.
If either option succeeds She'll let the body collapse on her, not having the energy to get it off. It'd be up to Li Dian.
[Hey we really appreciate you doing this for us. We've had a blast. Or at least Coco has...]
[TWC 2526)
As Coco felt herself being pulled down by this man she would grip the hilt of her remaining Kunai. (The other being firmly lodged in a dead man's skull.)
Now depending on how the man is over her she will....
1) The man is on his knee's standing, straddling his body, while remaining mostly upright punching her. (I.E The Cowgirl Position)
As the man pulls her into position she will hold her kunai with both hands thrusting into the man's chest as soon as it's in range. No doubt suffering a few serious punches along the way. If she manages to penetrate the man's chest she'll slash downwards hoping to gut him.
2) The man is hunched over her, beating her like that. (I.E Missionary Position.)
As the man pulls her underhim, she'll lurch forwards. Bringing their bodies as close together as she can from her position. She'll throw her arms around his body, the Kunai in her right hand stabbing into his back. If she missed the initial target of the man's spine, she will rip the Kunai outwards to her right shredding anything she can.
If the option picked fails she's going to simply fold her arms up over her face. Protecting the money maker. Her kunai will still be in hand waiting for an opening. Though with the beating she's already received a few good blows would be enough to knock her unconscious.
If either option succeeds She'll let the body collapse on her, not having the energy to get it off. It'd be up to Li Dian.
[Hey we really appreciate you doing this for us. We've had a blast. Or at least Coco has...]
[TWC 2526)
- Li DianCitizen
- Ryo : 9000
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Wed Dec 03, 2014 5:35 pm
What a blunder. Li Dian snapped his wrist downwards, sending his Kunai into the mud. "It's okay. It's okay." He dismissed his to clones. He wanted to seem unarmed. Though he still had a faint string connecting to his Knife.
"I just want you to think, about what you're about to do." He did all he could to sound in control. "If you leave now, we'll have no reason to continue fighting. We'll let you go. There's already been too much blood shed. But if you kill him? Then we have to kill you, we have to avenge our failure. That money will mean nothing once you're dead. You're not scared of us, that's fine. But we have parents who are ninja, friends, and teachers. A whole village who need that man alive."
Li didn't feel like he was getting through. "I know you're angry. At the village, at us. The factories have been close for months and you're just doing what you need to survive, that's why that man in your arms is here. He's here to help reopen the factories, to make our country live again. I know the ninja failed you. We failed to protect this land like we swore we would. We failed you, but don't fail us. We're trying to make it better, but you have to let him live. If you kill him nothing well ever improve."
Li dropped to his knees. "Please let us pass, I beg of you. The two of us don't want the death of a country on our hands."
(Guess I better make a stat page.)
"I just want you to think, about what you're about to do." He did all he could to sound in control. "If you leave now, we'll have no reason to continue fighting. We'll let you go. There's already been too much blood shed. But if you kill him? Then we have to kill you, we have to avenge our failure. That money will mean nothing once you're dead. You're not scared of us, that's fine. But we have parents who are ninja, friends, and teachers. A whole village who need that man alive."
Li didn't feel like he was getting through. "I know you're angry. At the village, at us. The factories have been close for months and you're just doing what you need to survive, that's why that man in your arms is here. He's here to help reopen the factories, to make our country live again. I know the ninja failed you. We failed to protect this land like we swore we would. We failed you, but don't fail us. We're trying to make it better, but you have to let him live. If you kill him nothing well ever improve."
Li dropped to his knees. "Please let us pass, I beg of you. The two of us don't want the death of a country on our hands."
(Guess I better make a stat page.)
- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Focus : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Wed Dec 03, 2014 6:21 pm
As the crazed bandit pulled on the girl he had thrown all caution to the wind and lived only for destroying the female. Sadly he had forgotten about the weapon she held and as he was pulling down and lashing out it was all too easy for her kunai to slip easily into his skin and slide down like butter killing him and letting his internal organs fall out on to the female. He panted a few more times lashing out at the girl before finally going fully limp with nothing else keeping him alive.
On the last bandits side he was listening to the boy talk and try to speak some logic into his life to stop him from killing the VIP. It was true what they had all fallen on had times and the village of Ame was nothing but a desolate hub. Considering everything he dropped his hold of the man and turned to run as fast as he could jumping in the bushes and attempting to escape.
On the last bandits side he was listening to the boy talk and try to speak some logic into his life to stop him from killing the VIP. It was true what they had all fallen on had times and the village of Ame was nothing but a desolate hub. Considering everything he dropped his hold of the man and turned to run as fast as he could jumping in the bushes and attempting to escape.
- Li DianCitizen
- Ryo : 9000
Re: Escort The VIP (Coco)
Wed Dec 03, 2014 6:33 pm
Had Li not already been on his knees he would have fallen to them. He gazed up at the VIP in wonderment. "Are you alright?"
Ma Chao's body shook, but he nodded. His eyes just as wild as Li's. But he quickly regained his composure. "Next best thing to a road eh?" He spoke incredgiously.
Li laughed. "I didn't say we were the best thing."
Wait. Coco! "Coco!" Li Shouted. He scanned the battle field. She was nowhere to be found. Wait that wasn't true. He could see movment under a body. "Kohnan no." He whispered running to her.
Ma Chao's body shook, but he nodded. His eyes just as wild as Li's. But he quickly regained his composure. "Next best thing to a road eh?" He spoke incredgiously.
Li laughed. "I didn't say we were the best thing."
Wait. Coco! "Coco!" Li Shouted. He scanned the battle field. She was nowhere to be found. Wait that wasn't true. He could see movment under a body. "Kohnan no." He whispered running to her.
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