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- Kawahaga NikuCitizen
- Ryo : 500
The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:37 am
{Enter dimension}
517/1k
Kenai would stand before the man "Fine..Have more..just make me remember!" Kenai would yell. The creature would smirk. Kenai would become disoriented and fall to the ground "What..." the man would smile "Oh thank you for the cells. what about the body too..ill feel great if you could lend it to me? Whats that? Yes?..Why thank you.." Kenai would feel nothing, His body being taken over by the man
{EXIT DIMENSION}
Kenai would have pure black eyes. The being controlling the body and breaking stuff in the house
{Enter dimension}
"What are you doing!" Kenai would stand up, Limping and holding a kunai "Just taking what is mine..Luckily you said i could have it..Just let me take over..It will be quick and easy..No fuss. Let me play around..Boy" Kenai would squint his eyes "What are...You!?"...Kenai would throw a kunai. It entering the creatures shoulder and it yelling "YOU PUNY LITTLE RAT.." it would yell, Knocking kenai back with great force "Dare you touch me..Your eye?!" Kenai would slowly get back up. "Leave my body alone..Its mine from birth.."
{Exit dimension}
"What is going on with me..Im just GRAH...Breaking everything i have..."
717/1k
{Only 170 in dimension words, please fix counter.} -Viper Uchiha
517/1k
Kenai would stand before the man "Fine..Have more..just make me remember!" Kenai would yell. The creature would smirk. Kenai would become disoriented and fall to the ground "What..." the man would smile "Oh thank you for the cells. what about the body too..ill feel great if you could lend it to me? Whats that? Yes?..Why thank you.." Kenai would feel nothing, His body being taken over by the man
{EXIT DIMENSION}
Kenai would have pure black eyes. The being controlling the body and breaking stuff in the house
{Enter dimension}
"What are you doing!" Kenai would stand up, Limping and holding a kunai "Just taking what is mine..Luckily you said i could have it..Just let me take over..It will be quick and easy..No fuss. Let me play around..Boy" Kenai would squint his eyes "What are...You!?"...Kenai would throw a kunai. It entering the creatures shoulder and it yelling "YOU PUNY LITTLE RAT.." it would yell, Knocking kenai back with great force "Dare you touch me..Your eye?!" Kenai would slowly get back up. "Leave my body alone..Its mine from birth.."
{Exit dimension}
"What is going on with me..Im just GRAH...Breaking everything i have..."
717/1k
{Only 170 in dimension words, please fix counter.} -Viper Uchiha
- Echo UchihaCitizen
- Ryo : 49110
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:03 am
The Anbu operatives positioned outside alert the Anbu Captain of the disturbance and he arrives on the scene after five minutes in his full Anbu gear. Forming a cross seal with his hands he creates two Shadow Clones and one Explosion clone, The explosion clones walks inside as the rest leap backwards hiding fifteen feet from the position of the boys home, The clone speaks "Kenai-Chuunin..? Are you well?" He asks the Anbu Captain tilting his head to the left as he shuts the door behind him he notes the disheveled appearance of the home while walking forward slowly.
- Kawahaga NikuCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:11 am
Kenai would slam his palm on his face, "Restrain my body..I can handle this..im slowly learning.."
{ENTER DIMENSION}
"You know i cant let you eat me..Right?" Kenai would say toward the creature, It knocking him back to the ground. Kenai would begin to bleed a black blood. In the dimension and out of it. Kenai would place his palm on the mans face "I told you..i cant let you eat me..i have to become the yellow flash" Kenai would say, Smashing the enemy back. What was this...He felt stronger now....A new feeling "GET READY..YOUR MY BODY YOU LITTLE RAT..!"
+100
817
{Only 87 words, please fix word count.} -Viper Uchiha
{ENTER DIMENSION}
"You know i cant let you eat me..Right?" Kenai would say toward the creature, It knocking him back to the ground. Kenai would begin to bleed a black blood. In the dimension and out of it. Kenai would place his palm on the mans face "I told you..i cant let you eat me..i have to become the yellow flash" Kenai would say, Smashing the enemy back. What was this...He felt stronger now....A new feeling "GET READY..YOUR MY BODY YOU LITTLE RAT..!"
+100
817
{Only 87 words, please fix word count.} -Viper Uchiha
- Echo UchihaCitizen
- Ryo : 49110
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:19 am
The clone hears this and nods before Body flickering forward using the momentum of the speed to flip over the boy his right hand sliding into the pouch on his left hip sliding out three Senbon in-between his index, middle, ring and pinkey fingers and using the angles and the curving downward of his fingers he ram the senbon into the center of his back his right hand gripping the boys shoulder hitting several pressure points in the body making him go limp "Good kid, Keep it up" The clone slides him over to the bed and plops him down face down the clone running out the door gesturing to the other clones to check up on the kid before it body flickers high into the sky and explodes to negate any damage done to the village. The real Echo turns towards his Anbu operative Parrot and says "Get the Hokage." before he himself enters the building to check on the kid Echo getting the prior memories from the blown up clone "Hey kid gonna get some help just stay paralyzed....seriously..." Echo says a bit jokingly...then again he's seen some strange things in his days as Anbu Captain
- Kawahaga NikuCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:27 am
[EXIT DIMENSION]
The monster would speak from the controlled body "LET ME GO YOU DAMN RATS...!"
[enter dimension]
Kenai would slam his fist yet again on the creature "I have too much to live for to die..You got that!?" kenai would kick the creature "Oh..So you continue living knowing that you werent the one attempting to save those great little teammembers years ago..Yeah, You werent fighting enemy shinobi..You were attacking them. Brutally murdering them and then crying back at home "They killed them!" Oh...So cute!"... "Or how when you were born, You bit down on your parents and they laughed. But then you began to rip them to shreds! Oh That was even better!" "SHUTUP..What do you mean...I ....YOU!" Kenai would lift his hand. Throwing it to the creatures face and hitting it back.
Kenai would lift his hand and leap onto the man Hitting it at full force until slowly from behind " Slowly but surely, Kenai would regain his control but would continue the fight. Kenai would throw the kunai to the gut of the enemy, It slicing through quickly. While kenai would then activated bodyflicker. Grabbing the kunai from its hilt and spinning it. He would run forward and slice to the back. Knocking the enemy forward while he slid to the right. Then using the kunai to cut the enemies wrist. He would also begin to leap over the enemy, Stabbing to kunai into the chest. Pulling them out. And using them both in both hands to cut the sides.
[EXIT DIMENSION]
He would say "You can free me now..I think i have an idea of what is going on.."
300 words + 714
=1k Words, Mastery of eye of screams activated
The monster would speak from the controlled body "LET ME GO YOU DAMN RATS...!"
[enter dimension]
Kenai would slam his fist yet again on the creature "I have too much to live for to die..You got that!?" kenai would kick the creature "Oh..So you continue living knowing that you werent the one attempting to save those great little teammembers years ago..Yeah, You werent fighting enemy shinobi..You were attacking them. Brutally murdering them and then crying back at home "They killed them!" Oh...So cute!"... "Or how when you were born, You bit down on your parents and they laughed. But then you began to rip them to shreds! Oh That was even better!" "SHUTUP..What do you mean...I ....YOU!" Kenai would lift his hand. Throwing it to the creatures face and hitting it back.
Kenai would lift his hand and leap onto the man Hitting it at full force until slowly from behind " Slowly but surely, Kenai would regain his control but would continue the fight. Kenai would throw the kunai to the gut of the enemy, It slicing through quickly. While kenai would then activated bodyflicker. Grabbing the kunai from its hilt and spinning it. He would run forward and slice to the back. Knocking the enemy forward while he slid to the right. Then using the kunai to cut the enemies wrist. He would also begin to leap over the enemy, Stabbing to kunai into the chest. Pulling them out. And using them both in both hands to cut the sides.
[EXIT DIMENSION]
He would say "You can free me now..I think i have an idea of what is going on.."
300 words + 714
=1k Words, Mastery of eye of screams activated
- Echo UchihaCitizen
- Ryo : 49110
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:43 am
Echo watches this occur for a bit and listens to the boy asking for Echo to let him up "Yeah...I don't think so" He states " I want an explanation...everything that happened just now...and don't leave out any details...or you'll be spending the night in T&I..." the Anbu Captain is not amused by this display and wants to make sure his village is safe from a possible threat.
- Kawahaga NikuCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:46 am
"Id honestly like it better if i talked with viper..Somewhere private, Since you know..Hes the only current one i make real contact with..if you get my drift" Kenai would say. Sighing.
- UchihaLegendCitizen
- Ryo : 33200
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:47 am
The Anbu operative Parrot reaches the Hokage chambers, Viper receives the Intel and rushes to the scene, he mumbles to himself,"Damn it kid, what are you doing!" Viper reaches the destination, he notes Echo's clones standing guard, he hears the commotion coming from inside, his iris turns scarlet, three tomoes forming within his eyes, he proceeds with caution as he enters the house to view what is going on.
{Approved Eye Mastery.}
{Approved Eye Mastery.}
- Kawahaga NikuCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Forbidden {P NKILL}
Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:51 am
"Hey viper..i learned a little about my past..Still unclear, But..I cant exactly talk with all these ANBU here..You get my drift.." Kenai would say, Frowning at all the people standing here. "And all my milk is gone too..Even though it was rotten.."
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