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- Kochou NagatoCitizen
- Ryo : 500
The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:56 am
(word for word sis)
Kochou ran through the dark forest. She had sent a letter to Primrose Uchiha to meet her. Kochou had ran away from the people holding her captive. Prim had promised her she would rescue her. Kochou sensed the people behind her chasing her, when they let her go it was apparently a set up. Kochou didn't know what to do, if Prim came out to her, they would kill Prim for trying to help her. Kochou had to run as fast as she could, if Primrose died it would be her fault! Tears streamed down Kochous cheek. "Primmy please don't meet me. Please!" Kochou cried and ran!
Kochou ran through the dark forest. She had sent a letter to Primrose Uchiha to meet her. Kochou had ran away from the people holding her captive. Prim had promised her she would rescue her. Kochou sensed the people behind her chasing her, when they let her go it was apparently a set up. Kochou didn't know what to do, if Prim came out to her, they would kill Prim for trying to help her. Kochou had to run as fast as she could, if Primrose died it would be her fault! Tears streamed down Kochous cheek. "Primmy please don't meet me. Please!" Kochou cried and ran!
- Primrose UchihaChunin
- Stat Page : Primmys Stats
Mission Record : Prims Missions
Clan Focus : EMS
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 12000
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 3:28 am
(I wasnt finished with it yet though, I was going to go over it with Viper and Navi and Echo to see if they wanted to join and invite people they new to! But okies if you want to use it to invite yourself to my story we can.)
Primmy threw a cloak on and walked into the kitchen. She left a note saying she should be back in 15 minutes. She ran out the front door and headed to the forest to meet Kochou. She turned on her sharingan eyes so she could see where Kochou might. "Kochou I have a bad feeling about this little girl, I have to find you and get back quickly." Prim said to herself. She was going to take Kochou to the building she use to sleep in. The lightning in the distance said a storm was coming. Primmy took this as a bad sign and picked up her speed.
She ran into the forest "Kochou? where are you, I don't even see you." Primmy said going farther into the forest. "Kochou?" Suddenly out of nowhere a knife hits Primmy in the shoulder knocking her down. "Damn, you have to be kidding me," Prim said pulling it out. "Why is it always me, out of everyone I have the bad luck." She complained as she stood up. "Fuck, I am bleeding!" she said noticing the blood running down her shoulder and her arm. "Fuck!" Prim said again in pain. She notices so eone running towards her. "KOchou!"
Primmy threw a cloak on and walked into the kitchen. She left a note saying she should be back in 15 minutes. She ran out the front door and headed to the forest to meet Kochou. She turned on her sharingan eyes so she could see where Kochou might. "Kochou I have a bad feeling about this little girl, I have to find you and get back quickly." Prim said to herself. She was going to take Kochou to the building she use to sleep in. The lightning in the distance said a storm was coming. Primmy took this as a bad sign and picked up her speed.
She ran into the forest "Kochou? where are you, I don't even see you." Primmy said going farther into the forest. "Kochou?" Suddenly out of nowhere a knife hits Primmy in the shoulder knocking her down. "Damn, you have to be kidding me," Prim said pulling it out. "Why is it always me, out of everyone I have the bad luck." She complained as she stood up. "Fuck, I am bleeding!" she said noticing the blood running down her shoulder and her arm. "Fuck!" Prim said again in pain. She notices so eone running towards her. "KOchou!"
- Kochou NagatoCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 3:57 am
"Prim no!" Kochou screamed as she ran to Prim who was hurt. Kochou still had tears straking down her cheeks. "Prim! I'm sorry, they are going to kill you! Lets go!" Kochou grabbed her hand and began to pull her. She turned around and noticed that there were more knives coming at them! "This is my fault, I'm sorry Prim, I'm sorry!" Kochou cried as she ctried to run with Prim! Kochou knew she shouldn't have sent the message, she knew what happened was to easy, there was no way she would have escaped. It was all a set up and Prim was going to die.
- NaviCitizen
- Ryo : 55500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:03 am
The sun was down and a storm was brewing, an ominous sign to mark the rise of a half moon. Dark clouds blew over the forest as Navi walked a dirt path. A small patter of rain began to fall on him and Navi looked up into the sky, seeing thunder clouds flash in the distance. Navi had no missions, but was still tasked with patroling the forest and village for suspicious activity constantly as a leaf ANBU.
"Kochou!"
Navi heard it nearby, but the sound of rain and thunder was muffling the voice, it would take some time for him to locate where it was coming from. Navi began listening closely, and slowly moving towards where he heard it from. There were other voices, but it would take some time to track them.
"Kochou!"
Navi heard it nearby, but the sound of rain and thunder was muffling the voice, it would take some time for him to locate where it was coming from. Navi began listening closely, and slowly moving towards where he heard it from. There were other voices, but it would take some time to track them.
- Primrose UchihaChunin
- Stat Page : Primmys Stats
Mission Record : Prims Missions
Clan Focus : EMS
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 12000
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:15 am
Primmy acted on instant reflexes pushing Kochou one way and then moving backwards only to get hit in the leg and hand. Prim screamed and went down. "Fuck...Kochou, go get away now...they want to kill me not you..." Primmy was in severe pain and could barely move. Three stab wounds and she was alive. She looked towards the area where the knives were coming from, she still couldn't see anyone but she knew they were there. "What the hell..." Prim said trying to move.
- Kochou NagatoCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:28 am
"Prim!" Kochou cried again! "This is all my fault, what do I do?" Kochou added, as she looked off in the distance, the storm was right above them now! Prim was going to die if she didn't do something, there was blood on the ground by Prim and she knew that the enemy was all around them in the forest, or at least nearby. If she called for help they would both die immediately. If she left Prim would die, if she stayed Prim would die! "No, no,no!" KOchou said bending by Prim. "I am not leaving you." Kochou said hugging Prim, Prims blood was now on her but she didn't care.
- NaviCitizen
- Ryo : 55500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:30 am
Navi heard a yell or a scream, and realized he had to be close, within 50 meters at least. Someone was being attacked or hurt, and he would be there in another minute or so, he could only hope that he wouldn't be too late.
Navi opened a holster attached to his thigh and drew a kunai, spinning it on his finger and holding it tightly. He would arrive on the scene in only a few moments.
Navi opened a holster attached to his thigh and drew a kunai, spinning it on his finger and holding it tightly. He would arrive on the scene in only a few moments.
- Primrose UchihaChunin
- Stat Page : Primmys Stats
Mission Record : Prims Missions
Clan Focus : EMS
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 12000
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 4:39 am
As Primmy laid on the ground she could suddenly feel Kochou holding her. "I'm still alive you know! I am in pain...but alive." She said looking at Kochou. "You have to leave, if you stay they will kill you to. For the last time, they want me dead not you." Suddenly Primmy felt light headed and really tired. "Kochou, I don't feel so well." Primmy said. I guess I was just stabbed in various places, it really isn't going to feel good, way to go me! She said to herself.
- NaviCitizen
- Ryo : 55500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 5:11 am
Navi opened his eyes, and his special dojutsu activated, combining his sharingan/byakugan power to see nearby chakra. There were multiple people closeby, and there was most certainly a battle or attack of some sort going on. Navi was not one to rush in though, especially when he didn't know the circumstances or identity of his enemies. Clutching his kunai knife close, Navi leapt up onto a thick branch high into the trees, then began bounding forward, going from branch to branch towards the sounds origin. Navi had to move slowly to maintain complete silence. Navi was so close he could hear regular voices, but couldn't quite make out what they were saying because of the rain and thunder.
Navi landed gracefully on the last branch, looking down into the small clearing and saw...
Navi landed gracefully on the last branch, looking down into the small clearing and saw...
- Kochou NagatoCitizen
- Ryo : 500
Re: The Beginning {Invite Only, NoKill and Private}
Sun Sep 09, 2012 5:50 am
"Prim, are you ok?" Kochou said. She could feel her breathing and new she was alive. "This is all my fault, you shouldn't have come out to meet me. Please stay alive, don't die." Kochou said holding her and looking back towards the woods. The light drizzle of rain added to her sadness, Prim looked so pale and dead, despite her breathing. She could see Prims eyes flinching. In the flashes of lightening, she could see the deep stab wounds. "Prim, I love you, you can't die, you are the only one who has ever cared about me." Kochou said crying and layin on her.
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