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Mon Jun 22, 2015 11:47 pm

yen took a deep breath as he awoke during the morning as dawn peaked over the edge of the trees as he yawned yen considered the day's activities as he lays down in his bed in thought as he reflected on his recent training discovering as he worked on his recent techniques that there was in fact ways to further improve upon his techniques with grand results. Yen glanced out the window in though as he prepared breakfast for himself and hota yet his mind was elsewhere at the moment burning the food a bit as he reflected on the idea of improvement for his sake and his home’s sake.

yet as he walked from his home to the library a thought was fueld by the improvement of his genjutsu techniques. However the art of genjutsu was difficult as it required specifics and disastrous if meddled with without the correct precautions, in fact the depths of genjutsu if not done coreectally would cause even more harm then good. yet on this day yen showed a hunger for seeking and stepping into the unknown realms of digging into depths of genjutsu. The basic principles in mind to yen as he approached the library for what would be a long trip of study and work.

although the library was extensive yen read through many scrolls of genjutsu from the uses to the vararity of effects even to the point of grand interest of making ones own conditions to the really powerful techniques should they have the will to make such ones. although incredibly scarce the powerful genjutsu yen read upon where often great enough to drive those into sleep or such. yet something was missing yen thought. these techniques are missing something or better said they are holding something that goes beyond what males them powerful as these look constant there is something missing from these techniques that i am seeking. the thought of this lacking fuled yen as his hunger of exploration pushed him further within his studies that day and the following week.

At last yen came across it as he rubbed his eyes exhausted from the reading and mind pounding as he wrote down notes and papers of breaking down his genjutsu to the base fundamentals. something was indeed there within chakra creation and creating the genjutsu, a fundamental that based on a simple enactment of will and motion, thought and action, light and dark. yet yen shook his head as this basic fundamental seemed to be in perfect harmony with one another as each technique may have had one side or the other in place but a bit of the other remained. "so what makes all techniques work is this balancing force that shifts between one another, hence it is within this force i could manage to meld and mix what is necessary to make the changes plausible. Yen yang while most would say it is beyond us its among us every day and time we stand and breath, a bridge is always open but we are too full of ourselves to see it; or to afraid to look." yen spoke as he gathered his notes and put back the scrolls.

the week was hectic as yen studies infact hindered him from training of such a technique, yet he was now armed with the knowledge to set the stepping stones to what was perhaps a grand technique. Reaching the training grounds yen studied his notes as he sat about looking for the correct way to break apart the complex natures around a genjutsu, to simplify the way yen figured that to make a techniques he would have to look at chakra formation first. yen focused as he released his chakraa and surely it came naturally as it was called upon by him. it was second nature to a ninja as they would focus on the depths of their being as it came easily as practice ooccured eventually molding it in its raw form to mix witha what was their elemental calling. this hence was the creation of manipulating a element, however yen ficused in the raw chakra within him as it felt rather bland there was something that yen yang chakra did too make this so.

A smile came across yens face as he noted the raw chakra became more familiar to him after holding it up for awhile as he nodded that through his focus the chakra reacted but through his will his chakra moved. yen decided to take the risk as he took a breath and focused purely on moving the chakra within him with his will alone, not going with hought as he calmed his mind and felt his chakra shimmer as it solidified and made a more heavier application through the strenght and quality of chakra. it was within this that yen began to feel the unbalence of formation and thought making the chakra heavy and not free flowing. "interesting to ground the force is to cease thought and make it un resposive" yen thought to himself. as he began to bring thoughit into forcing it through his body. his chakra then began to flow sommoothly as it filled his body fully to its depths and yen smiled as he nodded approvaly to the results.

Now yen showed curiosity to the other idea of not will but thought as he didnt force it alone but now let his chakra simmer as by thought his chakra began to respond by remaining still but spiking to random areas of is though should he have thought leg or arm the chakra would spark as it would reach its destination oly to shrink back in a wirlpool of chakra as it didnt have the consitcey neassary to hold it there as his focus was not on the areal alone. Yen chuckled as he noted this and nodded quietly as he took a breath from the work of working one or the other. Through the following weeks yen began to work with the concept of both sides alone as he didnt focus on anything else but jut thoes two things of thought with out focus and using chakra, and focusing the chakra with out focusing on the movement of chakra. this was where yen began to understand even further as he studied this the enactment of realeasing chakra in ashort burst how it could effect the area around him like a wave. This began small as it began within himself filling him and alternating at rapid speeds he would create a feild of chakra from him. the pure power behind it and all of it under his will and control. yen would find himself completely drained after the effects of this training as from dawn to dusk he would focus on the conceptof enveloping the area around him and saturate it with his chakra.

weeks went by and yen through the training found that his absolute limit was 20 meters around him as his body was shaking as he tried to take it further but the wave would decapitate any further. my ephermal would go further then this technique so it will be only be useful at close range. yen thought to himself as he made the field again as it lasted for only a instant. before fading. With that yen sat down brushing his hair from his eyes as he stared once again at his notes now ragged and some ripped. "now i can add the effect i disire to it since i have what i desire so now what shall i do with such a technique if its in its raw prospect it can go in infinite ways but like my ephermal it had some range. yet i cannot hold the effect like ephermal as it remains not static but as a pulse. so if i was to draw within the essence of a being into this or multiple as it is then i can see how to make this thing work.

yen created a shadow clone as it stared back at yen snd spoke up "I see we might just need to see how it works with a test." yen nodded and smiled as he began to create the wave of chakra witin him and have it shoot out. The clone blinked and nodded. Before speaking "while its a wave of chakra something must be done with it to make it so something." yen nodded as he began to make the wave again but this time threw imagination into it where the clone would be sucked into his mind floating. yet with this yen began to make handsigns to make such a technique starting with a rat sign as the wave shot out again taking a portion of yens chakra with it. the clone went still as yen realized that his wave also caused him to lose focus as well and found himself within the darkness of his mind. the clone spoke and yen nodded curtly as it spoke. "i see so this is the power of the wave as it melds off your imagination. impressive" yen felt his chakra drain a bit as he shook his head. as the effect wore off.

"rat sign for self and others as we are all in it as one. but we shall make a difference with the power of this technique with every sign we add a new effect and take the world by surprise." yen said as the clone smiled and nodded before replying the knowledge required and training to make this something of legend can perhaps take this beyond what normal people would concider a genjutsu but the genjutsu. but why didnt you act boss?" yen thought about it for a moment as his clone explained thinking of the possiblities and reasons till he came up with a reason. "Perhaps because since it starts from the user the user is placed at a higher and more potent effect the question is though to take this further the rules of such techniques must be specific as it can all crash down on itself with unnatural ease, not only is chakra control required but also the very basis of reasoning as well”. Yen and his clone went silent as they bowed their head in silence thinking of the further possibilities and the basic fundamentals of the waves. Before yen brought it up “we have to work out each detail of this technique in fullness to make it work. It will not be easy and the results could be disastrous but with the wave out of the way the technique has a range of 20 meters.” Yen spoke to the ckine as he nodded his head and prepared to do the technique again. using the rat handsign once again yen focused on the clone floating in his mind once again as he symbolized the handsign with his chakra working it within the technique. This type of training yen dedicated himself to as he began to mold the technique but his own chakra to take in effect the full blunt of such a powerful technique as it would by the very basic assumption of the technique have a basic look to it. But to most yen would be preforming upon glance a random set of handsigns that lead to almost no logical jutsu. Beyond this thought yen had close to no idea the chaos of such a technique should he use it ever in combat.
The training that ensured with the technique and its handsigns furthered as it took up more then what yen would consider as a complete making of a technique from scratch as he worked through the first handsign and its meaning. Then realized that a technique like this could only mean that it could be a large as he wants with fillings as long as he could maintain the image and propotions of the technique and as long as it doesnnt lose its identity. Yen smiled as the days went by where he worked on the basis of the techniques handsigns and how they wove the identity of the technique writing each sign and what it has meaning to himself as he beagan to memorize the order.

“Starting with rat: for all including me fall under my clutches as it betrays not only self but friends and foes, bird: freedom breaks as a price must be paid to ensure those are caged through their own methods, meaning that there are perhaps three ways to escape for others but only few for the castor Dragon : legendary beast shows that legends live on forever more, meaning this technique will not end till beaten. Tiger: the fierce predetor beyond which ensures that all under its eyes are in its battle field, meaning the user is the world and the others are the dream Dragon: the legends speak true of it as it is beyond legends for its will is absolute, making the rules absolute. Ram: the chosen sign of the unyilding and tough ram and for the taste of the clone sign as well, monkey: the slyness of the playful monkey ensuring that thoes who fail can try again but pay a price should they make a fool of the monkey, dog: the forever eternal bond between the man and it friend ensigns the bond between user and jutsu as well as those under it. Dragon: despite its legendary ways it has its undoing as does the technique as well. Tiger: beware the tigers eye as it will stalk you till the end, as the user and those under the technique may grow fearful of the effect, snake: beware of the snake as it rears its head to strike for its bite is deadly, meaning the consequences are sever for the unwary and brash, dragon: the power beyond our comprehension may be what made the legends frightening, meaning the effects hurt more then what is believed. Ox: thoes who work hard become renewed with new strength and power but such are tivial, the technique will reward thoes who participate but at a false cause, Ram: with the tough undying sense the ram pushes onward, the technique will persist as the user leaves. Tiger: under the eyes of the true tiger, under the eyes of the technique the battle continues. Monkey: fools who seek beyond what they dare will chase the monkey. Meaning theos who keep the fighting will keep chasing their target unknown it is in fact themselves ves that hinder themselves. Brid: with clipped wings the bird dies. Unless they escape they shall fall. Rat: with thieving hands the victor marches away pilfering their prize. Thoes who can free themselves can get away with the prize of the user. And bird: with all freedom the birds can fly in the cage. Enabling thoes in the technique to fight at their fullest.”

Yen took a sigh as he admired his handy work nodding that while perhaps the technique was a little sloopy he desired to work in depth with each of these concepts to flesh out the technique in whole. Yen noted that while the concepts were rough it entailed a story that he approved of as it would be difficult to weave such a powerful genjutsu but he had the will to tap into the balance of yen and yang and now he would make his own technique despite the power it required. Yen began to memorize the concept of the technique taking it to heart as his master piece as he wrote diwn on a parchment after every day of training and study without using chakra he would preform the hand signs building his memory up for the technique and its meaning to him and its values. Fir it was all his own as should he teach it install the words as his slogan of belief. “the risks are grand as the first sign was the indicator of my involvement and I throw my life to fate as this is a dangerous technique in the making but I do not regret touching upon this technique.” Yen smiled as he made a clone and began to talk on the meaning of the technique. “what should the baisis of such a technique be as it now had a meaning in it now? how do we move forward from identity to the heart and soul of the technique? And all it embodies, only after all of that we can name it.” Yen asked as the clone taking in all of the knowledge yen has gained so far and nodded. “we can perhaps play upon thoes effects that this technique embodies such as with dragon sign, and ram. Would clones that leave a lasting impact work?” yen’s eyes lit up as the clone said that, a lasting impact with a clone works wonders but they wont be that strong either since ill have to make them less then what I can output for the technique about 1/4th of my strength.” Yen didn’t know what came over him as he was stuck training with a clone on the basis of a technique of his own. Like a madness it seeped over him slowly ensuring that he gets it done. His hunger for the technique and determination was abnormal even to him as he paused for a moment and gathered what he was saying.

All of this work for a technique and my hunger for a grand technique came at a price part of my sanity as it engulfs me that I want to finish this thing. Yen thought as his clone nodded before speaking. “very well then lets get started on this technique and the concept of clones in it.” The clone and yen got up and faced each other preparing topractice once more as he yen preformed the handsigns to make the technique the clone exclaimed as the wave of chakra began to pulse out in a blinding flash of light which was the same for yen before returning to reality exuasted from the strain on himself yen got to his feet shakily as the clone stood above him with a rag on his forhead. “ yeah you sort of collapsed after the last handsign because its quiet straining I belive so we must be careful. Lets lighten up the parameters of the technique and work the concept once more” the clone offered a hand as yen stood up and with yen began to further dum down the technique further.

As the technique got further down the road yen practiced at least once a day the full technique as when he first began he overwealmed himself as he preformed the hand signs to discover that when doing the technique he lacked esscense of it as while they were illusions the clones could not solidly hit yen’s shadow clone without failing themselves. This inturn became a problem as while yen thought about it his clones were solid so in the illusion it was easy to make a clone as it required little effort, however yen began to realize that the problem was that it was a genjutsu so in that fact to make them real yen had to incorporate a realistic effect on to the genjutsu which was illusions are felt as if they are real. Not hard as with ephermal the effect would be the genjutsu would fool the eyes then the other senses that oneself went elsewhere.

yet as time went on yen nodded as he noticed another effect. “the more I add the greater the loss” yen said as he realized he couldn’t mold chakra as well after one round of the technique practice. The relaseing of the technique was being practiced by yen and a clone as the clone tried to break free with a release technique only to realize it was still in the illusion. “yeah this thing is powerful “ the clone spoke as it used a water whip to defeat a illusion however it dropped to a knee as the clone felt chakra seep from it in a surprising manner. “boss I think the technique as you said with the clone side now can drain chakra whenever one defeats a clone.” Suddenly another illusion appeared before the shadow clone and spoke. “yeah that sounds like the case, I can speak through the clones and just about control what they do but they take so much chakra to hold the technique up its almost criminal, well that’s the way it goes” the illusion spoke as it preformed the handsigns in reverse to release the genjutsu. The world shifted back to reality as the clone walked up to yen who was breathing hard now nearing his 50% point and nodded.

“yeah that technique is awesome but such a pain to hold up yen said among the training ground. Wiping his brow yen took a rest and smiled as he looked up at the noon sky and relaxed for a while as he talked to his clone about the results releasing the clone afterwards as the chakra returned to him

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Tue Jun 23, 2015 4:03 am
yen following that day took note of the large amount of strain it still causes him deciding that should he ever use this technique it would be perhaps his last technique as the strain would be a pain in the thicket of a fight but despite that he took to heart that the power was amazing judging by the info the clones he used have equipped him with and with the notes in mind yen began documenting more on the techniques development as the effects requiring alot of work and study to continue he decided that ti handle more people yen would need more clones to observe the effects and paly along with the techniques within the genjustsu.

Preforming the shadow clone technique once again after a few days of rest and documentation yen was prepared to study the adverse effects again now taking the more risky rout of figuring out how long it shall take to reach his limit with making the technique viable. The clone nodded as yen explained the procedure of the technique and as yen expected the clone to defeat some of the clones as he would take this as an opportunity to see how the techniques chakra loss works and work out the releasing method once more. preforming the hand signs again yen drew the clone within the genjutsu and this time a platform was the area of landing. thats much better in optimizing the cost of this technique and lessening the strain a bit yen thought to himself as the clone struck down the illusion with a water whip strike and yen noticed the effect immediatly.

"so the depth of the illusion is decided by ones actions as im sure the more conflict in the genjutsu, the stronger the technique becomes, try to release yourself from the genjutsu." yen spoke through the illusion as the clone tried about every way it could to break free of the technique as yen felt his chakra drain in the hefty up keep of making a clone and maintaining the genjutsu. the clone struck down the illusion again as it grimanced from chakra loss and nodded as it was slightly drained from the loss, yen in the mean time felt the abverse effect of maintaing the jutsu and clone creation drain him further as he made another illusion which the clone struck down again. "so with each clone lost boss thoes in the genjutsu lose chakra and the genjutsu gets stronger making this if im right requirements to break free of the genjutsu even harder, as it requires a nother genjutsu of equal or even greater strength to break free. but im curious whats the limit?"

The clone asked as yen created another illusion and began to sweat in the real world from the exertion of the technique. damn this is monsterous but im more then positive that theres a way to break free of the genjutsu then the genjutsu requirements yen thought as the fourth illusion came into being. the clone struck once again kneelin slightly as the chakra loss became a slight proplem for the clone and yen pushing himself made a fith illusion noting his limitation thus far.

However as the clone struck it down yen noticed the clone felt better and looked refreshed in a sense this perplexed the aburame as he noticed the clone observing the effect. "ill break free from the genjutsu now" the clone spoke as it tried again and realized it was ineffective still. yen after some thought spoke up and sighed, "its a guess but this technique must have a payment of some kind like no simple technique but more so a sacrifice. try to give your own raw chakra as tribute" the clone nodded and yen observed as the raw chakra began to float from the clone as it weaked completely and yen and the clone were out of the genjutsu except the clone vanished in a poof. "i see this technique truely is dreadful to fight in if one must hand their own chakra away to the technique to ensure an escape, so after 5 illusions defeated they can leave that way. how dreadfull its like they had to pay the full ammount i paied and more due to the illusions defeated. the clone couldnt speak afterwards." yen sat down and conteplated the clones infomation on the technique and nodded, yet yen felt he couldv'e done more as he needed to figure a way to make the technique work.

Yen after a few hours of rest and study decided to test the genjutsu on the base fact of himself and examine his options within the paremeters of the genjutsu. preforming the handsigns yen released the genjutsu as hestood on the platform alone taking note of the arena with his own eyes as it seemed baren due to no one else there. all the while the aburame felt this mental body was indeed his own mind within the depths of his own genkutsu and proceeded to study the technique for himself. discovering that this technique needed more or so balence to ensure the control for himself yen thought about a way to ensure control within the genjutsu. yen at this point noted his own raw chakra floating around him and got an idea. "i need techniques within this wide branching technique to ensure this genjutsu remains in my own realm of control. now the real question is what can i do with this?" yen asked himsefl as he felt his chakra drain as he began to experiment with the basics some more.

Yen started by binding his own chakra to the genjutsu and with alot of work and practice yen began to discover that the genjutsu responds in total to his own chakra as he is the castor, molding the genjutsu some more he began to weave his own formula within the genjutsu and his own chakra to activate after 5 illusions are defeated, all the while breakind down a fundemental within this command as yen called it to not only drain thoes within the genjutsu their actions ofver time in a static manner, but to pay in bit and part for the illusions reducing the strain on yen. Within the allowed time yen released himself from the technique as he took a breath and smiled despite feeling the effects of his chakra reduced yen grinned as he discovered that in its develpoment could be tweeked and worked on as he pleased.

the effects began to become more apparent as yen came from creating the genjutsu after tweeking the technique to his liking yen felt that after the move within the genjutsu was created yen smiled as he prepaired a clone again and practiced the technique in its incomplete form noting the cost wasnt as sever but manageble as he got to the fifth clone yen awaited the clone to stike down the illusion as it did moments later and smiling the illusion of yen came into being as yen spoke through the illusion. "eternal back lash!" the clone faced the illusion but began to kneel as it felt its chakra drained as huffed as it broke free from the genjutsu laying still and dissapearing in a puff of smoke. "that is going to hurt if it kept going, im guessing if i did the design correctally that chakra drain would occur ever 3- 5 minutes and depending how much illusions defeated ill pay less to make clones. i can only assume that i can have 4 of these techniques at hand as that drained me quiet alot. but looking beautiful." yen nodded as he proceeded home to rest and write down command ideas.

The next command yen worked on was perhaps a more complex command as it required yens control as the one in control of the genjutsu to in fact empower the genjutsu, yen thought of perhaps a burning sun barring on them but that wouldnt work as well, till yen came up with a ned arena where should he have ben pushed as far as this then they deserve the command to be used. the breaking of the the techniques world and thoes under the effect of the first command would still suffer from it. "the disign of this technique is like im building up something that might infact go rampant, depending on what happens this "dive" command takes a bit but its defintly worth the investment. the technique does alot as it is but still i have to push this technique to its madness" yen said as he focused on making the second platform that would occur on the uttering of the command. while it was easy to make an illusion commands required alot of trial and error as yen gained many headaches and stress from creating such a technique, as it would sap the esscence of all thoes under the genjutsu at a steady rate on top of the overlaying effect of the first command, yen began to feel exuasted as he studied the effects and began to tweek even more of the technique and the command.

Upon sucessful testing of the technique yen felt that his own chakra had in fact increased through his own work and practice he had more time to work within the genjutsu as he proceeded to work further within the genjutsu and noted that to keep himself safe he needed to limit the jutsu power gaining to half the power of then genjutsu and with sweat and exuastion yen after a training session would head home and eat a quiet dinner looking over his notes to ensure he had everything down with the hand seals and meanings embedded within him.

Dawn came to an important day as yen arrived at the halfway point of making the full genjutsu and testing the depths of the genjutsu yen was pleased to find that the genjutsu looked despite not in full parts if it came together it would be a genjutsu to not be reckoned with the grand point he needed to work on was a difficult point of getting one of the more difficult commands that come later and would cost him a lot more chakra then before, however this was not his concern today as yen looked at the clone before him and asked it something. “when you look at my hand do you see the same thing as when you look at my eyes? Today we are going back to the base of this technique and fixing something, this is a genjutsu that should catch about anyone looking at me 20 meters and closer despite where they are wether around me unless under ground or out of range. I need you to test the range as we break out ok” the clone nodded taking note of its orders and went behind yen as he preformed the rat sign and released the wave. It was here that yen released the wave of chakra and the clone noticed the difference. “it is a cone in front of you sir so that would mean that if you are effecting an effect of that caliber may I suggest you take off the ephermal technique where your chakra resonates off itself and those who look fall into the genjutstu, it would do far better.”

The clone made an excellent point as yen listened to it and smiled the resonating chakra aura of ephermal would do far better then the wave as its an genjutsu so leave a misleading effect doe the better effect then a half hearted technique. Yen smiled and nodded as he focused his chakra all over his body and preformed the rat sign. The clone was brought into the genjutsu immediately catching yen off guard as they landed on the platform with the clone releasing itself after 5 clones. Yen nodded with approval in his eyes as the clones input did the trick to optimizing the genjutsu and saving himself more energy. Yen after that session smiled and chuckled as he studied the clones memories and took note of the effect as with this he has the element of surprise on his side as Yen headed home to rest from the day’s training. Yen although with the frustratingly difficult training was beginning to see the whole picture come together as the technique had a horrible strain to it yen was sure that the technique had its risks as he didn’t dive ito the deepr reaches of the genjutsu yet.

Yen began to worry after a practice session a few days later as he felt that the drain did something else to him that was unexpected, similar to the first day of training he blacked out just to wonder what happened as he awoke a few minutes later from the practice drained but alive. “what in the world just happened? Is that what happens when one runs out of chalra while under this? It cant be? It truly is an powerful technique but its also seems to black one out if they run out till their body restores their chakra. Such an effect to getting this made. But where does this effect come from? It cannot just be from the chakra loss. Something must be in the technique!.” Yen immediately rushed home to investigate his notes on the technique and paused his training on the technique as he needed to find the cause of this strange ailment, yet through the countless hours of his notes and scratch outs yen couldn’t find anything as he studied the notes some more now concerned there was some critical factor he over looked.
Yen spent a week going through research as he scanned scrolls from the library on the yen yang element basics and his notes trying to find what It was till the days grew long as yen wrote down the possibilities as he wrote through a theory for the cause of such a technique. Finally yen came to a logical awnser to what happened to him as of also while he woke up for a few days he couldn’t mold chakra half as well either. Yen then theorized that due to the nature and strain of the technique if someone ran out of chakra they must rest in a deep sleep effectively making the body shut down and consciousness shift away leaving the body in an animated state as it rest. In other words a coma of sorts. That also explained why his clones never responded as they vanished for they ran out of chakra from attempting to release themselves and the illusion fighting as for himself whenever yen would run out he realized with a slight pang of fear that he could go into a coma as well with ease.
This realization was kept in mind as yen shook his head and wrote down the effect in his notes as the power was incredible but the risks were also just as great if not greater. Yen nodded his head as he felt his chakra flowing smoothly noting that unless his reserves were greater then the genjutsu was aslo a grand risk. “I would defiantly have to work restraint when using this, not only is this a tech nique that takes a while to use but the drawbacks are sever, still that only means what applies to me applies to them. So I can rest assured that win or lose I gotta give it my all as this is my greatest technique I might ever make. So lets see what I can do. I must make a way to get out of this technique. Somehow I gotta beable to get out myself as this doesn’t bring in typical genjutsu rules but my own means that I have perhaps only two ways out unless I’m killed. If I run out I collaps and this ends, so now comes the hardest part, the escape hatch for myself.”

Yen began to look further into ideas of getting out while still lacking a name for his technique he needed as way to break free although should he release the whole genjutsu he would suffer from the technique use either way. Unless there was a way to push the burden on to someone else which under most cases would be impossible except yen realized that he just had to initiate a chakra link with thoes under the genjutsu and the genjutsu. The trick was already there in front of yen though as the fueling of the genjutsu through their fighting was already initiated and yen smiled because that ability would take the longest to incorporate into the genjutsu due to the complexity but it will be what made the technique what it is all the lies and the confusion of those who dare to make him use the technique would learn to fear the very name of the technique if they were not careful. Yen chuckled as he had already figured the next project and the close to finishing touches of the genjutsu after that was being made.

Yen nodded quietly as he stared up at the night sky exhausted but pleased with his reasoning and results of his training. Yen rested after practicing the hand signs again as he was determined to get the technique down in stone as he had come so far he wasn’t going to back away from a technique without reason. Yen the following days gazed at the notes he had made making corrections and new additions as for he noted the cost of the illusions were in fact to high and perhaps unbalanced yen took a wager to guess as he studied his notes silently but also to the one staring at them they were not expertly made copies of himself. As he noted from his clones experiences yen smiled as with improvement he could make the clones even more convincing with some practice.

Yen the following morning set up another clone for practice on and nodded as the clone was prepared for what to do as yen preformed the handsigns with ease sending the clone within the genjutsu where he prepared to work on the illusionary versions of himself appearances. Speaking through the illusionary self yen asked the clone a question “I will want you to take note of the quality of the illusions we need them top condition.” The clone nodded striking down the illusion as yen focused on a more clearer picture of himself as the illusion reappeard. The clone nodded a responded after circling the illusion verson. “theses look good its just that you must make sure to keep them up to your standard. You’re a specialist in genjutsu so don’t be afraid to make this too perfect” the clone spoke as it struck down the illusion again and yen prepaired another illusion his chakra fluxing as he made another illusion. A smile came from the illusion as he held a thubs up speaking “perfect that’s exactly the way you want it as you are perhaps using less chakra then it is a good thing you can make attention to detail” the clone finished up the following three illusions before releasing itself and dissipating as yen reflected off the results of his recent work. Yen then proceeded to make notes on his next plan to complete the genjutsu and tie up the lose ends of the genjutsu.

“I will need to figure out a safe escape, and a way to make this safe escape more secretive as it will be obvious that im trying to escape early so perhaps the best tactic is to save the escape to the last moment where they have no choice to assume I kill myself making the clones all the while I can escape unscathed and looping them into it all over again without me in it as it will be them fuling it. If that works out I can do as I please and assure that I am safe. Ah it’s a rough risk and odds are against me but I can do it. And no one else is willing to do it me as the creator of this will show the world the power of this genjutsu.”

Yen smiled as he rested and enjoyed the rain he was getting close to finishing the technique and he knew it but the trail was long and difficult yet yen treaded it with confidence and pride of his work and studies. Yen rested back under a tree as the rain fell around him with satisfaction of this work.

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depth of the illusion Empty Re: depth of the illusion

Tue Jun 23, 2015 8:50 pm
despite the discovery of the heavy side effect on himself and perhaps thoes that would fall under the technique yen nearing perhaps the farthest and most challenging part of constructing the genjutsu in the making which perhaps he felt would take the longest time to work over. though at the moment of reflection yen after jotting down some notes and a more complete observation of the side effects despite being calm he felt a strange sensation of fear gnawing at him for his hard work was paying off but the cost was dearly as the jutsu is not one to toy around with especiallly when he realized its nothing he came upon by chance but hard work. the resonating chakra, the holding of the technique, and yet the fear was gnawing at him like he was missing something or perhaps was overlooking a important aspect. " the art of genjutsu is complex but not impossible since it starts with the fundementals at bare but then goes to trick and mislead the senses and mind that they are trapped or in a messed up reality, perhaps a more twisted reality then it is already. as for this genjutsu makes a reality within me and draws them into me." yen stopped writting at that point cold sweat comming down his face as he realized what was missing. "im a fool of course it needs to block out the world as it goes for them its also the same for me" yen calmed himself as he realized that with the technique fundementals it wouldve been easy to do since it was at the start but should he have finished the technique he feared he wouldve had to go back to the start all over again to remake such a technique.

Yen then realized another perhaps even more chilling reality, he couldnt mold chakra as well after the technique ended which also created a sort of block on his genjutsu techniques realizing that the depths of this technique indeed ran a more deeper line then usual techniques he nodded jotting down the important note he needed to keep in mind and study for the technique required more then a deft hand in the making of it but pure dedication to thae art of genjutsu. Yen set down his pen and closed his eyes determining that at its base the technique despite its rules to himself and thoes in it it might need a limitation to what he could do and not do as well. despite the discomfort of his limitation he had to lock himself in the genjutsu wether is susceeded or failed and accept the conciquences. yen let loose a sigh as the technique could endanger him but in the end if the threat was more then the risk he would use it as the deal breaker.

Yen the folling day proceeded to train once again but this time tweeking the genjutsu some more as he placed himself within the technique he noted the progress he had made within the depths of it and smiled but looking within the very fabric of it he noted the light shining through it. cracks from the simple hole in the technique as it would not enable me to keep hold of theoes caught in it till i or they themselves release themselves from the genjutsu. however the desensation of the technique will have to be great enough so that unless they are out of range almost nothing will break them free unless its stronger then I yen thought to himself as he began to inscribe further within the genjutsu even at the depths of it the desensation to sound, taste, smell, feeling, and sight of all else in the outside world placing yen into a errie world of pure silence and yet as he spoke he heard his own voice ecco. the sound was strange as he noted that the plat form and by stepping into the very making of the genjutsu yen saw the much larger platform below it he could take note of the depths were close to endless.

releasing himself and feeling the effect as he was close to his full techniques were almost slashed in half from the loss of power yen smiled as he made the very simple adjustment and rested for a few more hours working on musing a name for the technique. It was alot of work chaotic results for himself and could lead to disator wiithin an instant even when finished. the work was driving one crazy with the ammounto of preperation and notes that had to be taken, the careful calculations and the further straining of the mind body and spirit. it was all a pure chaotic mess for a genjutsu and yet it had a beauty about it that ver few things could match to. pandemodium was quiet a sight within the chaotic mess that few can see and even fewer understand the mad dance of the world they dance within, this technique is madness, sadness, and the embodiment of chaos within the masses of techniques, riddled with tuants and jests that will take the sane away and drive the wise to weep. It is pandemodium when thoes who may survive its bite grow to dread what lies within it when they see my figure if they see my figure again.

Yen let loose a sigh as the name stuck and within the name stood the endless possibilities of his escape from his own technique. the escape had to be cleaver so then what could break him free before he needs to get out? the question seemed to last forever as he thought of the name and the escape and it clicked as he observed a insect breaking out of a web. "if bound by my own shackles i break free of them by my own force of will and test others on their own will. the technique will begin anew when i break free by my own means making thoes unfortunate to be cuaght in its wake ever fear the fact of underestimating me. the name in itself will set me free from the deepest part creating a loop and thoes within it will find themselves in a mad dance for as long as they can stand if they could before collapsing like me at the end."

Yen figured his way home and free and with a smile and renewed strength yen prepaired the technique once more in the working. however the depths of the technichnique known as pandemodium were no easy task as he felt his chakra drain a bit more as he prepaired the stage of his escape. the fact remained that should he had the strength this was a command that required more strength and will then his previous two meaning that should he use it he would need a clue or some sort of warning to enable his timmed escape. this lead yen to come up with a nasty effect on top of his last command by making a third commmand that would drain a large ammounto of chakra from him. yet nothing greater then clones and illusions to take on the work but he needed a way to set about the command. yet he almost hit himself over the head as he knew already the awnser for thoes who needed rest often noted the time of rest was near upon twilight. the incribing was simple as he would then set the command to do a very specific task. create 11 clones of himself that while they may be illusions they each had a special function within them. these clones played the role he needed to escape freely from the genjutsu as each one would when defeated would release a letter into the sky of the genjutsu spelling out the next command.

The inscription was complex as yen could only make three clones within a day of hard work and within that he needed to keep in mind that the commands could only be used after 5 illusions were defeated each time. however through a few days of long wok yen finished the twilight command as he realized that this enabled him to work on the final command before looping it all together in one big swish. The deepest depths of the technique where thoes who would think he would fall at his vain attempt to hold them would find the tables turn in an instant should they have relaxed as yen smiled with a large grin from the progress made. but yen frowned as he noted that the final part was the most challenging as it required not only him releasing the genjutstu but then linking the chakra of others to the genjutsu so they become the fuleling for it.

Yen wrote down more notes on the ideas for the technique final command and noted that he would pay the total of his jutsu with alittle more to set this technique free on him, but since the last bit of chakra payment will infact enable a linkage to the foundation of the genjutsu to thers but since only he would know how to handle the technique unless there was another even better then he was in terms of his control of the technique then he wouldn't have to worry about that part for the technique as he was an interested person of handling genjutsu and dared someone to test his absolution to the technique.

Within the wee morning of what would be the last day of the technique before tieng down the ends and the art of it yen would smile with grand joy and triumpth as he headed to the training grounds preforming the handsigns that became the only freind durring his isolation training and set upon work on the genjutsu. the massive technique required him to traverse between the two levels of the platforms and prepair as he began to inscribe the last command within the genjutsu. pandemodium what this name means here is the freedom of the user and the imprisonment of thoes who defy him, the torment of locking in the endless battle till they free themselves from their hapless battle or fall trying to battle their way out of the fight, the conditions have been set and the rules written only for thoes who dare follow the path of the scholars as genjutsu can truely beat me at my own game. this is my work and my own work as a genjutsu expert and it may seem simple to some but this was true hell as it was work beyond work. yet within it i am the dreamer and thoes who come towards me will only become a dream fighting if they dare, or turn away at my words as i could talk them down should i not need to fight

Yen thought to himself as he began to inscribe the last command working the linkage of chakra as he would utter the words and feeling his chakra drain an incrediable ammount as he felt himself release as he muttered the word pandemodium, the air met his face as yen felt the diffrence, he wasnt drained as he was before and felt that his chakra was still powerful despite the lacking ammount of chakra within him from working the last command and linking it to the start of the genjutsu creating a loop of sorts that kept thoes in the genjutsu at the mercy of the genjutsu as they would fight what was inscribed by his own chakra as his illusions till they pay the price to over come the powerful technique. yen let loose a sigh as he had not felt in a long while that feeling of his power cut in half and reduction of his techniques for a while. it actually felt great to be this free. Now yen felt that there was only one test to be done. To finally see the effects with the genjutsu tied up in whole.

Yen took a day to rest as he was pleased with his results and smiled as he walked back to the training grounds taking a few minutes to get to setting the genjutsu down in stone as a technique. Within the parameters yen linked it all down and felt a strange sensation as the genjutsu in whole had a rather simple appearance but then it was more in-depth to the eye of thoes who knew genjutsu. Yen smiled and patted himself on the back as he linked it all together with his hand signs an rather simple task and one that made him pleased to make such a powerful technique before leaving the mysterious area where he worked his genjutsu within the depths of his mind to the real world. Yen then realized this area was locked from him as he thought back to it and smiled as he rested to the lack of power and chakra noting that despite the techniques taxing cost it went well together. Finally after a few hours of rest yen feeling his strength had returned made a shadow clone which smiled and nodded as it was going to be the last test in making the genjutsu.

Yen wove the handsigns and smiled as he set his chakra around him as the familiar blinding light enveloped him and the clone as he had a nice view of the clone. He was everywhere at once to his pleasure as he created an illusion of himself a splitting image and the clone nodded with approval as it prepaired a water whip, yen used the chakra of the illusion to make a water whip and noted the speed and strength of the clone was much like that of a water clone as the clone and yens illusion clashed the clone struck down the illusion and yen smiled mentally as the clone reacted to the chakra loss and created another one, the clash between illusion and clone continued as yen finished making the fifth clone he murmured “eternal payback” to his satisfaction a creepy whisper went around the arena and the clone spammed as it cost its chakra for the fighting as it continued to fight on against yens illusions.

Yen taking note of the chakra loss as he made it to making 10 illusions and as the clone had looked exhausted as the effects of the first command hit it again and yen smiled noting that the cost of his illusions had reduced for within that first command yen felt that a small reduction that took effect overtime now reducing his cost of his clones by half. Yen murmured the second command as it took effect breaking the platform apart and sending the clone down to the second platform which shone brightly as the clone landed. The clone winced and shook its head as it felt its chakra being continually drained yet yen nodded as sweat fell down his forehead in the real world, this part increased his chakra payment but yen sighed knowing that if he hadn’t trained this hard he wouldn’t have reached this point. The clone kneeled as it began to strike at the illusion once again clearly exhausted by the draining of the chakra and yen smiled as he noted that the clone had given up releasing the genjutsu but poofing within the genjutsu as it payed for the illusion it had defeated as well leaving yen heavily drained of his reserves but with a big smile as it succeeded and the effects were noted. He had made the technique work and by the reaction of the clone and the information the second platform was a heavy hitter as it worked as intended with the draining and the cost increase as of the logic of the technique. Yen then took notice of the observations of the clone and smiled as he laid back down on the grass exhausted but pleased.

“A great success as pandemonium was a success and did as all the hard work payed off for this is going to be monstrous. But not for the safety of my technique and all of its works I must get rid of the notes as the greatest weapon is the illusion of the technique the deception of this technique and fact I can lie to those who witness it and see this must not be able to break free and I fear for my allies as this seems to be beyond my control on how it hits so for my safety and theirs I must warn them to stay away from me when I preform the technique.” Yen sat up as the wind blew around him and feeling the effects of his chakra power reduced yen smiled reflecting on the accomplishments for the technique. The work he made and the notes he made on the technique were numerous but helped him map his way to his success and increase the power and amount of chakra to use the technique, to working on the chakra reaction that activates the genjutsu. The madness of working on the interworks of the genjutsu from the long audition work of the commands and their effects these effects kept yen busy for the long periods of time. These thoughts yen thought of as he approached home to his notes where he ripped them and burned them with the technique down in his memory.

Still what perplexed yen was the dreadful cost of unbalancing the basic formula of such techniques and yet there was a way to balance them out and keep them in check. This was the thought that kept him at constant work as he realized that he went on a sort of madness that as he worked continuously on the pandemodium the amount of effort and work in the technique was finally catching up to him as he felt his exuastion finally catch up to him with all of the effort he put into making his own technique. He made it all from scratch and a very complex technique as well. “this move was difficult to make perhaps one of the hardest moves I have ever made but nevertheless it was done and now to rest from the hard work.” Yen spoke as he finished his meal and got rid of the last of his notes before laying down and resting a grand rest that he has not had for may weeks due to all of the hard work he had done and made. Still within his sleep his world of illusions existed as he traveled the very basis of his technique and the difficult weaving and illusion creating all within him. It all clicked into a madness that one must be weary of for the weaving and inscribing of the technique calls to thoes who can read the very foundation of illusions. Ones who can break apart a genjutsu like thoes who can do the same for seals. It is this technique that determines those who can follow the rules and oblige and thoes who do not follow the rules and get lost. For that is pandemonium a chaos that directs within the very order of things, that which yen had only taken a glimpse of and dove head first into the madness with a trick up his sleeve.

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depth of the illusion Empty Re: depth of the illusion

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